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**wild child** · #51 02-08-2004, 06:04 PM

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pasandeedgi ka shukriya wild child bhai....

bhaaiiiii

khuda kay liay mr romeo /skull me a gal not a guy

/hypnotize

**farooqmalik** · #52 02-09-2004, 04:44 AM

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Originally Posted by A'nchaL

WalekumAssalam Farooq bhai

Uff khudaya ...itni muafiyan ......ghalti insaan say hi hoti hai aur ismain konsa itni bari baat hai

aap usi post ko edit bhi ker saktay thay aur esay bhi theek hai ........
abhi comments next time doon gi apkay afsanchay pay abhi save kiya hai bas /blush

khush rahain .........and no sorrys (for this type of issue atleast) next time okay

:flower

Assalam-o-alaikum a'nchal baji....first of all......,i am so thankful for ur responce........& hope that u will guide me time by time.....next as u have said that "GHALTIYAN INSAN SE HO HE JATI HAIN"...tomain nay bhi isi ka izhaar kiya hey...any way thanks a lot for ur reply....

**farooqmalik** · #53 02-09-2004, 04:52 AM

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Originally Posted by A'nchaL

Hanjee farooq bhai Apki teenon tehreerain perheen .........

first one too sad yet so true :(
second one Ironic and so true again :S aisa aksar hota hai ......qol-ofail main tazad :(
third one funny and u said its true too

Thanks for ur contributions @};-

Khush rahain :flower

In ki pasand ka bohat sara shukriya......magar main nay yeh sirf aik idea diya tha...& I WILL suggest u to please never count these AFSANCHAY in ur competetion......... HOPEFUL............o k?

**farooqmalik** · #54 02-09-2004, 04:57 AM

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Originally Posted by NainTara

bouhat achaa likhaa hai aap ney...

Assalam-o-alaikum...Thanks a lot naintara for ur good responce...hope that u will next time too reply me & share ur views.....THANKS AGAIN /yhug

**farooqmalik** · #55 02-09-2004, 06:15 AM

assalam-o-alaikum fari baji(a'nchal)...Hoep that u will be fine there...first of all...i would like to appreciate u for this beautiful & healthy competetion...
Next thanks for ur responce on my posted afsanchays.....
as i have said that i am involved in writing articles.....then u r right here but i also will asked u that we have a forum named Pakistan Children n youth forum....& our president Mazhar bhai( my best friend) has written a book last days on child literature(bacho'n ka adab)...in which he has introduced first time the afsanchays 4 children....& this book was selected for the competetion of National Book Foundation & International Islamic University.....Islam abad(DAWAH ACADEMY)....
& The Incharge of teh competetion was decleared that mazhar bhai is the inventor of AFSANCHAYS 4 CHildren.......& this book is the first book on this topic....the afsanchays of this book are as my posted afsanchays.....
but this does not means that i am a good afsancha navees....thats are only a sample so i would like to prefer that plz don't select my afanchays for ur competetion....becau se as i knows.....there are so many types of afsanchays....like ......sad...funny... .serious.....romanti c......realistic & many more....but in ur Choice.....u have asked for funny afsanchays & i don't think that my posted afsanchays are suitable for ur competetion........t hat's why i will suggest u to please never select mine's
now for the next time i would like to asked u that when ever u decide for such types of competetion.....,the n categories it that what is the topic(topic is less important) or what is the style........ if there is no style...then asked for simply afsancha & then making a result.....justify that what afsancha is best(from every category)....iss tarah aap kay paass sad...serious...funn y....realistic yani matloba category main afsanchay aa jain gay aor un main aap har category main 1st...2nd & special prize ka ailaan kar dain......ok.....?wa iting for ur responce....Take care
& ALLAH HAFIZ

sample>>>>>>>>>

AFSANCHA
category 1......sad
=======2......funny
=======3......seriou s
=======4......realis tic
then for result.......!
From category .....1...(sad).....1 st....2nd....special prize....
===========......2.. ..(funny)...===....= ===.....=======
===========......3.. ...(serious)....===. ..=====...======
===========......4.. ...(realistic).....= ====....======....== ===

this is the idea...as i think......
from here if u r desire...y can choose that what afsancha is all time faourite either it's from any category........ok.. .....& ALLAH HAFIZ
waiting for ur responce.......

