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This is a discussion on Raye Shumari Baraye Muqabila Maah-e-Nov:2007 within the Urdu Writer's Club forums, part of the Urdu Adab category; Is matraba hisa layny valy tamam members ka bahat shukriya. Tehreer ko darj zail mayar ki nisbat say marks diye ...
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#1
11-21-2007, 09:27 PM
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   Is matraba hisa layny valy tamam members ka bahat shukriya.  Tehreer ko darj zail mayar ki nisbat say marks diye jain gay Khayal ki Infaradiyat...4 Nasar or Beyaniah....3 Kahani/Mazmoon....3 Total No...10 Bahtreen tehreer ka ailaan Nov: 28th ko kia jayega   shukriya Pehli``Barish
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#2
11-21-2007, 09:35 PM
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~*~Ansoo~*~ # 1.  # 2.     # 3. 
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#3
11-23-2007, 10:58 PM
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 Mujhay Dili Khushi Hay Kay HG Mai'n Masha Allah Umda Writers Ki Kami Nahi Hay...Is Martaba Jo 3 Tehreerai'n Competition Mai'n Paish Ki Gai Hai'n Woh Apni Apni Jagha Pehlay Number Ki Hi Mustahiq Hai'n...Aap Teeno'n Hi Mubarakbaad Qubool Kijiye...Tehreer # 1... (Aansu) Seen-Noon-Néha Sahiba Aap Ka Likha Mai'n Nay Ghaliban Pehli Martaba Parha Hay Owr Pehli Martaba Hi Bouhat Mutasir Hui Hoo'n...Aap Ka Andaaz-e-Tehreer Bila Shak.O.Shubha Bouhat Manjha Huwa Andaz Rakhti Hay...Umeed Hay Kay Yeh Silsila Aap Isi Showq.o.Lagan Say Jari Rakhai'n Gi...Allah Aap Ko Mazeed Kamiyabi Naseeb Karay... ...Khayal Ki Infiradiyat...4 / 3 Nasr Owr Bayaniya...3 /3 Kahani / Mazmoon...3 / 2.5 Total... 10 / 8.5 Tehreer # 2... (Bint-e-Aen) Sameera Sahiba Aap Nay Is Gulabi Gulabi Khoobsurat Tehreer Ka Jis Tarha Rukh Mora Hay Woh Qabil-e-Tareef Hay...Aap Nay Na Umeedi Kay Beech Azm.o.Himmat Ki Jo Tasweer Dikhanay Ki Koshish Ki Hay Woh Mutasir Kun Hay...Aap Ki Yeh Tehreer Bila Shubha Bouhat Khoobsurat Tehreer Hay...Likhti Rahiye Owr Bouhat Khush Rahiye... Khayal Ki Infiradiyat... 4 / 3.5 Nasr Owr Bayaniya... 3 / 3 Kahani Owr Mazmoon... 3 / 3 Total... 10 / 9.5 Tehreer # 3... (Faqat Mairi Talab Aansu Hi Tehray Hai'n) Kanwal Hussain Sahiba Kanwal Ji Aap Ki Yeh Tehreer Bhi Dil Ko Choo Lainay Mai'n Kamiyaab Rahi Hay...Tehreer Ki Munasibat Say Anjaam Pazeer Hoti Yeh Tehreer Qaari Ko Kaai Paighaam Dainay Mai'n Kamiyaab Rahi Hay... Isi Tarha Umda Tehreero'n Say Ham Ko Nawazti Rahiye Owr Bouhat Khush Rahiye...Khayal Ki Infiradiyat...4 / 3.5 Nasr Owr Bayaniya... 3 / 3 Kahani / Mazmoon... 3 / 3 Total... 10 / 9.5 |
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#4
11-24-2007, 01:16 PM
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main ney jab yeh mozo muqabiley k liye dia tha to andaza nahi tha k itni munfarid aur khoobsurat tehreerain samney aayengi...mujhey bohat khushi hoi yeh dekh k hamarey writers bohat hi hasas andaz main apney gird o paish ko qalam zad kar saktey hain....mujhey teenon hi tehreerain bohat achi lageen... rules k mutabiq marking meri taraf sey youn hey  Tehreer # 1... (Aansu) Seen-Noon-Neha Neha ji aap ki aamad writers main bohat achi lagi umeed hey aap aayenda bhi hamarey sath apney khoobsurat khayalat O ahsasat ko share karti rahaingi...aapki tehreer main aansoun ko mukhtalif zaviyon sey paish kia gaya...bohat achi lagi aapki tehreer 1.gif ")1") Khayal Ki Infiradiyat...4 / 3 Nasr aur Bayaniya...3 /3 Kahani / Mazmoon...3 / 2 Tehreer # 2... (Bint-e-Ayen) Sameera Sameera ji umeed o na umeedi k beech likhi gayi aapki yeh tehreer istea'ron ki zaban liye hameysha ki tarah khoob rahi... Khayal Ki Infiradiyat... 4 / 3 Nasr aur Bayaniya... 3 / 3 Kahani/Mazmoon... 3 / 3 Tehreer # 3... (Faqat Mairi Talab Aansu Hi Tehray Hai'n) Kanwal Hussain Kanwal aapki tehreer bohat mature andaz main aik wazeh paigham liye hoye bohat pasand aayi... Khayal Ki Infiradiyat...4 / 3.5 Nasr aur Bayaniya... 3 / 3 Kahani / Mazmoon... 3 / 3
__________________ Kuch Aansoo Kuch KhushiyaaN Dey Kar Taal Gaya Jeevan Ka Ik Aur Sunehra Saal Gaya ...!! Meri Zaat Zarra E Bey NishaaN Mera Ishq Naghma E Bey Nawa Last edited by Kanwal; 11-24-2007 at 01:21 PM. |
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#5
11-26-2007, 11:12 AM
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Seen Noon Haya Khayal ki Infaradiyat...4 (3) Nasar or Beyaniah....3 (2.5) Kahani/Mazmoon....3 (2) 7.5/10 Pehli Barish Khayal ki Infaradiyat...4 (3) Nasar or Beyaniah....3 (3) Kahani/Mazmoon....3 (2.5) 8.5/10 Kanwal Hussain Khayal ki Infaradiyat...4 (3.5) Nasar or Beyaniah....3 (3) Kahani/Mazmoon....3 (3) 9.5/10
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#6
11-26-2007, 03:08 PM
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Thank You all Judges for Marking. Winner shall be announced shortly. Thread is Closed.
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