Urdu Poetry Forum

ye meri pehli koshish hay ummeed hay pasand aaey gi or na aaey tooooooooooo koi masla nahi tanqeed ka haq hay aap ko kyoNkay insaan ko tanqeed ki zaroorat zyada hoti hay basharte'keh tanqeed baraey tanqeed na ho :cry6




ham jab bhi koi nazam ,ghazal ya koi bhi tehreer paRhtay hain or wo tehreer hamaray dilooN kay tarooN ko hila bhi day to be'sakhta ham us kay khaliq ki tareef par majboor ho jatay haiN or agar wo tehreer hamaray jazbaat-o-aeh'sasaat ki tarjumaani bhi karti ho to sonay par suhagah phir hamaiN us tasneef kay writer say aik unsiyat si mehsoos honay lagti hay or ham writer kay dekhay bagher hi us kay maddah hojatay haiN or sochtay haiN kay jab is ki tehreer itni achi or dilooN ko choo lenay wali hay to ye khud kitna acha hoga

or ye bhi kaha jata hay kay kisi bhi shakhs ki tasneef ya takhleeq us ki shakhsiyat ka partou hoti hay

ab agar ham is kae'naat ki taraf nazar doRaeN haray bharay khait ,khoubsorat baghaat ,oNchay oNchay pahaaR ,badal ,samandar,darya ,sehra ,chaNd ,soraj ,taray ,barish ,din raat ka aana jana ye sab kis ki takhleeq haiN US RABB-E-ZULJALAAL ki
kya ham nay kabhi socha hay jis nay ye sab haseen-o-jameel cheezaiN banai haiN jis ki khoubsorti ko dekh kar insaan mabhoot hojata hay WOH KHUD KESA HOGA ?????????

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First of all.....writer's club main....bohot khushaamdeed...

Aur...rehi baat tunqeed ki to..aap ki tehreer per kiya tunqeed ki jaaye...

Acha likha hai...ummeed hai ke aap is club ko apna samjhain ge aur share kerte rehain ge.....

Khush rehiye.....

Was'salaams

sab sab say pehlay to shukriya qoubool kijiye aas bhai phir ye kay hamari tehreer main tanqeed ki gunjaish nahi ya mouzu ki wajah say tanqeed nahi ki jasakti ????????

or janab ham sirf is club ko nahi poray HG ko hi apna samjhtay hain is liye har jagha hi hamain bardasht karna paRay ga

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ham ji.. MashAllah.. aseer zehno main soch bharnay ka khoob andaaz hai.. Allah aap ko iss naik maqsad main kamyaab farmaye.. Aameen.. @};-

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove @};-

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.......JI RAHAY HEIN KAMAL KERTAY HEIN.......

33:w eldone3

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thanxxxxxxxxxx love, Ali ,shokh aap ki pasandeedgi ka

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Hmm...aap shayed theek sumjhe

Mozu hi aisa hai ke...ab kiya kehain...i mean....such to phir such hai...chahe use kissi bhi style se likhain

Aur most welcome dear.....most welcome

aiyai bacha

khushamdeed tumhein yahan dekh kar bhi bauhat hi acha laga bauhat hi achi baat ki hai aur bauhat hi achi soch hai tumhari

khush raho

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mashaAllah bohat hi pyar bhari tehreer hey iss tehreer ki khoobsurati aur iski meanings ki wuss'at serf mehsoos ki ja sakti hey...bayan karna bohat mushkil mehsoos hota hey..aap ney bohat khoobi k sath iss ahsas ko share kia hey @};-thanx for sharing.

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