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RulesThis is a discussion on Wo AIk Sunder Udaas Larki............ within the Urdu Writer's Club forums, part of the Urdu Adab category; Wo aik Sunder Udaas Larki... na na na ye hum apni baat nahi kar rahey kyu k baqool humare aik ...
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#1
09-01-2004, 10:59 PM
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Wo aik Sunder Udaas Larki... na na na ye hum apni baat nahi kar rahey kyu k baqool humare aik dost na tu hum sunder hian, na hi udaas aur na hi larki  ....abb kaheye siwaae is k k" hoti aai hay k achchoo.n ko bura kahtey hian: :-p so baat ho rahi thi aik sunder udaas larki ki...yoon tu humara koi rishta nahi per mehsoos karoon tu rag-e jaan si lagne lagi hay ye......... na tu ye humare dostoo.n main sey hain na dushmanoo.n main sey kyu k dost ye kum banaati hain aur dushman hum kum... khoobsurat lehjey aur gehri ankhoo.n wali ye larki jab pehli baar baat hoi tu bari ukhri ukhri si lagi...inhoo nay hum sey pehli baar baat kisi k kahne pe ki per aise ki k goya humaari nanhi si jaan pe ahsaan-e azeem kar rahi hon...magar hum bhi fitratan bare khabti balke qoonoti balke ziddi waqiya howe hain so hum nay zaberdasti inki janaib dosti ka haath barha diya balke thaam lya k chura sakti ho chura lo per inhoo nay kisi aas ka daman aisi mazboti sey thama tha k humara haath bhool hi gaeen... 1.gif ")1") phir kaafi arse baad in sey pehli aur shaid akhiri mulaqaat hoi...chup chup si dari sehmi is larki main kaheen na kaheen kutch tha k dill khinchta mehsoon howa.....un ankhoon main kaheen dor jo aas k deye thay un ki lo timtimaati hoi thi shaid jabhi ankhoon main bari chamak thi....ajeeb hay ye bhi kisi sey nahi bolti...man bagiya main aag lagi ho tu unhain naina sawan barsane ki bajaay masnoi si hansi hans k dhoka deti rehti hay khud ko....ajab khush gumaan si ajab bad-gumaan si hay.... kahti hay k ise duniya sey dar lagta.... k log baat ka afsana bana lya karte hian... per meri jaan kutch kutch afsano ka fasana bhi tu bana lya jata hay na.... jo bhi hay is sey mera rishta shaid kutch bhi nahi.... shaid mahaz mehsoos karne ka rishta k kabhi main nay use mehsoos kya hay ghar k kisi kone main monh chupaay rote howe... raat k kisi pehr bewajah tehelte howe.... khud ko benaam sey hijr ki aag main tapate howe.... main nay use mehsoos kya hay is dill k angan main siskiyaan bharte.... kahne ko kutch bhi nahi per dill sey qareeb hoti ja rahi hay ye larki jis ki na tu khud ise khabr hay na mujhe .... bass Khuda is ki zaat ko sokoon dey dey... aisa sokoon k roh ka por por shant ho jaay ... ise zindagi sey koi gila na rahey... merey sidq-e dill sey dua hay k KHuda tumhain bohat khush rakhey ameen summa ameen
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#2
09-01-2004, 11:16 PM
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bohat hi khoobsoorti say likha hai... pata nahi kyon mujhay laga hai kay yeh jis ki baat ho rahi hai us ko main bhi janti hoon .. 
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#3
09-02-2004, 01:01 AM
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shagufta jee, bohot umdah likha, fitrat aur jazbon ki sahi manzar kashi ki, .. youn to sabhi lafz mooti hain, aik poori maala hai, laikin yeh q'ataa kuchh yaad dilata hai iss liyeh select kiya. bohot khoob khushh rahin@};-
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#4
09-02-2004, 03:14 AM
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bohot hi khobsoorat likha hai Gufii  aisa kiun mehsoos ho raha hai ke tumhari us sundar udaas larki ko main bhi janti hoon.....  .../suno yahoo pe zaroor bata denaa >hameesha khush rahoo....ameen
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09-02-2004, 05:48 AM
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bohat acha likha howa hai /rose
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09-02-2004, 08:04 AM
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bohut he khubsorat alfzo ka istimal /good1 |
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09-02-2004, 10:56 AM
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Khoobsurti si kisi ki zaat ko lafzon main piro deya @};- Bohat umda likha hai aur jasey zeest aur aaina ney kaha key woh janti hein ..! toh pata nahi kyun shayad mujhey bhi lagta hey key main bhi janta hoon khair kabhi poochon ga aap sey zaroor gar aap ney bataya toh @};- aur tehreer bohat umda likhi hai aap ney hamesha ki tarhan @};- aap ki duaon per Sum Ameen @};- Jeeti rahein khush rahein abad rahein sada @};-
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#8
09-02-2004, 11:09 AM
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Hmmm.. go hum chahain tu bohat kuch keh saktay hain.. kahain kaya.. ? kuch loug aisay hee hootay hain.. bazahir aam say.. chup chaap say.. khush'gumaniyoon say bud'gumaanyoon kay safar pay rawaan.. koi un kay nain katoora ankhoon mein tu jhankay... ik jahaan jalta nazar aata hai.. hum nay daikha hai.. hum nay tu umar ka ik hissa guzara hai.. par hayrat hoi kuch ghariyoon ke he mulaqaat mein ... kaya kaya kuch jaan liya aap nay.. aap ke dua pay dil say dua nikli.. @};- Tahreer ko tahreer ke nazar say daikhiyeah tu jo zara bhi janta hai woh pehchaan lay ga kis ke baat kar rahi hain.. humain tu khair click karnay say pehlay hee khabar hoo chuki thi kay muda kaya hai.. /wink4 acha likha hai.. haan likha kam hai.. ya shaid mujh ko sab ziada ziada chahiyeah hoota hai.. /wink4
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Wo AIk Sunder Udaas Larki............ 
