Urdu Poetry Forum

Originally Posted by mr romeo

salam dosto, i 'm a new member here and this is my first contribution in this writer's club n how's it, only u ppl can tell me better...

MERI PYAARI!!!!

Aaj phir younhi chup baithe hoye achaanak tumhara khyaal zehan ke nihan khanon se nikal ker pori soch pe chaa gaya aur phir tumhari yaadon ka ik sailaab-e-rawaan mujhe apne saath baha le gaya.

Mujhe aaj bhi woh din yaad hai jab hamara pehli martaba aamna saamna hooa tha, tumhare husn ne pehli he nazar mein mere dil mein gharr ker liya tha aur tumhara shokh pairahan tumhare husn ko chaar chaand laga raha tha. iss pehli nazar ki mohabbat ne mujhe tumhaare hasool ki koshish per majboor ker diya tha aur shayed qismat ne bhi tumhain mere baseeb mein likh diya tha. youn tum meri zindagi mein aa gayee. tumhain paa ker meri khushi ki koi inteha na thi. ik ehsaas-e-tafakhurtha jo mujh mein mojazan tha. log hamain aik saath daikh ker rashk karte thay. jab kabhi takhliye mein main tumhare bazoo ko choota tha to tum laaj ke maare mere haathon mein jhool jaati thi. tumhari woh haseen aankhain mujhe sehar zada ker daiti theen. jab hawa chalti thi to tumhare lehraate hoye gaisoo dil ko moh laite thay aur jab kabhi baadal garajte thay to tum seham jaaya kerti thi aur main tumhain pass laa ker seene se laga ker kisi saaye main le jaata tha ke kahin barasne wali baarish ki boondain tumhaare nazuk badan ki hayyat he na badal daalain. mujhe woh din bhi yaad hai ke jis din tum apne shokh pun mein girr ker khud ko zakhmi ker baithi thi aur mujhe tum ko haathon pe utha ker bari ehtiyaat se lana para tha aur phir tumhari marham patti bhi kerna pari thi. hamare darmiyan hamaahangi bhi iss qadar thi ke tum mere haathon ki halki si junbish ko bhi jaati thi aur iss pe fori amal kerti thi. bohat se log hamari iss refaaqat ke raqeeb bhi thay aur tumhain mujh se juda karne ki koshish kerte rehte thay magar main her baar unn ki chaal ko nakaam ker daita tha.

Laikin ik din to aisa hona he tha aur woh toofani din mujhe aaj bhi acchi tarah yaad hai ke jis din waqt ki taiz hawa ne tumhari zindagi zindagi ki dor kaat di aur tum mere daikhte he daikhte ufaq ke paar ja utri. aaaaaahhhhh, main tumhain aaj bhi bohat yaad kerta hoon meri pyaari PATANG!!!!!! 0:-)

Originally Posted by penzy

Adab,
myri trf sy ak kwxx. /aw2 /aw2

Originally Posted by mr romeo

salam dosto, i 'm a new member here and this is my first contribution in this writer's club n how's it, only u ppl can tell me better...

MERI PYAARI!!!!

Aaj phir younhi chup baithe hoye achaanak tumhara khyaal zehan ke nihan khanon se nikal ker pori soch pe chaa gaya aur phir tumhari yaadon ka ik sailaab-e-rawaan mujhe apne saath baha le gaya.

Mujhe aaj bhi woh din yaad hai jab hamara pehli martaba aamna saamna hooa tha, tumhare husn ne pehli he nazar mein mere dil mein gharr ker liya tha aur tumhara shokh pairahan tumhare husn ko chaar chaand laga raha tha. iss pehli nazar ki mohabbat ne mujhe tumhaare hasool ki koshish per majboor ker diya tha aur shayed qismat ne bhi tumhain mere baseeb mein likh diya tha. youn tum meri zindagi mein aa gayee. tumhain paa ker meri khushi ki koi inteha na thi. ik ehsaas-e-tafakhurtha jo mujh mein mojazan tha. log hamain aik saath daikh ker rashk karte thay. jab kabhi takhliye mein main tumhare bazoo ko choota tha to tum laaj ke maare mere haathon mein jhool jaati thi. tumhari woh haseen aankhain mujhe sehar zada ker daiti theen. jab hawa chalti thi to tumhare lehraate hoye gaisoo dil ko moh laite thay aur jab kabhi baadal garajte thay to tum seham jaaya kerti thi aur main tumhain pass laa ker seene se laga ker kisi saaye main le jaata tha ke kahin barasne wali baarish ki boondain tumhaare nazuk badan ki hayyat he na badal daalain. mujhe woh din bhi yaad hai ke jis din tum apne shokh pun mein girr ker khud ko zakhmi ker baithi thi aur mujhe tum ko haathon pe utha ker bari ehtiyaat se lana para tha aur phir tumhari marham patti bhi kerna pari thi. hamare darmiyan hamaahangi bhi iss qadar thi ke tum mere haathon ki halki si junbish ko bhi jaati thi aur iss pe fori amal kerti thi. bohat se log hamari iss refaaqat ke raqeeb bhi thay aur tumhain mujh se juda karne ki koshish kerte rehte thay magar main her baar unn ki chaal ko nakaam ker daita tha.

Laikin ik din to aisa hona he tha aur woh toofani din mujhe aaj bhi acchi tarah yaad hai ke jis din waqt ki taiz hawa ne tumhari zindagi zindagi ki dor kaat di aur tum mere daikhte he daikhte ufaq ke paar ja utri. aaaaaahhhhh, main tumhain aaj bhi bohat yaad kerta hoon meri pyaari PATANG!!!!!! 0:-)

Originally Posted by farooqmalik

aor us aakhri ka baqiya hissa yahan hey...ab ghalti ho gai...INSHALLAH aainda nahein ho gi..........aor ghalat attachment ki dobara maafi....sab se...ok?? /aw2 ..../dua

Originally Posted by Roshni

Originally Posted by A'nchaL

kiya haseen shaam thi thandi tandi hawa chal rahi thi aur barish bhi khoob mazay say baras rahi thi. Hawa itni khushgawar kay kiya kehnay ,her cheez nikhri nikhri dhuli dhuli si lag rahi thi .........aur main khoobsoorat raston pay chalanay ki dhun main janay kahan say kahan chali jaa rahi thi. Aisay main agar uska sath na hota to na wo mosam kay mazay hotay aur naa hi main jaan ker apna raasta taweel kerti . Dil chah raha tha kay yeh safar kabhi khatam na ho aor main yun hi chalti rahoon . /blushluv

kaisi kaisi umangain dil main ubher rahi theen qadam kahin per rahay thay aur dheyan kahin aur tha ........Sach!!! Mosam itna haseen tha kay jee chah raha tha kay poori ki poori ghazal keh doon itna shaerana sa mood ho raha tha mera ......

Achanak bijli zore say chamki aur hawa nay bhi apna josh dikhaya main to jaisay dar si gai main nay usko aur bhi zore say tham liya ....dil hi dil main khuda ka shuker ada ker rahi thi kay wo meray sath tha werna main us haseen shaam say kabhi bhi is qadar lutf andoz na ho pati /blushluv

abhi main yeh soh hi rahi thi kay aik nihayat hi taiz hawa chali aur apnay sath usko bhi ura lay gai ......haey mera chata

main to ghar say itna door nikal ai thi ...bheegtay huay wapis ghar ko atay huay main nay usko itnaaaaaaaaaaa miss kiya :-p


A'nchaL :flower