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aap ne jo likha woh kisi had to theek hai lekin mein yahan aik baat zarror kahon gi.....yeh nazame qainat hai ke roshni ke bghair andhera.....jism ke baghair rooh aur ansoo ke bagair ankh be mani hoa kartey hein....har door men acha likhne wale aur bora likhne waley mojood rehe hen.... achai aur borai hama waqt mojood rehi hen...mera nehin khayal ke acha adab sirf mardoon ki warasat hai balkay mard aur aurat dono hi ko Allah Taala ki zaat e aqdas ne acha bolney, acha likhney aur acha dekhne...ki salahiat ata farmai hai.....yahan na mard awrat se bartar hai na awrat mard se.....writers jab likhtey hen to har tehreer ke sath on ki grooming hoti rehti hai...jaise koi pehli sirhi par paon rakhe bagair age ka safar nehin kar sakta isi tarah writers bhi ahista ahista age ka safar jari rakhtey hen... shayad inhi writers men kal humen Amjad Islam amjad, Ishfaq Ahmed aur Bano Qudsia jaise likney wale mil jayen....Umera Ahmed, Riffat Siraj aur Shazia Chaudhary(marhoma)ki taraha haqeeqat pasand mil jaen....koi bhi darwaza akhri nehin hota....let,s hope
Alama Iqbaal farmatey hen...zara si nam ho to yeh matti bari zarkheiz hai saqi
Har writer apni atakarda salahiyat ke motabak likhta hai aur ose aisa hi karna chahie...agar parinda apni bisaat se barh kar orhne ki sai kare ga to monh ke ball gire ga.....
aur jahan tak rehi baat mohabbat ki to hum logon ko na to mohabbat karna ati hai na hi nibhana....jis jazbe ko hum barat nehin saktey os par alfaaz ke darya baha kar bhi kuch hasil nehin hota..... zikre mohabbat aam hai lekin sooze mohabbat aam nehin.....
Hum darasal on dhayoon mein zinda hain jahan hum na imaan ki hifazat kar saktey hain na amal ki.....na chardewari ki na chadar ki......na nazar ki na haya ki.... hum bas zinda hain is habs ke mahol mein aur shayad likhne wale is lie os mohbbat ko baar baar apni tehreeron men le ate hen jis ka hum men foqdaan hai....
Aap mujh se barh kar jante aur samajtey hon ge....mera maqsad app ki dil azari nehin....aap ne jo likha ose parh kar jo khayal mere zehen mein aya woh men ne likh diya......aap meri raye se bharpor ikhtalaf kar saktey hein.....
Khush rehye

May Allah bless us all

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yahan toh meri kisi baat ka koi jawab nahi hai

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bohat acha Sawal hay aap ka , sawal ko Agr sawal Samjh kar poochja jaye tou us ka jawab Aasan hota hay laikin agr Sawal he aik Sawal ban jaye tou jawab Sawal hota hay,,,


yooN to Amir Khusro (14th century) kee shaairee meN us daur meN murawwij urdu geet nigaaree ke tehet aise ashaar mil jaate haiN jin meN shaair aurat ban kar apne premee se muhabaat kaa izhaar kartaa hai. misaal ke taur par:

sakhee piyaa ko jo maiN na dekhooN to kaise kaaTooN anderi ratiyaaN

lekin jahaaN tak Khwaateen kaa taaluq hai to aam taur par Maah Liqaa Chandaa(1798) jin ka kalam:
tum moonh lagaa ke Ghair ko maGhroor mat karo
lag chalnaa aise waisoN se dastoor mat karo

Taswe bahaa ke har ghaRee zaaree naheeN hai Khoob
ye raaz e ishq hai, ise mahhoor mat karo

aye ham-damo, jo mujh se hai manzoor iKhtilaat (iKhtilaat = interaction)
juz zikr e yaar tum koee mazkoor mat karo (juz = except)


or ,Lutf-un Nisaa Imtiaaz(1797)

ham se nazroN ko churaa, GhairoN se kartaa baataiN
ras bharee aankhaiN phiraa kar wo raseelaa, meraa

aab e rawaaN ho, sabza ho, aur gul-ezaar ho
saaqee ho jaam aur baGhal meN nigaar ho (nigaar = beloved; mehboob)

Alan Christinia urf Ruqayya Baigam(18th century)

rooThaa hai hamaaraa jo wo dilbar kaee din se
is waaste "rehtee hooN" maiN muztar kaee din se

maqsoom kee Khoobee hai, ye qismat kaa hai ehsaaN
rehtaa hai Khafaa mujh se jo dilbar kaee din se


Urdu shaairee meN niswaaneeat sab se pehle 20ween sadee ke wast meN jaa kar nazar aatee hai. us daur kee shaairaat meN Ada Jafri kaa naam sab se numaayaaN hai. lekin Ada ke kalaam meN bhee shuroo shuroo meN wahee riwaayatee, lage-bandhe Khayaalaat milte haiN jin se is baat kaa pataa naheeN chaltaa k she'r kee Khaaliq sinf e naazuk se taaluq rakhtee hai.

aisay he Kishwar Naheed ,Fehmeeda Riyaz,Parveen Shakir,Naushi Gilani ,Reehana Qamar,Shabnam Shakeel, FaKhira Batool

Liqaa Chandaa ka yeh sh'er hai mulahiz'a farmy'e.

tum moonh lagaa ke Ghair ko maGhroor mat karo
lag chalnaa aise waisoN se dastoor mat karo

Taswe bahaa ke har ghaRee zaaree naheeN hai Khoob
ye raaz e ishq hai, ise mahhoor mat karo

aye ham-damo, jo mujh se hai manzoor iKhtilaat
juz zikr e yaar tum koee mazkoor mat karo

Is sh'er meN niswaaneeat apnii donoN suuratoN meN raqam ho gayii hai. Pehle un do suuratoN se t'arruff ho jaye. Ek to woh k jismeN aurat kHud ko laachaar samajhtii hai aur fariyaad kartii hai.("har ghaRee zaaree.." ). Duusrii suurat woh k jahaN faryaad baGaawat ka ruup le letii hai. Aur apne husn ko, bajaae apnii kamzorii samajhne k, apnii taaqat maan letii hai.("..nahiiN hai kHuub,ye raaz e ishq hai, ise mahhoor mat karo")

Sawal Yeh ha k Aap ko Kais'ay Perhna Hay,


Let Them Expressive

Aurat Ab sai nahi Likh RAhi, yeh Jang Tou Bohat pehly Sai jaar'e hay

RemEmBER: Peace comes through love and love comes through peace.

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Sister By Heart and Soul
This is some1 who has been there 4 me whn I've needed some1 to talk to & to listen.We are relative by heart&soul if not by blood.You are a very beautiful person..inside&out.

Imamma u wrote So well and i agree with you



None of known soul fetched prominence by birth, every body initiate themselves to get acknowledged, who knows in future their names may be listed in the Best producer of the literature, who know we might have the star of the century writing little things with us.


We should give confidence to them instead of impede

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Sister By Heart and Soul
This is some1 who has been there 4 me whn I've needed some1 to talk to & to listen.We are relative by heart&soul if not by blood.You are a very beautiful person..inside&out.