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This is a discussion on zindagi ka safar within the Urdu Writer's Club forums, part of the Urdu Adab category; main chalti rahi .....chalti rhi......chalti rhi jeb main apne bachpan ke nezdeek se guzri to khail kood...masoom shararteen khoobsorat lemhay ...
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| main chalti rahi .....chalti rhi......chalti rhi jeb main apne bachpan ke nezdeek se guzri to khail kood...masoom shararteen khoobsorat lemhay befikri ke dinn sabb ne mujhay rokna chaha.woh sab kuch itna koobsurat tha ke main ne khud bhi rukna chaha lekin main na ruk sakimain ne chaha ke itni dhar sari cheez main se kuch to le chalon lekin mere hath kuch na aaya. lehaza main chalti rhi...chalti rhi...yaha tek ke main apni jawani ke nezdeek se guzri.yaha pohonch ker mujhay mehsos hoa ke main is dunya main khushyan sametne ke lie bhaji gai honn.yaha herr taraf khushoen bikhri hoin thin.rang hi rang muhabbat ke rang dosti ke rang wafaon ke rang.kitabon baaton our kehkaon ki khushbo.yah sabb kuch mujhay bachpan se bhi zyaba acha laga. roshni ke rangon our kehkaon ki khushbo ke memre kann main shargoshi ki"yahi sabb kuch hai yaha ruk jao sabb kuch pa lo gi"mujhay ye shargoshi hakiket malom hoi our mera dill khushi se jhoom utha.main ne yahi rukne ka faisla ker lia magar main to safar main thi,na ruk saki in lemhon ne mera hath thaam liaour main ne rukne ki behed koshish ki lekin na ruk saki our main chalti rhi....... chalti rhi...chalti rhi yaha tek ke main apni adhaer umri tek pohonch gai.yaha per kuch bhi khosurat na tha.na bachpan jesi befikri,na jawani jesi khushyan.main yaha rukna nahi chahti thi lekin main thehr gai waqt ahista ahista guzarne laga.main chalna chahti thi magar mujhay gor-o-fiker kerna para'main gamon se khushyan kasheed kerna chahti thi magar mujhay apne faraiz ada kerne pare. our main chalti rhi...chalti rhi ...chalti rhi....lekin ab main ahista ahista chal rhi thi.chalte chalte main ne apne hathon ki janib deekha .........bilkul khali. soch our gor-o-fiker ki muselsel aadet ne mujhay sochne ka aadi bana dia tha lehaza main ne aadaten sochna shuro ker dia ke mere hath khali kion hain.main ne apne peechae nighah dhorai......sare safer main mainne apne sath kuch bhi to nahi lia tha to kia ab bhi mere hath khali na hote? main aah bher ker aager chal pari... "ruko"kisi ne mujhay aawaz di ..main ne peechae mur ke deekha koi nahi tha daaen baaen aage koi bhi to nahi hai main burburai our phir chal pari. "ruko"aawaz phir ubhri is barr aawaz main pehle se ayada shiddet thi ..main ruk gai "yaha se aage khali hath met jana werna pechtao gi"nasihet ki gai.. "mager yaha to gamon our pareshaniyon ke siwa kuch bhi nahi"...main ne apni teshwish ka izhar kiya! goor se deeko !ek tum hi pareshan hall nahi ho tumhare ird gird log hi log hain,pareshaniyan hi pareshaniyan hain,'gem hi gem' gazabnak awaz phir ubhri! "main yaha se kiya le ker jaon mere hath to gamon se bher jaen ge"lena" lena, lena,tumhari soch is "lena"se age kiu nahi jatidena"dena seekho khushyan banto,pareshan halon ki maded karo dosron ke gum ko apna gum semjon our apne gum ko sifr apna.phir deekhna tumhara hath to kia tumhara damen bhi khushyon se bher jaey ga. her taraf roshni hi roshni phail gai,hidayat ki roshni,main is roshni main chalti rhi khushyan bantti,dukh door kerti ,anso phochti,kehke nichawer kerti.....chalti rhi....chalti rhi...chalti rhi.... yaha tek ke main apne burhape ke nezdeekh pohonch gai.ab main kuch deer aram kerna chahti thilekin waqt bohut kem th,main kuch deer ko bath gai,main ne apne hathon or daman ki janib deekha yeh bhare hoey thaey.main mutmaen ho gai main ne peechae mer ke deekha or boli. mera bachpan our jawani jo mahayat keemti thae befaiz hi guzar gae or udhair umri main mujhay tumhari pookar sumai di kash tum mujhay pehle hi awaz de deteto aj mere pas is se bohut kuch hota jo mere pas hai. wohi awaz phir ubhri.. huh!main ne to tumhai pukara tha,na sirf bachpan our jawani ki serhadon per belke kadem kadem per...mager tum...tumahi meri pukar kaha sunai deti...tum ne to safer ko "menzil" semjh liya tha halaketum muselsel safer main thi..kahi bhi to nahi ruki thi..our jeb bohut sa safer te ho gaya to tumhai apne khali daman ka ehsas hoa isi waqt tumhai meri "pukar" sunai di.ke baat to ehsas hi ki hoti haiwerna pukar to kadem kadem per har ek ke sath hoti haiour yeh our baat hai ke kis ko keb sunai de jaeyour bohut so ko to safer ke aakhir tek koi pukar sunai hi nahi detikahi bhi nahi...yeh tumhari khushkismati hai ke tumhai ehsas ho gayawerna tum bhi pechtane walon main se hoten awaz ana band ho gai main chal pari khushyan bantti faraiz nibhati chalti rhi....chalti rhi..... chalti rhi.......our bilhakhir mera safer ikhtatam pazeer hoa. main apne saraey main utri is umeed ke sathke jo kuch main ne apne safer main hasil kiyawoh meri mai zindagi ko khushgawar banane main madadgar sabit ho ga. lekin mera dil chahta hai ke main nae "musafiron" ke liye "pukaar" ban ke un ki rehenmai karon take woh apne tamam safer main, har mor per kuch na kuch le ker aage berhaen. our un ke pas woh bhi ho jo main apne sath lai our woh bhi jo maon apni gaflat our nadani ke bais wahi chor aai.
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| /welcome1 aik bauhat hi khubsurat aur purasar tehreer likhi hai aap nai .....hum askar khud mein hi gum ho kar apnai ird gird sai bekhabar ho jatai hian kai cheezain faramosh kar daitai hain...zindagi kai safar mein jo pachtawai lai kar sath chalai usai kuch hasil nahi aur jo zindagi lai kar sath chalai us ka safar to kamaz kam asaan ho jata hai ..... khush rahiyai /rose
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| bohat acha likha hai /rose
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