Urdu Poetry Forum

Piary doston aur azeez sathiyon ,

AssalamoAlekum ,

Jahan-e-fun kay silsilay ka doosra Muqabla lay ker apki khidmat main hazir hui hoon Umeed hai Aap is main bharpoor shirkat kerkay is sislilay ko aur bhi dilchasp aur kamiyab banaen gay @};-

Is dafa ka topic hai Muqabla-e-Afsancha !
Afsancha Kiya hai ?
Aik aisi choti si tehreer jo afsana kay andaz main likhi jaey aur is main tajassus qayam kiya jaey kuch is tarhan say kay akhir main perhnay walay lay labon per muskan zaroor ani chaheay
yani kay adab ki yeh sinf Mazah ka hissa hai aik halka phiuka mazah !
Aaam tor per is main kisi madi cheez ko is tarhan say paish kiya jata hai kay wo jeti jagti shakhsiyyat lagay aur afsanchay kay akhir main ja ker pata chalay kay yeh to koi isnan nahin balkay is kahani ka hero yah heroen mehez aik madi cheez tha/thi .

Umeed hai apko samajh a gaya hoga kay kis andaz ki tehreer likhni hai .....

Mujhay maloom hai ap main say bohat say log adab ki is sinf say waqif hongay magar jinhon nay pehlay Afsancha kay baray main nahin suna perha main nay unkay leay wazahat kerna munasib samjha @};-

sab sathiyon kay Afsanchon ka intezar rahay ga Shukriya , @};-

Regards,

A'nchaL @};-

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wow kya zabardast muqabala shruu kiya hai aap ney, ham bhi dekhein kay hamarey writers takhayyul kay ghorey kahan kahan dauratey hein...its great kyonkey mazaah ki kuchh kami si mehsoos ho rahi thi... I'll be waiting for the contributions

Allah hafiz

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Yadash Bakahir ham bhi aadi thay dil lagi kay
Ab khwab ki hain batein qissay thay jo kabhi kay

( .......... can u give any example of afsancha Fari ji? .... english mein afsancha kya hota hai /thinking

walaikum asalam


thanx aapa itna mazzay ka silsila shroo karnay par /blush6 ab dekhiye kia kia parhnay ko milta hai...

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itni labi detail tumharay leay hi to likhi thi mujhay pata tha tum zaroor poocho gi :-p

English main to kabhi nahin perha Afsancha yeh speciality hai Urdu ki

chalo koshish karoon gi jaldi kuch likhoon main bhi werna aur bhi to hain itnay achay achay likhnay walay wait till some one contributes


Take care /yhug

You are welcome sweety /yhug

Main bhi intezar main hoon achay achay contributions ki aur dekh rahi hoon MashaAllah say ronaq ho rahi hai is sec main ajkal !

Khush raho @};-

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kiya haseen shaam thi thandi tandi hawa chal rahi thi aur barish bhi khoob mazay say baras rahi thi. Hawa itni khushgawar kay kiya kehnay ,her cheez nikhri nikhri dhuli dhuli si lag rahi thi .........aur main khoobsoorat raston pay chalanay ki dhun main janay kahan say kahan chali jaa rahi thi. Aisay main agar uska sath na hota to na wo mosam kay mazay hotay aur naa hi main jaan ker apna raasta taweel kerti . Dil chah raha tha kay yeh safar kabhi khatam na ho aor main yun hi chalti rahoon . /blushluv

kaisi kaisi umangain dil main ubher rahi theen qadam kahin per rahay thay aur dheyan kahin aur tha ........Sach!!! Mosam itna haseen tha kay jee chah raha tha kay poori ki poori ghazal keh doon itna shaerana sa mood ho raha tha mera ......

Achanak bijli zore say chamki aur hawa nay bhi apna josh dikhaya main to jaisay dar si gai main nay usko aur bhi zore say tham liya ....dil hi dil main khuda ka shuker ada ker rahi thi kay wo meray sath tha werna main us haseen shaam say kabhi bhi is qadar lutf andoz na ho pati /blushluv

abhi main yeh soh hi rahi thi kay aik nihayat hi taiz hawa chali aur apnay sath usko bhi ura lay gai ......haey mera chata

main to ghar say itna door nikal ai thi ...bheegtay huay wapis ghar ko atay huay main nay usko itnaaaaaaaaaaa miss kiya :-p


A'nchaL :flower