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This is a discussion on kuch sochain uljhi suljhi si within the Urdu Writer's Club forums, part of the Urdu Adab category; Main hasb-e mamool o hasb-e aadat kamrey k ain wast main farash pe phasakkar marey bethi thi... dahni taraf shairi ...
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#1
02-28-2006, 06:35 AM
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Main hasb-e mamool o hasb-e aadat kamrey k ain wast main farash pe phasakkar marey bethi thi... dahni taraf shairi ki do chaar kitabain rakhi hoi thee.n, baaee.n taraf chand aur kitabain rakhi hoi theen... per kuch parhney main jee nahi lag raha tha ..... ajab wehshat ka alam tha.... dill ki dharkan jaise dill ki azlaati dewaroo.n sey zor zor sey sar takra rahi thi.... aur is bhonchaal sey ghabra kar dill seeney sey bahar nikal aaney ko betaab tha.... samney kaii kaghaz bikhrey howe they ... kuch maror k muranda baney howe aur jo baaqi sahi salim they un pe aarhi tirchi lakeerain itni zor sey khainchi gaee.n thee.n k khaghaz jaga jaga sey zakhmi ho gaya tha .... bas un k cheeth'rey bikhrney ki dair thi.............. din aur raat ko milaney wala ye waqt..... qareeb-e ghouroob-e aftaab ka waqt hamesha hi mujh per aisi kafiyat taari kar diya karta tha... per aaj sey pehley tu aksar hi main apni is kafiyat pe qaboo paney main kamiyaab ho jaya karti thi.......... kabhi kisi soch ki udher bun main tu kabhi guzrey lamhoo.n , maheenoo aur saloo.n k sod-o zayaa.n ka hisaab kitaab main ..... per aj tu jaise ye dill sarey behlawoo.n ka hisaab be-baak karney k der pe' tha ye mera dill k howa bais-e wabaal mujhe............... .......... aik wo dor bhi tha jab aqal ki ungli thamey chalney k ghoroor main Main dill ko ghaas hi na dala karti thi........ bal k agar kisi k munh sey dill totna, dill bhar ana, dill tukrey tukrey o jana... dill aa jana jaie mahawarey sunti tu be-naqat sunaya karti thi k bhaee dill ka kaam mehez jism ko khoon pohanchana hai .... kisi pe ana jana torna jorna is k bas ka rog nahi............. shaid isi tamaskhur ki saza k tur per Khuda nay merey muth'thi bhar dill ko gehraai ata kar di......... itni gehraai k khud bhi jhanko tu chakra jaoo.n kisi aur k jhankne ka tu sawal hi paida nahi hota......... koi jhankey bhi tu kyu ... aur kisi ko jhankney doon bhi tu kyu? k ye wahid cheez hi tu meri apni hai ... warna tu na tan apna na dhan..... waise sciencedanoo kii is baat sey bhi mujhe shadeed ikhtaaf ho gaya hai k dill k mehez chaar khaney hain..... merey saath tu aisa nahi hai... kai aik khaney hain... un-ginat do chathiyaa.n..... minber... dar darechey sab hi tu hian yahan.......... aur kitne hi log hain jo yahan muqeem hain.......... aik jahaan hai... aik jahan-e rang-o bo aur wo kehtey hain k mehez chaar khaney .......... is main jo log muqeem hain wo roz dill sey ankh aur ankh sey anso ka safar kartey hain... per phir bhi isi main rehtey hain........... log kehtey hain k ehel- dill ka mazhub wahdaniyat pe mabni hai .... ehel-e dill bereh'mun nahi howa kartey k kai aik butt saja rakhey mun mandir main wo tu aik but ko minber pe betha detey hain otaar ka darja detey hain ... aur usi sey dill ki kutiya aabad kar rakhtey hain........ per humain is baat sey kisi hud tak ikhtilaaf hai.... minber pe bithana alag baat per is jahaan-e rang o bo sey innkaar karna tu jhoot hai na .... ye tu wo jahan hai jis k mousam bhi apney hain.... jis ki abo hawa bhi apni hai ,.....jis k makeen bhi apney hain aur jis k bhaid bhi apney hi hain....... mun bagiya k bhed na kholo, sair karo khamosh rahooooooooooooo
__________________ guzar hi jay gi terey baghair bhi laikin bohat udaas bohat sogwaar guzre gi                  |
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#2
02-28-2006, 11:33 AM
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acha unwaan diya bhabii behnaa,,,,,,uljha uljha saa hii thaa sab kuch duaa hey ye uljha uljha sa sulajh jaeyey khush rahna sada
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#3
02-28-2006, 06:40 PM
