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RulesThis is a discussion on ~%...Zaaviye...%~ within the Urdu Writer's Club forums, part of the Urdu Adab category; @};- @};- @};- @};- @};- @};- ~*...Zaaviye...*~ bey rabt aur adhoori baton ka bhi aik hussn hota hey....aik gehrayee hoti ...
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01-05-2006, 05:42 PM
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@};- @};- @};-  @};- @};- @};-~*...Zaaviye...*~ bey rabt aur adhoori baton ka bhi aik hussn hota hey....aik gehrayee hoti hey aik thehraou hota hey.... Aik majzoob shakhs k labon sey jazb k aalam main ada honey waley adhoorey bey tarteeb alfaz....magar bohat ba maeney ,wo aik hi shey ko mukhtalif zaaviyon sey dekhta tha....uskey kahey hoye har agley lafz main shidat aur manviyat barhti jati thi...bil aakhir aakhiri bat uski mukmal aur shdeed hoti thi... (sehra main betha ungliyon sey rait par aankhain banatey aur mitatey hoye hoye....) Aankhain.... gehri aankhain..... gehri soch wali aankhaiN..... gehri soch main gum sum aankhain.... gehri soch main gum sum *uski* aankhain....!!! (aankhon sey aik aansoo ka qatra ungli ki poron pey ley k taktey hoye....) Ik lamha... dard ka ik lamha.... uss key dard ka ik lamha.... tanhayee main uss k dard ka ik lamha... tanhayee main uss key dard ka ik *rayeegaaN* lamha...!!! (aik jhulsey hoye pair k taney sey taik lagaye aasmaaN ko taktey hoye...) baarish... dheemi dheemi barish.... sehraoun pey dheemi dheemi baarish.... jaltye baltey sehroaun pey dheemi dheemi baarish.... *hijrr* k jaltey baltey sehraoun pey dheemi dheemi baarish....!! (aik tooti choori ka tukra hatheli par rakh kar dekhtey hoye...) mohabat.... sachi mohabat... dil main sachi mohabat.... merey dil main sachi mohabat.... merey dil main *usski* sachi mohabat....!! (Falak sey tootey aik taarey ko dekhtey hoye...) judayee.... ummr bhar ki judayee.... uss sey ummr bhar ki judayee.... meri uss sey ummr bhar ki judayee..... meri uss sey ummr bhar ki *bey sabab* judayee...!!
__________________ Kuch Aansoo Kuch KhushiyaaN Dey Kar Taal Gaya Jeevan Ka Ik Aur Sunehra Saal Gaya ...!! Meri Zaat Zarra E Bey NishaaN Mera Ishq Naghma E Bey Nawa Last edited by Kanwal; 01-06-2006 at 08:57 AM.                  |
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01-05-2006, 05:57 PM
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haan kanwal kabhi kabhi berabt si ankahi baatain khud mein aik aisi gehrai liyai huwai hoti hain jis ka koi hisaab nahi milta..agar koi samajh sakai to samajh jai warna ... zaviyai tum nai mujhe parhai thi mujhe yaad hai aur aik baar phir isai yahan parh kar bauhat hi acha laga khud mein aik bauhat mukammal tehreer hai chahai batain berabt si hain  bauhat khush raho tum ameen sum ameen  
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01-05-2006, 10:37 PM
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wahhhhh... dekha jaye to eik unkahi hai .. aur socha jaye to kya na kahi gayee hai .. Tehreer ki khoobi mein izafay ka bayas her zawaiye ko beyan kerti wo pehli mukhtasar satar rahi jo uss ik khaas manzir aur shidat ka ahata kerti thi .. bunayadi tor per adhoray alfaaz main likhi gayee eik mukamal tehreer hai .. Bohat si daad qabool kijiye..Bohat Shukria.. @};- Aap ka naam iss baar adhoora laga.. @};- wafa aur dua ke saath withlove @};-
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01-06-2006, 04:40 AM
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mujhay samjh nai aa raha kin elfaz main aur kaisay aap ki tehreer ki tareef karoon... 1.gif ")1") bohat khobsorat likha hai kanwal.....la jawab tehreer hai.....@};-
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01-06-2006, 08:16 AM
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Aik arsa'e taweel baad jaab apki nai tehreer ayi to chehray par ek muskarahat layi kay intazar raigaan nahi gia (flower4u) Adhoori baatain, wakai bohat purkashish hoti hain, kio kay insaan unhain mukamal karnay kay liye mukhtalif zaviyoon say soochnay lagta hay... dil may tishnagi barh jati hay aur zehan uljha rahta hay... tanhai ma kuch na kuch karnay ko mil jata hay Niya saal mubarik ho kanwal :hug3 |
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01-06-2006, 08:43 AM
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bohat khoobsoorat likha hai kanwal ....  mere jesa ..... 
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01-06-2006, 09:40 AM
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01-06-2006, 10:12 AM
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khush raho @};- |
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