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'' Maa'n Ka Lams '' ماں کآ لمس

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Old 05-15-2007, 10:43 AM
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Duniya Mai'n Mohabbat Owr Shafqat Say Ziyada Achcha, Shifa Bakhsh Owr Rahat Afza Koi Jazba Nahi...
Mohabbat Ka Jazba Hi Zindagi Hay, Khushi Hay Owr Hamaray Wujood Ki Bunyaad Owr Usool Hay...

Bouhat Say Zehni Amraaz Honay Ki Bunyadi Wajha Sirf Yahi Hay Kay Ziyada Tar Maao'n Nay Apnay Bachcho'n Ko Seenay Say Laga Kar Loriya'n Day Kar Sulana Tark Kar Diya Hay...Na Hi Woh Ab Apnay Bachcho'n Kay Saath Khud Khailti Hai'n Owr Na Hi Unhai'n Jhoola Jhulati Hai'n...

Yeh Jadeed Nazariya Kay Bachcho'n Par Jitni Kam Tawajoh Di Jaey Un Kay Haq Mai'n Utna Hi Behter Hota Hay Owr Woh Aik Mazboot Shakhsiyat Kay Haamil Hotay Hai'n, Yeh Aik Intehaai Sharr Pasand Nazariya Hay Owr Aesi Zaalim Maao'n Kay Zehen Ki Ikhtira Hay Jo Apnay Bachcho'n Ki Parwarish Ki Zimmay Dari Say Jaan Churana Chahti Hai'n...

Maa'n Ki Qurbat Owr Us Kay Lams Mai'n Jo Taqat Hoti Hay Woh Bayaan Nahi Ki Ja Sakti...Maa'n Ki Yeh Mohabbat Bachchay Ki Jismani Owr Nafsiyati Nash.O.Numa Mai'n Ham Aahangi Paida Karnay Mai'n Sab Say Aehem Kirdaar Ada Karti Hay...

Woh Bachchay Jin Ko Apni Maao'n Kay Bazuo'n Ki Garmi, Mohabbat Ka Lams Owr Mohabbat Bhari Loriya'n Naseeb Nahi Hotee'n Woh Shadeed Aehsas-e-Mehroomi Owr Tanhaai Ka Shikaar Ho Jatay Hai'n Kiyu'n Kay Shuru Say Hi Yeh Aehsasaat Bachchay Kay La Shaoor Mai'n Paiwast Ho Jatay Hai'n...

Woh Loge Jo Khud Gharaz, Jaabir.O.Zaalim Hotay Hai'n Owr Adam Tahafuz Ka Shikaar Rehtay Hai'n, Un Mai'n Say Ziyada Tar Ka Bachpan Maa'n Ki Maamta Say Mehroom Hota Hay...

Yaqeenan Koi Maa'n Bhi Aesa Hergiz Nahi Chahay Gi Kay Us Kay Bachchay Jawaan Ho Kar Aik Ghair Mutawazin Shakhsiyat Kay Haamil Ho'n...

Sab Maao'n Ko Ghowr Karna Chahiye Kay Kahee'n Woh Apnay Bachcho'n Ko Zaalim Owr Jaabir To Nahi Bana Rahee'n?

Khuab-e-Ghaflat Say Jaag Jaaiye Owr Apni Mohabbat Kay Khazanay Apnay Bachcho'n Par Luta Dijiye Kay Is Kay Sab Say Ziyada Haq Daar Wahi Hai'n...

