Urdu Poetry Forum

Assalam o alaikum dosto
ye mazmoon bohat arsa pehle likha tha, yahan is ko dobara post kerne ka maqsad ye he k aap jahan is mein mojood zuban ki khameyon ki nishandahi karein wahan is nazreya-e-mohabbat per bhi tanqeed karein.
aap ki aara ka muntazir

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Asalam-0-Alyekum...

Kaise hain aap Bhai jee ??

Hmmmmmm.... Sochne kay kaye Dar WAA kar diye hain aap ki is tehreer nay waise tu zehan main kaye batain a rahi hain par pehlay jo aik baat main aap se poochna chah raha houn wo kar loun ........ Aap ke is Mazmon ke baad mare zehan main aya hai k Mohabat ki tareef aise bhi tu ki ja sakti hai na ( aap k Mazmon ki Zar-e-asar keh raha houn )

"Insaan Apne NaAsuda Jazboun ki Takmeel K Liye Kisi Dosre Insaan ka Wajoud Talash Karta Hai aur Usi ko Mohabat Ka Naam day daita hai"

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*Apna Khyal Rukhiye Ga Aur Agar Ho Sake Tu Dosrun Ka Bhi*

walaikum assalam bhaii. aap ne jo tareef ki he us k pehle hisse se mein ittefaaq karon ga, yaanii insaan apne Na asuda jazbon ki takmeel k liye kisi dusre insaan ka wajood talash kerta he, yahan agarche na asuda jazbon se agar aap ki murad apni zaat ka kilaa he to ye woe baat he jo mein ne mazmoon mein kahi he, leykin jazbon ki takmeel agar mehz khahishon ki takmeel he to pir ye baat zara mukhtalif he, is leye k khahishein kabhi to us khila ki peyda kerda hotii hein jo her insaan apne saath le ker is duneya mein aata he, aor kabhi wo khahishein insaan k apne mahool se interect kerne se peyda hotii hein. Aap ki dusari baat k jazbon ki takmeel ko mohabbat kehna, is se mein shayad ittefaaq na ker sakon. jazbon ki takmeel ya is k leye jo lafz mein ne istemaal kia he yaanii 'zarurat' mohabbat k leye moharrik ka kaam dete hein, leykin ye zarurat mohabbat nahein hotii, yaanii ye zarurat aik moharrik to he leykin mohabbat is ka lazmi natija nahein. yahan is farq ko samne rakhne ki zarurat he.

inaam bhai

aik baar phir aap ki ye tehreer parhi hai aur pehlai sai zayada achi lagi hai har baat ko aap nai bauhat khoobi sai bayaan kiya hai

khush rahiyai

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ufffffffffffffff inaaaaaaaam bhai itneeeeeeee mushkil bataiNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN sach maiN sar par say guzar gaiN

ye tehreer paRh kay andaza hua aap ka mutalla to buhut heeeeeeee zabardst hay veryyyyyyyyy nice ( sar par say guzarnay wali baat mazaqan kahi hay lekin samjhnay maiN waqee mujhay to kafi diqqat hoi )

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Achaa aur purmaghaz mazmoon jiss kii jitnii bhee tareef kii jaeyey kam hoo gii aap ney apney mushaidhey sey jo baateyn keyn qabil-e-tahseen heyn3

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adaab USTAD E MOHTARAM

beri hi umda tehreer hay bilkhasoos misalain kafi sada aur sahal biyaan ki hain.........maira aik masla hay ....ham jab kisi bhi jazbay ko mukhtalif hisso mein pat.tay hein to kiya zaroori hay hay un ki zarurat bhi aik hi rahay ya har tukray ki apni zarurat hojati hay.........yaani sab ki eka'iya mukhtalif ho jaiN????? kiya aisa hona hi chahiay ya aisa hota hay????

sawal shaid gol mool hay per aap samjh gai hooN gain CONFUSION kiya hay

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koii aasaib hey ta'aluq mein
qurb chah ho to fasla ho jaey

hmmek aisa sach jissay insaan buhat dair may wubool karta hay