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This is a discussion on ~**...Paay Pagal...**~ within the Urdu Writer's Club forums, part of the Urdu Adab category; Galee mein bachay us kay peechay pagal pagal ke awazain lagaatay bhag rahay thai.. uss nay pichlay kai maheenoon say ...


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Old 07-23-2003, 10:12 PM
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Galee mein bachay us kay peechay pagal pagal ke awazain lagaatay bhag rahay
thai.. uss nay pichlay kai maheenoon say kapray bhi nahi badlay thai...
kameez ka chaak udhartay udhartay garaibaan say jaa milla tha.. chahray ka
rung zard patay sa hota jaa raha tha... ankhoon mein jul bujhay khawboon ke
rakh phailee hoi thi.. baloon mein kissi chirya kay tootay ghoonslay kay
kuch tinkay abhi tuk atkay howay thai.. woh apna naam bhool chuka tha sab
uss ko pagal kehtay thai.. woh pichlay kai barsoon say rungoon kay iss
shahar ke galiyooon mein dasht kay safar pay hai..!!

Shahar ke har gali doje say milli hoi thi woh aik gali say nikalta tu aglee
gali mein khailtay bachay apnay puranay khilonay choor kay nai khiloonay say
khailna shuroo kar daitay... yeah khail un kay liyeah sirf jeet hee jeet tha
aur har koi jeetna chahta tha.. shaam phailtee jaa rahi thi aur uss ka badan
pay aur zakhmooon kay liyeah jagaah kam parti jaa rahi thi.. Issi phailtee
sayaahi mein hee kaheen say aik bara pathar aa us kay mathay laga tabhi raat
kay andhairoon us ko hath thaam kay roshniyoon kay jahaan ke taraf safar
shuroo kiya....!! Dard barhta jaa raha tha... !! hut'ta kay dard nay sab
apnay hisaar mein lay liya... ussi lamhay kaif o saroor ka janam howa..!!

Daikha maa uss kay liyeah daisi ghee kay parathay bana kay laye hai...
katoori mein paroos say mangwaya howa sarsoon ka saag apni mehak say uss ke
taloo say lagi zubaan ko tur kar raha tha... sarhaanay baithi behan mathay
pay lagay zakham ko dhoo rahi thi.. aur apnay nazuk hathoon kay sath baloon
mein uljhay jungloon mein ujray ghoonslay kay tinkoon ko nikaal rahi thi..
maan uss ko baita khana khaa loo keh rahi thi us ke ankhoon mein chupa pani
ka woh aik namkeen qatra gawahi dai raha tha kay woh pagal nahi hai.... woh
duniya ka sab say payara baita hai... Chooti behan kay nanhay munay hathoon
ke porain us kay kanoon mein sargooshi kar kay keh rahi theen... Bhaiyaa tum
say acha bhai poori duniya mein aur koi nahi hai... !! Tabhi souraj ke bay
reham kirnoon ke taab na latay howay kamray ke khirki kay sheesha toot gaya
aur aik kaghaz mein lipta pathar masayhree kay pass aa kay gira.. !! uss
kaghaz pay sirf aik lafaz likha tha..!!

!!...Pagal..!!
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Old 07-24-2003, 07:50 PM
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pagal kon huaa ..jiss ney pathhar maarey yaa jiss ney pathhar khhaey ...!!
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Old 07-25-2003, 12:26 PM
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QUOTE (NainTara @ Jul 24 2003, 11:50 PM)
pagal kon huaa ..jiss ney pathhar maarey yaa jiss ney pathhar khhaey ...!! [/b][/quote]
ya jis ne yeh sawaal kya /hammer /comp /comp /comp /comp
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Old 07-25-2003, 12:34 PM
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm m ..... Basit .. aap k kalaam ki tareef kerna itna mushkil q lugta hai .. dil kerta hai sirf "kuch nahi " likh doon ... sahyid samjh nahi aati k kis cheez ki tareef keroon ya phir la-commnets si hojati hoon ... mazeh ki baat hai jub tareef kero tao lugta hai jaisey zaberdasti ker rahi hoon ... khud ko apne hi alfaaz apne nahi lugte... asa kyun hai khud nahi jaanti ...

akhri para buhat hi deep hai .. aur jis tarhaan aap ne ending ki hai na wuh hi shayid is poore afsane ko ya ju bhi hai yeh .. wuh is poorey afsaney ko aur bhi khubsuret bana deyti hai .. now i m losing my vocablary :p ... khear shayid ju kehna chaaha hai wuh keh paayi hoon ...


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Old 07-26-2003, 12:27 PM
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A nice little story @};- and also very well written ... very thought provoking too! ...... I have never understood why people feel a pleasure in kicking those who are already down. People often have a tendency to underestimate others capabilites ..... why do people oppress others' feelings others' actions ..... why is it that what some do is considered to be right and what others do is not right .... we are living in a world of double standard ..... people go around and preach of the "right behaviour" .... and at the same time they condemn anyone who is a believer of the opposite of their beliefs and principals ..... there's no tolerance... indeed so sad /aw

baichaara "paagal"... mujhay to us pay pyaar aa gaya /hug
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Adaab Basit Bhai
jawab nahi tehreer ka. is mein sirf ek rung nahi hai. agar dakha jaaey to aap ki tehreer bohat say pehloo badalti hai. kuch stops hain is mein, kuch bharay bharay emotions jo dil say nikalnay ki koshish mein hain aor sab say barh kar muaashray par tanz hai.
infact PAGAL hi bacho'n aor doosron k liay amuzing character banta hai.... why?

An outstading theme Basit bhai /good

khush raheay...
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Beautiful sharin @};- .. choti c tehreer mein bohat kuch hain samjhney k liye ... in today's world its better to rite ureself than pointin fingers on others.. cos in return u get noffin but loose ureself from where u were standin .. pagal woh nahin tha but woh jis ne marrey huwey ko maarney ki koshish ki .. !!




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Old 07-28-2003, 06:16 PM
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QUOTE (Biya @ Jul 25 2003, 04:26 PM)
QUOTE (NainTara @ Jul 24 2003, 11:50 PM)
pagal kon huaa ..jiss ney pathhar maarey yaa jiss ney pathhar khhaey ...!! [/b][/quote]
ya jis ne yeh sawaal kya /hammer /comp /comp /comp /comp [/b][/quote]
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Old 07-28-2003, 09:14 PM
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Shabaash bachay shabaash , tumharay haath main ajj bhi woh hi nishtar hai, bohat acha , maza aya, khob , good . . . (akhir shagird kiss kay hoo ;)
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Old 07-29-2003, 09:48 AM
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mujh ko Pagal nah kaho, kay sahab ham nay

dard-o-Gham ketnay kiyeh jama to pagal bana


/angry /angry
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