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**Banjara** · #21 07-02-2005, 10:46 AM

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Originally Posted by ~Biya~

najnay kyun jahaan jahaan lerkiyoon ka ziker aata hai wahaan main ne humesha yeh perha .. lerkiyaan pagl hoti hien ya phir khwaab yeh aik aisa lufz hai ju aksur auqaat loog lerkiyoon se relate kertay hain ... aur yeh perh ker main yehi sooch rahi hoon keh theek hai mana such kehtay hain per itna kyun kehtay hain ?? .. kya hum lerkiyaan waqayi pagal hoti hein ... kya waqyi hum khwaaab buhat bunti hien ... kya waqayi ??

main bhi kya ley beathi ...

well ... likha jaisa likhtay hien waisa hi khubsuret khubsuret sa

... aik adhora pun sa mehsoos howa hai najaney kyun .. shayid tehreer mien ya phir ....

Biya

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**Banjara** · #22 07-02-2005, 10:48 AM

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Originally Posted by SuReLi KoyaL

aisa lagta hai main aisi aik lerki ko janti hon...

bhut acha likha hai..../good1

Shukriya @};-

Han aisee aik larkee ko har larkee jaanti hai

Khush Rahiyeah @};-

**Banjara** · #23 07-02-2005, 10:48 AM

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Originally Posted by ikirfan

Ahaan nice zabardast likha hay

Shurkiya Irfan @};-

**Banjara** · #24 07-02-2005, 10:49 AM

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Originally Posted by Shokh

''Par Khawab toot jatay hain... yahi baat aksar bhool jatin hain...''

Basit Bhai /aoa

Bohat hakiki tehreer hay aur andaz-e-beyan bohat alah /rose

-Shokh

Shukriya Shokh... I did wrote on another dimension of same subject.. I am sure you and rest may find that a bit bitter

**Banjara** · #25 07-02-2005, 10:50 AM

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Originally Posted by Crystal Eyes

kuch larkiyan /rose

umdah tehreer hai...!

buhut gehrayee main likha hai apnay...... acha laga parh kay....@};-

Shurkiya @};-

**Banjara** · #26 07-02-2005, 10:50 AM

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Originally Posted by Cute_gal

m feelin' it..../welldone.......bohat acha likha hai

Hmmm so what you feeling ?

**Banjara** · #27 07-02-2005, 10:50 AM

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Originally Posted by Nido jee

bohat accah likha hay zabardast /wah

Shukriya @};-

**Banjara** · #28 07-02-2005, 10:51 AM

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Originally Posted by shela

@};- Abdul basit Bhai thanks for the attachment

/ooho kafe dafa perha to phir samagh main aya

wo main itna literature nahi perhtee na isleya/oopz

bohat accha likha/weldone kuch log hoty hain jo khawaboon man rahna passand kerty hain i think such people always afraid of reality

I am glad you manage to read it.. and able to understand what I tried to say..

Pasandeedgi kay liyeah shukriya @};-

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