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Aapi Jani /yhug

ek Afsancha meri taraf say bhi :blush

@};- Hamna ka chota bhai Aman jitna khoobsoorat aur piyara tha, utna hi nakchira aur laraka bhi .Donon ka apas main ziyada umer ka farq nahin tha is leay noke jhoke chalti hi rehti thi ...us din bhi shayad Aman Humna say ler ker ghar kay samnay walay darakht kay neechay Aa ker baith gaya tha .Bechara Aman aik to wesay hi mood kharab tha uska aur uper say sonay pay sohaga usko satanay wo bhi wahan aan pohnchi ....kabhi daen say a ker chairti to kabhi baen say .......jaisay kaan main kuch kehna chahti ho .........bhala mood bhi ho to Aman ka sunnay wala ....wo bechari apni adat say majboor thi usko kiya maloom tha k janab bezaar baithay hain.............us waqt to Aman ka bas nahin chal raha tha kay sab usay tanha chore dain ..........aur koi usko na sataey ....janay kiya wajha thi jo usko isqadar chirchirahat ho rahi thi ........Magar in madam nay bhi na baaz Aana tha na ai mustaqil usay tang kerti rahi ..........jitna bhi Aman usay peechay dhakailta wo utna hi usay chipatti jati thi ...Gussay aur chirchirahat main Aman nay us per hath bhi uthaya .......magar wo bhi ziddi ki ziddi thi shayad usko Aman kay gussay ka builkul andaza nahin hua werna agar zara bhi samajhdar hoti to baaz a jati uswaqt Aman ki jaan chore deti......bechari wo ......mujhay to us bechari masoom per itna tars a raha tha k bas ab iski shamat ai k ai ...........Nanhi si jaan aur itna ghussa
..........Aman nay bhi chain ka saans na liya jab tak us say jaan na chura li ..............Mar dala bechari Makhi ko ...........Poor street fly



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In afsaanchon mein bayan karda tamam kirdaar farzi aur khayali hain, kisi kism ki mutabiqat mehaz ittefaqiya hogi jis keliye musannif ya HG qatan zimmadaar nahin.

"Abhi woh dard baqi hai.."

Pehli nazar mein mujhey bilkul bhi aachhi nahin lagi balkay kuchh hasad mehsoos hua ke us kay aaney sey ghar mein meri markazi hasiat khatam ho gai thi, jisey daikho us ki khatar daarian kar raha hai, bawarchi ho, driver ya ghar waley sabhi ke zubaan par us ka naam tha,aur aik main hi in sab mein wahid banda tha jo us ko tang karney ka koi mauqa haath say na janey deta, par majal jo us sabr ki putli ney koi shikwa kia ho, har sitam hans ke saha,haan kabhi kabhi aesi gehri nazron sey daikhti goya keh rahi ho

"tum" apni waza na badlo ham apni khoo na chhorein gay
subaksar ban ke poochhein gay ke ham se sargiraan kyun ho

"kabhi to tumharey dil mein bhi chahat ka deep jaley ga aur tab tum samjho gey ke muhabbat kya cheez hai", aur phir aesa hi hua, Main! jo apni zaat mein gum rehta tha, us ka aesa aseer hua ke usey deikhey bina chain na aata, kahan to us ka wajood bhi khatakta tha aur kahan yeh haalat ke kabhi baagh mein
ikaththey chehal qami karna to kabhi nehar ke kinarey ke kinarey,bethey ghanton bita dena, zindagi yakdam hi bohat rangeen, bohat khoobsoorat lagna shuroo ho gai

thi, Yeh khushgawaar tabdeeli sabhi ney mehsoos ki,behnein to uska naam ley ley kar mujhey chhairteen,
yaar dost alag nalaan ke unhein waqt nahi de pata, mera sara waqt to ab us ke naam tha, wo thi main tha aur bas!!!
par shayad is muhabbat ko zamaney ki nazar lag gayi aur us ki rawangi ka mazda suna dia gya,meri to rooh pe goya nishtar hi chal gaye,than li ke uski khatir

sarey zamaney sey takra jaaonga,Walid saab ko saaf saaf

keh dia ke woh meri pasand hai,kahin nahi jayegi, par unkey nazdeek yeh sab aarzi baatein thi, meri har baat sakhti se rad kardi gayi,kisi ne bhi meri na suni, aur to aur khud woh bhi meri himayat mein kuchh na boli ke kaheen uski waja sey ghar ka sakoon na kharab ho.

