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,,oonnhh,,written by,Haya n,

This is a discussion on ,,oonnhh,,written by,Haya n, within the Urdu Writer's Club forums, part of the Urdu Adab category; Originally Posted by **Jharna** Bohot khoob, @};- @};- Agerchay bohot taweel tha, mager sab k reply per ker socha k ...


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Old 02-12-2005, 01:45 AM
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Bohot khoob, @};- @};-

Agerchay bohot taweel tha, mager sab k reply per ker socha k is tehreer ko zaror perhna hai, jo sab itni tareef ker rahay hein... ham amooman itni taweel tehreer or wo bhi roman urdu mein kabhi nahein perhtay..mager perhee..or achi lagi .or haqeeqat k kareeb bhi ... @};- @};-

maza aya perh ka...or aik sabaq aamoz tehreer hai, or kia kahein..sach ham tu 2 lfzoon mein tareef ker k bhagnai waloon mein hein..mager aap k jawab mein itni bari kahani likh hee di...khair

Khush raheay....InshaAllah

Or achi avchi tehreeroon say nawaztay raheay.....



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Assalam.o.alekum @};-
aap ne itna time nikala or ye read kiya mujhey is baat ki bohat khushi he or us par se itna howsla afzaa jawaab bhi aap ka is liye bhi bohat bohat shukriya.me to chahti hun k urdu me likhun or rangeen likhun or zara sa bold likhun lekin me kiya karun k mujhey ye nahi aata,,,or koshish bhi ki tab bhi nahi hota mujh se /aw2 likhney k siwa kuch nahi aata,bohat hi nikammi hun in baton me jab k yahan k members ko kitna kuch aata he aik me hun bas mujhey to abhi bohat kuch seekhna he.dua kijiye ga merey liye.khush rahiye.
Allah hafiz @};-
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wahh bohot umdaah Haya jee @};-

bohot sabaq amooz kahani likhi aur jis dil'kash payraye main apne usay qalamband kiya...waqai bohot dilchasp lagi.....aur tavalaat ke bawajood parhnay main lutf ayaa...@};-

baat kiya hai na ke insaan ke paas jo kuch hota hai woh uski qadar nahi karta...... aur har chamakti cheez ko sonaa samajh letaa hai....... goo ke youn hota nahi...


younhi acha acha likhti raheye ...khush rahein...
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Haya /hug1
Main ney app ki writting print ker k parhi aram arma se ...mujhey difficult words nhi atey na tu iss liye. ..magar bhut maza aya..app ney acha likha hai /clap5 .. ,app writting achi ker sakty hain ,keep it up.. /yhug
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Old 02-12-2005, 06:52 PM
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Haya /hug1
Main ney app ki writting print ker k parhi aram arma se ...mujhey difficult words nhi atey na tu iss liye. ..magar bhut maza aya..app ney acha likha hai /clap5 .. ,app writting achi ker sakty hain ,keep it up.. /yhug
Assalam.o.alekum @};-
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Old 02-13-2005, 01:13 PM
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AOA Haya...... shairi k baad aap ki nasar bhi parhi

aap ki takhleeqi salahiyatoon sey hum pehley hi kaafi mutasir they aab tu mad'daoo.n main shamil ho gai hain

bohat aacha likha hay sis per kiya hi acha hota k isey aap Urdu main likhteen zara aasani hoti na kiyu k tehreer zara si taweel hay

waisey bohat zaberdast kahani hay... itna acha likhne pe daad qobool kejeye
khush raheye hamesha
likhti raheye
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dono haton se


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Assalam.o.alekum @};-
itney khubsurat reply k liye bohat shukriya,aap ne is ko read kiya or pasand kiya jis se mujhey khushi hui.aap bhi khush rahiye,seniours is forum me juniors ki howsla afzaai is tarha kartey hein k dil chahta he k dono hathon me qalam ho or dono se bayak waqt likhein hehehehehehe.
Allah hafiz @};-
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AOA Haya...... shairi k baad aap ki nasar bhi parhi

aap ki takhleeqi salahiyatoon sey hum pehley hi kaafi mutasir they aab tu mad'daoo.n main shamil ho gai hain

bohat aacha likha hay sis per kiya hi acha hota k isey aap Urdu main likhteen zara aasani hoti na kiyu k tehreer zara si taweel hay

waisey bohat zaberdast kahani hay... itna acha likhne pe daad qobool kejeye
khush raheye hamesha
likhti raheye
Assalam.o.alekum @};-
itney khoobsurat reply se mujhey bohat hi khushi hui.shagufta ji me kiya karun me urdu me nahi likh parahi /aw2 me to colours me bhi nahi likh pati /aw2 or bas isi tarha type hota he mujh se. /aw2 jab k dil to mera bhi ye hi chahta he k me urdu me likhun lekin mujh se ho hi nahi raha /aw2 likhney k ilawa mujh se kuch ho hi nahi raha he.jab k me to chahti hun k jo likhun us ko zara sa bold letters me bhi likhun or urdu me bhi,,lekin,,,,,,,, /aw2
reply k liye bohat mamnoon hun @};-
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Bohot achi story hai abhi parhoon ga to bataoon ga abhi to dekh kar lagta hai ke achi hi ho gi
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