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RulesThis is a discussion on muhabbat...aik bichri hovi dastaan within the Urdu Writer's Club forums, part of the Urdu Adab category; .... bhuat zaam tha apni muhabbat pe,us se ziyada apni wafa pe, dua pe...aaj sarey bhram toot gaye, sab kuch ...
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#1
04-14-2006, 12:31 AM
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....bhuat zaam tha apni muhabbat pe,us se ziyada apni wafa pe, dua pe...aaj sarey bhram toot gaye, sab kuch aik jhoot ke siwa kuch nahin tha...aaj uss larki nay apni muhabbat ki akhri nishani bhi kho di,apni muhabbat ko mazi kay koney main dafan kar diya uss nay."mayoosi nahin, sabar ki inthah hai yeh"..keh kar apney dil ko samjaha diya uss nay. muhabbatoon kay qasseday parnhey wali aaj muhabbat se apna aitbaar gunwa chuki hai. aik shakaz ki muhabat nay uss ka har rishta muhabbat se khali kar diya. kisi rukey hovey lamhey main uss se jo khata hovi thi,zindgi bhar uss nay uss ki saza bhugti..bus aik choti si baat uss ki samajh main dair se ayi keh ''muhabbat uss ki kismat main nahin" aur kabhi ussey sirf muhabbat chahiye thi, aik uss shakaz ki muhabbat,aaj ussy sirf muhabbat ki talab nahin.....
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#2
04-14-2006, 09:05 AM
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kaisi hain aap ........ Hmmmmm Mayoosi nahi saber ki intaha hai yeh ..... kia baat hai janab ..... yeh tehreer parh kar muje nahi lagta kay aap sirf 17 sal ki ho gi .... tehreer main Sha'oor ki jhalak hai aur sooch main kisi Tajrubay ka Akkas ... Bohut khoooB bohut maza aya yeh parh kar .... aur aap ki tehreer nay aik bohut achi writer ki yaad dila di shayed kabhi aap ne parha ho unhain "Shazia Chaudhary"
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#3
04-17-2006, 12:55 AM
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w.salam main alhumdulillah theek, aap? tehhreer pasand karney ka bhuat bhuat shukriya, hoon tu 17 hi lagti 13 hoon(choti si hon na) samajdar kahan jee , abhi tu tamam umer nadani ki galtiyoon ki kabhi saza tu kabhi khumyaza bhugatna hai....haan rahi baat tajurbay ki tu woh tu har guzarta hova lamha sikha hi deta hai, mujhey bhi shaid kisi rukay hovey, dortay hovey ya pher chaltey hovey lamhey nay sikha diya...abhi sirf akas hai tajurbay ka, zindgi tu in se bhari pari hai....hai na..woh "shazia choudhary" ko kabhi parha nahin, acha likhti hain? aap ka nik name falak hai yah real name? bhuat khubsorat hai.... zameen pe rehnay waley bhuat se loog issey paney ki tamana kartey hain per zameen, asmaan kay mail bhi kabhi hova kartey hain kiya? anywayz aap apna khiyal rakhiye ga aur hosakey tu duaoon main kabhi bhooley se yaad kar lijye ga. khuda karey aap hamesha khush raheen. Dua go Khamoshi Quote:
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#4
04-17-2006, 02:54 PM
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hmmm wo kehte hain k apni sooch zaroor ounchi rakho shayed aik din moqadar ko hara kar chand pa hi lo ...... aur Lamhoon kay Qaidi jo hote hain na achi larki wo SAdiyoon baad bhi Paband-e-Salasel hi rehte hain yeh baat yaad rakhna ... Insha ALLAH tum meri dua'oon main raho gi aaj say Khush rehna Seekho Pagal larki |
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#5
04-20-2006, 06:45 AM
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writers main khush'amdeed apko... 1.gif ")1") bohot khoob para likha hai... andaaz'e bayaan kafi acha hai... mazeed likhti raheyega...aur ham se share karti raheye @};- khush rahein..
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#6
04-20-2006, 05:00 PM
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salam thankz shareen, apna khiyal rakhiye ga dua go Khamoshi |
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04-20-2006, 05:10 PM
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Hmmm.....nice.....te rz-e-tehreer bohot umdah hai...aur ummeed hai ke aap aik acha plot chunnain to use bakhoobi kaifer-ekirdaar tuk pohoncha sekain gee... Ab likhti rehiye ga...aaj kel waise hi awaam bore bethi rehti hai...pata nahin kiyoon....  |
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04-25-2006, 10:10 PM
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salam theer ko pasand karney ka shukriya, awaam bore kuan hai? itni sari fikrien kahan unsaan ko aaj kal bore honey deti hian jee.. apna khiyal rakhiye ga dua go Khamoshi Quote:
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