Subh us ney mujhey chhor kar chaley jana tha, yeh raat bohat bhaari thi, main us ke kamrey mein gaya to woh jaag rahi thi shayad mera hi intezaar tha ke aik baar
to milney aayonga,aaj main ney uskey saamney dil khol kar rakh dia,har baat keh dali,woh bhi sar jhukaye chup chap sunti rahi ke phir yeh mauqa mile na mile,
Subha ka sooraj merey liye qayamat ki ghari ley kar aaya ,dunya khush thi

magar mera dil nihayat udaas aur muztarib..."kash kuchh

mojaza ho jaye,kisi tarah waqt ki tanabein kheinch loon aur usey rok loon par"

jaaney walon ko kahan rok saka hai koi
tum chaley ho to koi rokney wala bhi nahin

aur judaai ka woh lamha bhi aan puhncha, shiddat-e-karb sey main ney aankhein band karlein, kesey dikh sakta tha mein us ke galey par qasai ki chhuri chaltey huwe, aah
muhabbat naam hi qurbaani ka hai, yeh baat meri pyari

gaaye "Chhanno" se barh kar kaun samjha sakta tha.


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/aoa

yeh aik aur

"Kuchh Ishq tha..."
Uski aur meri rafaqat kaii saalon pe muheet thi, hosh sanbhalney par woh pehla chehra hai jo meri yad.dasht mein ubhrta hai,ghar ke sab fard to wese bhi uskey deewaney thay, hotey bhi kyun na, bananey waley ney usey bari fursat mein banaya tha, Mardana wajahat ka mukammal shahkar,jo bhi usey daikhta, daikhta hi reh
jata,sahelian uski tareef karteen to mera wajood aik ajab sarshari mein doob jata, shayad usi ke liye Faiz ney kaha tha

Woh to woh hai, tumhein ho jaye gi ulfat mujh say
ik nazar tum mera mehboob-e-nazar to daikho

uski pasanad napasand, khaney peeney, gharz har chhez ki zimmedari main ney apney sar lay rakhkhi thi, baji ke baqol mein to pagal thi,
haan main uske peechhey pagal hi to hogai thi, din ka chain na raat ka aaraam, sab usi pe taj dia tha par shayd meri tamam tar muhabbat aur khaloos bhi us paththar dil
ko pighla na saka, kuchh loagon ki qismat mein sirf naarsai hi likhkhi hoti hai,unki tamam tar wafaain, muhabbatein aur chahatein raaigaan jati hain,yehi merey
saath hua, meri saheeli ney jab uskeliye apni khwahish ka
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bisaat, "Aesa kyun hota hai ke jinhein ham chahtey hain
wohi hamara dil tor ke chaley jaatey hain,jin sey wafa ki
ummedein hoti hain, wohi

har naye maur pe ik zakhm naya detey hain

zindagi ik zehr bhara jaam ban jaati hai jisey piye bina koi chara nahin", so us ki khatir yeh bhi kia, uski tamam khushion mein barh charh kar shareek hui par is tarah ke

merey honton pe dikhawe ka tabassum "tha" magar
meri aankhon mein udaasi kay diye jaltey "thay"

aaj woh apni nayi zindagi mein bohat khush hai, uska to pata nahin par main ab bhi uski chahat ki aseer hoon, kash ke main uski ho pati par qismat ka likha kaun taley,

yehi kya kam hai ke woh ab bhi meri nigahon ke saamney hai, usey daikh kar hi khush hojati hoon aur har dam aik hi dua merey labon pe rehti hai

"Guddey Guddi ki jori salamat rahey"



Allah hafiz
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Originally Posted by Roshni


