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**Banjara** · #11 04-06-2005, 07:11 PM

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Originally Posted by Shagufta Saleem

acha hay ... bohat acha bal k sacha hay

aisi hi guzarti hay zindagi logoon nay ana hota hay aur chaley bhi jana hhota hay .... bas yaadain achi chor k jain tu gilla nahi karna chaheye k sab apni apni majboriyoon sey majbor hain....

Shukriya Goofi

Haan yeahi zindagi hai janoon waloon kay saath kab koi jaata hai.. aisay hee chalti hai.. magar kabhi kabhi gar sochain tu wehshat see honay lagtee hai.. chandini ratoon mein bhi chaand nahi nikalta.. barkha mein dhoop chubhtee hai.. halaan kay kuch bhi nahi hoota.. magar kaya karain yeah bhi tu zindagi hee hai..

**Banjara** · #12 04-06-2005, 07:12 PM

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Originally Posted by WorThless.

Sir ji... Sacha likha hai dil kerta hai kuch kahon yahan per nahi kehta likhtey rahyeh khush rhayeh sada abad rahyeh

Janab bohat shukriya aap nay parha aur na'cheez ke tehreer ko iss qabil samjha

Khush Rahiyeah @};-

**Banjara** · #13 04-06-2005, 07:12 PM

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Originally Posted by Suneea

/weldone

Very true!

Good sharing

Shukriya Suneea @};-

**Banjara** · #14 04-06-2005, 07:14 PM

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Originally Posted by Diya

basit

bauhat hi acha likha hai..zindagi kai safar mein kai loog miltai hain magar sab sath nahi chaltai kai loog bichar jatai hain lekin dil unhain bhool nahi pata bas aik ajeeb hi safar hai ye

khush raho aur likhtai raho /rose

/aoa Diya

Haan kuch ajeeb hee safar hai yeah.. aur kabhi kabhi ajeeb tar hoo jata hai.. magar hai tu safar he... magar ta'jub tab hoota hai jab issi safar ko inheen rahoon ko.. inhee badaltee rahoon ko manzil samajh liya jaata hai.. dil o jaan, dastaar o qaba koo baich diya jaata hai.. khareed liya jaata hai.. bay'mool kar diya jaata hai..

Bohat Khush Rahoo

**Banjara** · #15 04-06-2005, 07:21 PM

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Originally Posted by *Masood*

Hmmmm

Bhai miyan lagta hai keh is nagree mein bhi ganga usi tarha behti hai jaisey doosri nagri mein. Aur woh kuchh bhi to nahin kah sakta jis ney apney ooper sab kuchh bardasht kiya ho, warna apney watan sey jala-watan kon hota hai? Kuchh ghalti kahee na kahee kisi na kisi sey to zaroor hui hai....zaroorat is baat ki hai keh us ghalti ka sad-e-baab kiya jaey takeh dobara na dohraee jaey.

Warna to zindagi ka safar hai yeh hai keh kuchh log aatey hain to kuchh chaley jatey hain, kuchh log kaee aik ko apney sath ley jatey hain.... magar yehi nizaam hai duniya ka. Yaqinan aaney waley janey walon ki kami poori nahin kar saktey magar zindagi ko aagey barhana hota hai......

Aik Geet hai:

"Yeh duniya mitrey, raah-guzr hai...... aur
hum bhi musafir tum bhi musafir kon kisi ka howey
kahey chhup chhup roein
koi saath dey keh na saath dey yeh safar akailey hi kaat lein
key hum bhi musafir tum bhi musafir kon kisi ka howey"

/aoa

Sahee kaha hai aap nay.. aisa hee hai.. magar kabhi kabhi ghaltee kissi ke nahi hooti.. bus tawaqoowat aur mufadaat ke aar say niklay nashtar jaan lay liya kartay hain.. aur aksar hum samajhtay boojhtay anjaan ban jaatay hain.. aur kabhi kabhi humaree sada tabiyaat ka faida utha liya jaata hai.. kissi kay payaar ko rakh rakhaoo ko uss ke majboori samajh liya jaata hai.. aur phir aag bhi tu kabhi kabhi lag jaati hai ghar ko hee ghar kay hee chiraaagh mein.. woh bhi khail khail mein... bus youn hee hai yeah karoobar.. aur shaid younhee chalta rehna hai.. so jab tuk chalta hai chal raha hai.. chaltay ka naam gari hai.. jis din yeah pahiya ruk jaye ga.. safar bhi ruk jayai ga.. bus wohi muqaam e manzil hoo ga..

Geet pasand aya.. parhnay aur apnee raye say agaah karnay pay aap ka bohat shukriya..

Khush Rahiyeah

**Girl_Interrupted** · #16 04-10-2005, 04:41 AM

/clap5 zabardast ................. @};-

but /aw2

**Diya** · #17 04-10-2005, 01:19 PM

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Originally Posted by Abdul Basit

/aoa Diya

Haan kuch ajeeb hee safar hai yeah.. aur kabhi kabhi ajeeb tar hoo jata hai.. magar hai tu safar he... magar ta'jub tab hoota hai jab issi safar ko inheen rahoon ko.. inhee badaltee rahoon ko manzil samajh liya jaata hai.. dil o jaan, dastaar o qaba koo baich diya jaata hai.. khareed liya jaata hai.. bay'mool kar diya jaata hai..

Bohat Khush Rahoo

wsalaam aur salaam basit

hai na ajeeb si baat kai inhi rahoon par dhoka milta hai magar phir bhi inhi rahoon ka safar hota hai inhi rahoon par wehshat mukaddar banti hai phir bhi sukoon inhi rahoon par sab talashtai hain....aik paheli si lagti hai kya aitebaar karna chahiyai yaan us kai sai sai bhi door rehna chahiyai

khush raho /rose

**SAGARKHAN** · #18 04-10-2005, 04:17 PM

naa bhaii yun kissi sey gilla naheyn kartey,,,,,,,,,,,,@} ;-

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