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hmmmmm bhabi GGG ye jo hamaray seenay maiN aik nanhnha munna sa DIL hota hay na baRi zalim cheez hay ye or writers or poets kay liye to aik azab hi hota hay  hay naaaaa ????maza aaya paRh kay  lekin Haqeeqat maiN ye DIL waqee aik chhoti si cheez nahi hota is kay baray maiN to khud RAB-e-KAINAAT nay farmaya MOOMIN ka dil KHUDA ka ghhar hay ye to ham hi naalaeq haiN jo samjhtay nahi haiN yehi DIL to hay jis maiN WO MALIK-e-KAAINAAT apna jalwa bhi dikhha deta hay ye to hamari basart ka qusoor hay jo tawajju is simt kartay hi nahiN
__________________ samajajh jata hooN lekin dair say maiN daa'o-pej uskay woh baazi jeet jata hay meray chaalak honay tak |
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#4
02-28-2006, 06:46 PM
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log kehtey hain k ehel- dill ka mazhub wahdaniyat pe mabni hai .... ehel-e dill bereh'mun nahi howa kartey k kai aik butt saja rakhey mun mandir main wo tu aik but ko minber pe betha detey hain otaar ka darja detey hain ... aur usi sey dill ki kutiya aabad kar rakhtey hain........ per humain is baat sey kisi hud tak ikhtilaaf hai.... minber pe bithana alag baat per is jahaan-e rang o bo sey innkaar karna tu jhoot hai na .... ye tu wo jahan hai jis k mousam bhi apney hain.... jis ki abo hawa bhi apni hai ,.....jis k makeen bhi apney hain aur jis k bhaid bhi apney hi hain....... mun bagiya k bhed na kholo, sair karo khamosh rahooooooooooooo woh kehtai hain na aapi jaani kai dil ki baatain hain dil hi janta hai kab rota hai kab kisi ki baat par hans daita hai aur gehra to kya kahain kai raaz bhi is mein dafan ho jain to yun lagta hai abhi bhi jaga baki hai abhi bhi aur kuch hia jo is mein sama sakta hai bauhat hi umdah tehreer likhi hai aap nai bauhat achi lagi  khush rahiyai 
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#5
02-28-2006, 09:44 PM
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dil bhi ajeeb cheez hai.. jis ka jitna zarf utna issay bayaan kar daita hai.. koi mandar bana daita hai koi avataar bitha daita hai tu koi 4 khanoon ka pump bata daita hai. uljhee suljhee sochoon mein gum kamray kay ehwaal say shuroo haal e dil pay kurthee.. sochoon kay pataal mein utartee yeah tehreer apnay saath qari ko bhi liyeah phirtee hai.. aur phir choonk kay kehtee hai .. mun bagiya k bhed na kholo, sair karo khamosh rahooooooooooooo sochoon kay dar waar kartee iss teheeer ko parh kay bohat lutaf aya.. Bohat khush Rahiyeah Wa.Salam |
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#6
03-01-2006, 06:24 AM
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Kaisi hain aap ............ Hmmmm DIL ........ kia khoooB likha hai janab aap ne .... Bohut hi Umdda .... aur yeh bhi sahi kaha aap ne jab aap kisi cheez ya baat ka Tamaskhar urrate hain tu Dar'Asal aap uske hone ka tu yakeen karte hain par wo yakeen khud ko dilane say darte hain aur tabhi sab kuch ghalat ho jata hai .. matlab wo cheez ya baat aap ka bhi moqader ban jaya karti hai .... GOOD WORK ........... KHUSH rahiye SADDA
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#7
03-02-2006, 08:12 AM
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aayeee hayeee.... kiya ghazab ki tehreeer likhi hai larki... aur kitti bar kaha hai ke wehshatoon se nikal aaoo...magar bhala kab sunti ho tum...wahi apni ravish pe qayam'o dayim... khair, mazaq bar'taraf....ham bhi apke mann bagiyaa ki sair kar aye, aur aub kuch na pochte huye khamoosh rehte hian 1.gif ")1") woh kuch hai na "Kuch na kisi se bolonga, bheed na mann ke kholonga" bohot bohot khush rahooo.......ameen 
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#8
03-02-2006, 04:55 PM
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.......... main tu nahi chahti k sab kuch suljha ho hamesha..... kyu k kuch ulajhta hai tu demagh suljhaaney ki justuju karta hai na. ye tu zehni mashq hai ...... aur aik sehet mand demagh k leye zorori hai k kabhi yoon hi bila waja kisi baat pe ulajh jay tu kabhi us ko suljha layajeeb sa khayyal hai na mera khair behud shukriya dua ka aap ko bhi KHuda hamesha khush o khurram rakhey ameen sumameen |
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