Aapi Jani /yhug

ek Afsancha meri taraf say bhi :blush

@};- Hamna ka chota bhai Aman jitna khoobsoorat aur piyara tha, utna hi nakchira aur laraka bhi .Donon ka apas main ziyada umer ka farq nahin tha is leay noke jhoke chalti hi rehti thi ...us din bhi shayad Aman Humna say ler ker ghar kay samnay walay darakht kay neechay Aa ker baith gaya tha .Bechara Aman aik to wesay hi mood kharab tha uska aur uper say sonay pay sohaga usko satanay wo bhi wahan aan pohnchi ....kabhi daen say a ker chairti to kabhi baen say .......jaisay kaan main kuch kehna chahti ho .........bhala mood bhi ho to Aman ka sunnay wala ....wo bechari apni adat say majboor thi usko kiya maloom tha k janab bezaar baithay hain.............us waqt to Aman ka bas nahin chal raha tha kay sab usay tanha chore dain ..........aur koi usko na sataey ....janay kiya wajha thi jo usko isqadar chirchirahat ho rahi thi ........Magar in madam nay bhi na baaz Aana tha na ai mustaqil usay tang kerti rahi ..........jitna bhi Aman usay peechay dhakailta wo utna hi usay chipatti jati thi ...Gussay aur chirchirahat main Aman nay us per hath bhi uthaya .......magar wo bhi ziddi ki ziddi thi shayad usko Aman kay gussay ka builkul andaza nahin hua werna agar zara bhi samajhdar hoti to baaz a jati uswaqt Aman ki jaan chore deti......bechari wo ......mujhay to us bechari masoom per itna tars a raha tha k bas ab iski shamat ai k ai ...........Nanhi si jaan aur itna ghussa
..........Aman nay bhi chain ka saans na liya jab tak us say jaan na chura li ..............Mar dala bechari Makhi ko ...........Poor street fly



/dontsee


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Kehte hain ankhon ke zerye dil ke raaz perh lena assan hai....leken main ku na perh sake wo ankhain,jin main sirf aik lalach thi....shayad insan kabhi kabhi sub kuch jante bojte bhi anjan bana rehta hai....
yeh he howa mere sath bhi sub kuch jannne ke bawajod mian anjan bane rahe aur..... apni azezz e jan husti ko koh deya.....kabhi socha hia app ne aise kisi ko apni he ghalati ki waja se koh dena.....kaisa hai....bhot dukh hota haina ? aisa lagta hai ke ager mian tora sa dehyan dete in ankhon per jin main lalach thi.....tu phir na hota jo hogaya.....app soch r ahe honge ke akhir aisa kiya howa hai mian main bhi app ko batana chahte hon ke mere sath kiya saneha howa hai....tu suneye aur ayenda ke liye app bhi in lalchi ankhon se hosheyar rahain.....
"mere tooto ko bili kah gaye" /udaas


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In afsaanchon mein bayan karda tamam kirdaar farzi aur khayali hain, kisi kism ki mutabiqat mehaz ittefaqiya hogi jis keliye musannif ya HG qatan zimmadaar nahin.

"Abhi woh dard baqi hai.."

Pehli nazar mein mujhey bilkul bhi aachhi nahin lagi balkay kuchh hasad mehsoos hua ke us kay aaney sey ghar mein meri markazi hasiat khatam ho gai thi, jisey daikho us ki khatar daarian kar raha hai, bawarchi ho, driver ya ghar waley sabhi ke zubaan par us ka naam tha,aur aik main hi in sab mein wahid banda tha jo us ko tang karney ka koi mauqa haath say na janey deta, par majal jo us sabr ki putli ney koi shikwa kia ho, har sitam hans ke saha,haan kabhi kabhi aesi gehri nazron sey daikhti goya keh rahi ho

"tum" apni waza na badlo ham apni khoo na chhorein gay
subaksar ban ke poochhein gay ke ham se sargiraan kyun ho

"kabhi to tumharey dil mein bhi chahat ka deep jaley ga aur tab tum samjho gey ke muhabbat kya cheez hai", aur phir aesa hi hua, Main! jo apni zaat mein gum rehta tha, us ka aesa aseer hua ke usey deikhey bina chain na aata, kahan to us ka wajood bhi khatakta tha aur kahan yeh haalat ke kabhi baagh mein
ikaththey chehal qami karna to kabhi nehar ke kinarey ke kinarey,bethey ghanton bita dena, zindagi yakdam hi bohat rangeen, bohat khoobsoorat lagna shuroo ho gai

thi, Yeh khushgawaar tabdeeli sabhi ney mehsoos ki,behnein to uska naam ley ley kar mujhey chhairteen,
yaar dost alag nalaan ke unhein waqt nahi de pata, mera sara waqt to ab us ke naam tha, wo thi main tha aur bas!!!
par shayad is muhabbat ko zamaney ki nazar lag gayi aur us ki rawangi ka mazda suna dia gya,meri to rooh pe goya nishtar hi chal gaye,than li ke uski khatir

sarey zamaney sey takra jaaonga,Walid saab ko saaf saaf

keh dia ke woh meri pasand hai,kahin nahi jayegi, par unkey nazdeek yeh sab aarzi baatein thi, meri har baat sakhti se rad kardi gayi,kisi ne bhi meri na suni, aur to aur khud woh bhi meri himayat mein kuchh na boli ke kaheen uski waja sey ghar ka sakoon na kharab ho.