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haya ji aap nay bilkul theek likha hai, waqai hamaray aaj k jadeed muashray main ab maan bhi kaheen kho gae hai maan ka wo piyar jo fitri hai ab kam kam hota jaraha hai, maon nay bas apni duty banali hai k bas bachay ko waqt per school, kahan, tution,our games k liye time table bana liya hai, bachon ki tarbiyet bhi kuch masheeni si ho kar rah gae hai,
maan ka loryan sunana,bachon ka kahaniyan sunana, un ki tarbiyet k liye khud ko aala aikhlaq ka namona bana waghaira ab khtam hota jaraha hai, bas tamam zumadaryan nibha kr soch liya jata hai k unhon nay sahi tarbyet ka haq ada krdiya hai...yehi wja hai k ab bachay jab jawan hotay hain to un k pas taleem to hoti hay lakin aala ikhlaqi trbiyet say mahrom hotay hain...un k andar aik mahromi hoti hai jisay wo mahsos nahi kr patay or yehi bachay hamaray muashray ky bay trteebi ka hissa ban jatay hain
haya ji aap nay boht khobsorti say boht ahm nukta uthaya hai jis say hum log aam tor pr ghaflat brat tay hain
sada khush rahain our yonhe likhti rahain
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haya ji aap nay bilkul theek likha hai, waqai hamaray aaj k jadeed muashray main ab maan bhi kaheen kho gae hai maan ka wo piyar jo fitri hai ab kam kam hota jaraha hai, maon nay bas apni duty banali hai k bas bachay ko waqt per school, kahan, tution,our games k liye time table bana liya hai, bachon ki tarbiyet bhi kuch masheeni si ho kar rah gae hai,
maan ka loryan sunana,bachon ka kahaniyan sunana, un ki tarbiyet k liye khud ko aala aikhlaq ka namona bana waghaira ab khtam hota jaraha hai, bas tamam zumadaryan nibha kr soch liya jata hai k unhon nay sahi tarbyet ka haq ada krdiya hai...yehi wja hai k ab bachay jab jawan hotay hain to un k pas taleem to hoti hay lakin aala ikhlaqi trbiyet say mahrom hotay hain...un k andar aik mahromi hoti hai jisay wo mahsos nahi kr patay or yehi bachay hamaray muashray ky bay trteebi ka hissa ban jatay hain
haya ji aap nay boht khobsorti say boht ahm nukta uthaya hai jis say hum log aam tor pr ghaflat brat tay hain
sada khush rahain our yonhe likhti rahain
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'' Tum Achi Maa'n Mujhay Do, Mai'n Achi Qowm Tumhai'n Doo'n Ga ''

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haya yw aik aisa nukta tum nay uthaya hay jo waqae boht ahmiyat ka haamil hay,,,aaj waqe ham say wo maan ki goad bachar gai hay jis ki aaghosh main mohammad ali johar jesay jurrat nishan bachay janam liya krtay thay,,,,,
baat ye hay k hum jesay jesay qanoon e fitrat say door hotay jarahay,,,to wo fitri cheezain jo humain wadeeat ki jaati hain wo bhi usi raftar say hum say door hoti jarahi hain,,,,aisay hi maan ka mamta bhara lams hay,,maan ka lams hi hota hay jo bachay main piyar mohabt or mithas gholta hay,,yehi waja hay k aaj hamaray muashray main saffaki or darindgi barhti jarahi hay,,,,or aik cheez hay baap ka lams,baap ka lams bacha main khud aitmadi paida krta hay,,,aaj wo lams bhi bayzaari or uktaaht ki nazar hochuka hay,,,,mujhay ye parh kr boht tamniyet ka ahsaas huwa k aaj aisay log bhi ahin jo itni bareeki main ja kr sochtay hain,,,
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haya yw aik aisa nukta tum nay uthaya hay jo waqae boht ahmiyat ka haamil hay,,,aaj waqe ham say wo maan ki goad bachar gai hay jis ki aaghosh main mohammad ali johar jesay jurrat nishan bachay janam liya krtay thay,,,,,
baat ye hay k hum jesay jesay qanoon e fitrat say door hotay jarahay,,,to wo fitri cheezain jo humain wadeeat ki jaati hain wo bhi usi raftar say hum say door hoti jarahi hain,,,,aisay hi maan ka mamta bhara lams hay,,maan ka lams hi hota hay jo bachay main piyar mohabt or mithas gholta hay,,yehi waja hay k aaj hamaray muashray main saffaki or darindgi barhti jarahi hay,,,,or aik cheez hay baap ka lams,baap ka lams bacha main khud aitmadi paida krta hay,,,aaj wo lams bhi bayzaari or uktaaht ki nazar hochuka hay,,,,mujhay ye parh kr boht tamniyet ka ahsaas huwa k aaj aisay log bhi ahin jo itni bareeki main ja kr sochtay hain,,,
Saahir Ji Aap Nay Hamaisha Ki Tarha Bouhat Howsla Afzaai Ki...Aap Ki Likhi Her Baat Say Mujhay Bhi Ittifaaq Hay...Ham Kam Az Kam Apnay Apnay Gharo'n Say Yeh Bunyaad Na Mitnay Dai'n To Bhi Bouhat Kuch Sanwar Sakta Hay...Infiradi Kirdar Hi Ada Karai'n...
Saahir Ji...Sada Khush Rahiye Aameen...
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