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This is a discussion on ~*~ SHUKRIYA AJNABEI~*~ within the Urdu Writer's Club forums, part of the Urdu Adab category; SHUKRIYA AJNABI Mei buhat akela tha .... paas kuch na tha ... lekin aaj ... rah mein ek saathi mila ...
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| SHUKRIYA AJNABI Mei buhat akela tha .... paas kuch na tha ... lekin aaj ... rah mein ek saathi mila kuch kuch mere jaisa ... Aankhon mein shaam siii utri hoe .... Baloon mein Dashet-e-Ghum ki Dhool .... Cehray pe zamanay ki zulm ki dastaan raqam .... mein ne poocha kya manzil hai hamare kya paas hai hamaray ... to wo bola are tum bekhabar ho .. phir usne mughe dikhaya uska dil .... ahhh kya khoobsorat heeray se zyada chamak .... Aik bar Aasman per Nigah dali .... Shaid koi Shikwa kiya .... aur ek mooti gira uske aankh se ... jise sehra ke reet ne palak jhapakte he samoo liya ..... Wo Muskuraya aur bola dekho abhi bhe kya kuch nahien .... mere pass uske yaaaad haina aur kitne pyaree hai dekha tumne ..... YE jo sondhi si mehak har pal saath hai .... Ussi ki to hai .... Ye jo aik awaz sanatooon mein kanoon say takrati hai aur roooh mein utarti jaati hai .... Ussi ki to hai .... Sard ratoon mein jo aik lams thitharnay nahien deta .... Ussi ka to hai .... Dharkaneen kab say khamosh hain phir bhe dil ka zinda rehna .... Zindagi ka bas unhi chaltayyyyyyyy jana.... Sab Ussi say to hai .... haaan mein bhe tanha nahien .... Wo hai meray saath ..... Ab bhi meray saath .... Har Pal ... Har simt .... Har ghardi .... SHUKRIYA AJNABI !!!
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#2
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| bohut hii khoob shanii@};- /yhug /clap5 @};-
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#3
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| behad khoobsurat....alffaa z nahi mil rahay kaisay bataoon kay bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai aapnay : Ussi ka to hai .... Dharkaneen kab say khamosh hain phir bhe dil ka zinda rehna .... Zindagi ka bas unhi chaltayyyyyyyy jana.... Sab Ussi say to hai .... haaan mein bhe tanha nahien .... Wo hai meray saath ..... Ab bhi meray saath .... Har Pal ... Har simt .... Har ghardi .... SHUKRIYA AJNABI !!! __________________ mind blowing ! its really mind blowing...bahut hi pyaray tareekay say apnay lafzon ka istamaal kiya hai aur woh sab sentences jis flow main ja rahay hain wah! bahut hii khoob aur nazam ka title wonderful SHUKRIYA AJNABEE @};- ![]() |
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| [quote=ShAnIjee] \nocomments
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#5
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| bohat khobsurat tehreer hay Shanijee bheer main ik ajnabi sey samna aacha laga ![]()
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| .... mere pass uske yaaaad haina aur kitne pyaree hai dekha tumne ..... ... YE jo sondhi si mehak har pal saath hai .... Ussi ki to hai... VerY NicE JanaB ![]() @};-
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#8
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| mujhay samjh nahi araha hai k kahan se quote ker k daad doon :-) bahout khoobsoorat ajnabi :flower Manoos ajnabi /kyahai
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