Subh us ney mujhey chhor kar chaley jana tha, yeh raat bohat bhaari thi, main us ke kamrey mein gaya to woh jaag rahi thi shayad mera hi intezaar tha ke aik baar
to milney aayonga,aaj main ney uskey saamney dil khol kar rakh dia,har baat keh dali,woh bhi sar jhukaye chup chap sunti rahi ke phir yeh mauqa mile na mile,
Subha ka sooraj merey liye qayamat ki ghari ley kar aaya ,dunya khush thi

magar mera dil nihayat udaas aur muztarib..."kash kuchh

mojaza ho jaye,kisi tarah waqt ki tanabein kheinch loon aur usey rok loon par"

jaaney walon ko kahan rok saka hai koi
tum chaley ho to koi rokney wala bhi nahin

aur judaai ka woh lamha bhi aan puhncha, shiddat-e-karb sey main ney aankhein band karlein, kesey dikh sakta tha mein us ke galey par qasai ki chhuri chaltey huwe, aah
muhabbat naam hi qurbaani ka hai, yeh baat meri pyari

gaaye "Chhanno" se barh kar kaun samjha sakta tha.


Allah hafiz


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Nice one khoob tajasus raha wesay I was expecting a cat /dontsee
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yeh aik aur

"Kuchh Ishq tha..."
Uski aur meri rafaqat kaii saalon pe muheet thi, hosh sanbhalney par woh pehla chehra hai jo meri yad.dasht mein ubhrta hai,ghar ke sab fard to wese bhi uskey deewaney thay, hotey bhi kyun na, bananey waley ney usey bari fursat mein banaya tha, Mardana wajahat ka mukammal shahkar,jo bhi usey daikhta, daikhta hi reh
jata,sahelian uski tareef karteen to mera wajood aik ajab sarshari mein doob jata, shayad usi ke liye Faiz ney kaha tha

Woh to woh hai, tumhein ho jaye gi ulfat mujh say
ik nazar tum mera mehboob-e-nazar to daikho

uski pasanad napasand, khaney peeney, gharz har chhez ki zimmedari main ney apney sar lay rakhkhi thi, baji ke baqol mein to pagal thi,
haan main uske peechhey pagal hi to hogai thi, din ka chain na raat ka aaraam, sab usi pe taj dia tha par shayd meri tamam tar muhabbat aur khaloos bhi us paththar dil
ko pighla na saka, kuchh loagon ki qismat mein sirf naarsai hi likhkhi hoti hai,unki tamam tar wafaain, muhabbatein aur chahatein raaigaan jati hain,yehi merey
saath hua, meri saheeli ney jab uskeliye apni khwahish ka
izhaar kia to aik lamhey ko goya kaainat ki gardish tham si gayi,har shay dolti hui mehsoos hui, aankhon taley andhera chha gaya,par uski bhi yehi marzi thi to meri kya
bisaat, "Aesa kyun hota hai ke jinhein ham chahtey hain
wohi hamara dil tor ke chaley jaatey hain,jin sey wafa ki
ummedein hoti hain, wohi

har naye maur pe ik zakhm naya detey hain

zindagi ik zehr bhara jaam ban jaati hai jisey piye bina koi chara nahin", so us ki khatir yeh bhi kia, uski tamam khushion mein barh charh kar shareek hui par is tarah ke

merey honton pe dikhawe ka tabassum "tha" magar
meri aankhon mein udaasi kay diye jaltey "thay"

aaj woh apni nayi zindagi mein bohat khush hai, uska to pata nahin par main ab bhi uski chahat ki aseer hoon, kash ke main uski ho pati par qismat ka likha kaun taley,

yehi kya kam hai ke woh ab bhi meri nigahon ke saamney hai, usey daikh kar hi khush hojati hoon aur har dam aik hi dua merey labon pe rehti hai

"Guddey Guddi ki jori salamat rahey"



Allah hafiz
Another nice one
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Old 02-16-2004, 05:09 AM
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