mr romeo · #56 02-09-2004, 11:18 AM

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Originally Posted by wild child

bhaaiiiii

khuda kay liay mr romeo /skull me a gal not a guy

/hypnotize

oooooooooops, error of judgement ho gaya, sovy /dua

PS: waise guy hona itna "shocking" bhi nahi hota.... ;;)

**wild child** · #57 02-09-2004, 05:34 PM

kabhi experience nai kiya na guy bannay ka /laugh2

so i dont know if its adventurous or not

**Pardese** · #58 02-10-2004, 09:16 PM

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Originally Posted by A'nchaL

Piary doston aur azeez sathiyon ,

AssalamoAlekum ,

Jahan-e-fun kay silsilay ka doosra Muqabla lay ker apki khidmat main hazir hui hoon Umeed hai Aap is main bharpoor shirkat kerkay is sislilay ko aur bhi dilchasp aur kamiyab banaen gay @};-

Is dafa ka topic hai Muqabla-e-Afsancha !
Afsancha Kiya hai ?
Aik aisi choti si tehreer jo afsana kay andaz main likhi jaey aur is main tajassus qayam kiya jaey kuch is tarhan say kay akhir main perhnay walay lay labon per muskan zaroor ani chaheay

yani kay adab ki yeh sinf Mazah ka hissa hai aik halka phiuka mazah !
Aaam tor per is main kisi madi cheez ko is tarhan say paish kiya jata hai kay wo jeti jagti shakhsiyyat lagay aur afsanchay kay akhir main ja ker pata chalay kay yeh to koi isnan nahin balkay is kahani ka hero yah heroen mehez aik madi cheez tha/thi .

Umeed hai apko samajh a gaya hoga kay kis andaz ki tehreer likhni hai .....

Mujhay maloom hai ap main say bohat say log adab ki is sinf say waqif hongay magar jinhon nay pehlay Afsancha kay baray main nahin suna perha main nay unkay leay wazahat kerna munasib samjha @};-

sab sathiyon kay Afsanchon ka intezar rahay ga Shukriya , @};-

Regards,

A'nchaL @};-

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assalam-o-alaikum fari baji(a'nchal)...Hoep that u will be fine there...first of all...i would like to appreciate u for this beautiful & healthy competetion...
Next thanks for ur responce on my posted afsanchays.....
as i have said that i am involved in writing articles.....then u r right here but i also will asked u that we have a forum named Pakistan Children n youth forum....& our president Mazhar bhai( my best friend) has written a book last days on child literature(bacho'n ka adab)...in which he has introduced first time the afsanchays 4 children....& this book was selected for the competetion of National Book Foundation & International Islamic University.....Islam abad(DAWAH ACADEMY)....
& The Incharge of teh competetion was decleared that mazhar bhai is the inventor of AFSANCHAYS 4 CHildren.......& this book is the first book on this topic....the afsanchays of this book are as my posted afsanchays.....
but this does not means that i am a good afsancha navees....thats are only a sample so i would like to prefer that plz don't select my afanchays for ur competetion....becau se as i knows.....there are so many types of afsanchays....like ......sad...funny....serious.....roma ntic......realistic & many more....but in ur Choice.....u have asked for funny afsanchays & i don't think that my posted afsanchays are suitable for ur competetion........t hat's why i will suggest u to please never select mine's
now for the next time i would like to asked u that when ever u decide for such types of competetion.....,the n categories it that what is the topic(topic is less important) or what is the style........ if there is no style...then asked for simply afsancha & then making a result.....justify that what afsancha is best(from every category)....iss tarah aap kay paass sad...serious...funn y....realistic yani matloba category main afsanchay aa jain gay aor un main aap har category main 1st...2nd & special prize ka ailaan kar dain......ok.....?wa iting for ur responce....Take care
& ALLAH HAFIZ

sample>>>>>>>>>

AFSANCHA
category 1......sad
=======2......funny
=======3......seriou s
=======4......realis tic
then for result.......!
From category .....1...(sad).....1 st....2nd....special prize....
===========......2.. ..(funny)...===....= ===.....=======
===========......3.. ...(serious)....===. ..=====...======
===========......4.. ...(realistic).....= ====....======....== ===
this is the idea...as i think......
from here if u r desire...y can choose that what afsancha is all time faourite either it's from any category........ok.. .....& ALLAH HAFIZ
waiting for ur responce.......

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mr romeo · #59 02-10-2004, 10:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by wild child

kabhi experience nai kiya na guy bannay ka /laugh2

so i dont know if its adventurous or not

ohhhh!!! u 've missed such a wonderful xperience... /cool2

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