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MuKaLma...! - imported_naz - 05-31-2006
kuch din hoye Farhat Abbas Shah ki collection parhi "wo kehti thi"
bey hadh khoobsurat lagi iska aik shair .....
Mein bola 'kiya kabhi dojey kisi ka dard jhela hey ?
Wo meri baat sey chonki'magar boli nahi kuch bhe' @};-
ye shair mujhey bohat acha laga iski base par
main ney bhi aik nakam si koshish ki hey kuch likhney
ki shayad pasand aaye ...
~*MukalmA*~
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Main kehti thi mujhey tootey siTarey Aazmatey hain
Wo kehta tha nahi aksar sAharey Aazmatey hain @};-
Main kehti thi koi sEhrA sulagtA hey merey andar
Wo kehta tha koi dAriyA bilaktA hey merey andar @};-
Main kehti thi mujhey dariyA kinArEy yaad rehtey hain
Wo kehta tha mujhey sulgEy shArArEy yaad rehtey hain @};-
Main kehti thi chalo rishton ki girAh khol deytey hain
Wo kehta tha key Aankhon main sAmandAr ghol deytey hain @};-
Main kehti thi kahani main koi kirdar baqi hey ?
Wo kehta tha mehz ik khaub ka Angaar baqi hey @};-
Main kehti thi main khaubon ka koi unwAn kia rakhon
Wo kehta tha issey tum zaat ka zindAn keh deyna @};-
Main kehti thi key merey baad kesey saanss leytey ho
Wo bola khAr sa seeney ko chou kar toot jata hey @};-
Main kehti thi mujhey kuch pal to khudh main saanss leyney do
Wo kehta tha key jAnaA
MuKaLma...! - imported_Kinza...! - 07-02-2006
Bohat khub..................
MuKaLma...! - ~*AaRzOo*~ - 07-02-2006
Bht Zaberdast ..
MuKaLma...! - imported_Tahir - 07-02-2006
=D> nice poetry kanwal
MuKaLma...! - m4mani - 07-04-2006
wah wah wah..............bohat achaa likhaa aap nay.............keep sharing
MuKaLma...! - Haya n - 12-19-2006
+) Aap Nay Kaisay Kaih Diya Kay Aap Nay Nakaam Koshish Ki Hay +)....Mujhay Aap Ka Likha Bouhat Pasand Aaya..Bouhat Hi Umdagi Say Aap Nay Likha Hay....Aap Nay Yeh Poet Club Mai'n Share Kiyu'n Nahi Kiya? Bouhat Si Daad Mairi Taraf Say Qubool Kijiye...Aap Ka '' Mukalma '' Mujhay Bouhat Pasand Aaya...+)
MuKaLma...! - Banjara - 10-01-2010
kia lay hai
kia ridham hai lgay hai jese samnay beth k batian ho rai hain
wha wah
mgr akhiri sher namukaml hai
great written