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Umeed, Aas, Aur Tassali

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Chalo fer theek hai, main waise bhi thora sa busy tha...



aur aap ki thread per comment thori dair ba'd...
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Pata hai jab Zindagi main jo sab aap chahte ho woh aapko nahi milta to bohat bura lagta hai.

par jab aap sochte ho ke jo aap chahte ho woh sab aapko mil jaaye ye zaroori to nahi to dil ko tassali milti hai.

par jis umeed par aap jee rahe ho aur uske poore hone ki aas kahin se nazar na aaye to ziadatar insaan toot jata hai.

agar us main bhi dil chota na kare aur ye soche ke jab naseeb main hoga tab mil jayega to dil ko himmat aur jeenay ka hosla milta hai.

par jin choti choti cheezon khushiyon k zariye zindagi katrahi hai
woh choti choti khuwahishen poori na hoto yehi himmat aur hosla khatam hojata hai.


insaan bilqul toot sa jata hai kyunke ab uske paas jeenay ke liye sirf ek tassali reh jaati hai...



ye maine tab likha tha jab main 13 saal ki thi ........

13 saal ki umer main khasi tension paal lee thi tum nain.

Well...Koi toot ker sahare ki talash main apne din tutolta hai, to koi sahare ke hote huwe hi ya'as ki tesweer buna kisi saraab ke gun gata rehta hai aur aik toote huwe aaine ki terha kirchi kirchi aur bikhri bikhri si zindagi ka bani hota hai, aur koi is bheyanuk aur ghutatop undhere main bhi zindagi ki kirnain cheer lata hai, woh kirnain phir dooron kee rah humwar kerti huwi mishaal sabit hoti hai...
Sub kuch us insan per hi ayed hai...jaisa insaan, waise hi us ki zindagi ka merkezi kheyal
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13 saal ki umer main khasi tension paal lee thi tum nain.

Well...Koi toot ker sahare ki talash main apne din tutolta hai, to koi sahare ke hote huwe hi ya'as ki tesweer buna kisi saraab ke gun gata rehta hai aur aik toote huwe aaine ki terha kirchi kirchi aur bikhri bikhri si zindagi ka bani hota hai, aur koi is bheyanuk aur ghutatop undhere main bhi zindagi ki kirnain cheer lata hai, woh kirnain phir dooron kee rah humwar kerti huwi mishaal sabit hoti hai...
Sub kuch us insan per hi ayed hai...jaisa insaan, waise hi us ki zindagi ka merkezi kheyal
woh to baat apki theek hai par jab insaan k paas kuch b na ho to woh phir toot hi jata hai aur kuch nahi kar paata hai phir b himmat karna ya na karna usk haath main

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very very nice. bht bht pyari baatein ki hain. kuch lag raha hai ke deep thinking girl hai. in fact main bhi aisi baatein socha karta tha par likhi kabhi nahin, kyun kay kisi ke shair pehle hi miil jaata tha. is se mujhe ghalib ka aik shair yaad aaya:

Hazaron khwahishen aisi ke har khwahish pe damm nikle
bohot nikle mere armaan, lekin phir bhi kamm nikle
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