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~*~ khushi ka hisar ~*~

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Old 08-09-2004, 12:16 PM
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"woh kehta hai mein ghata hoon baras jaoonga...mein mausam hoon badal jaoonga....kabhi koi sath nahi rehta tum bhi bhool jao gi....mein dhal gaya to kisai yaad aoonga "

mein nai suna tha kai is duniya mein aisai bhi loog hotai hain jin ki zaat sirf aik ehsaas mein rachi hoti hai....mohabbat mein..jo apni har saans mein is aik jazbai ka naam laitai hain...jo apni zindagi bhi isi kai naam jeetai hain...haan mein nai suna tha lekin aaj dekha bhi hai....aaj aik aisai dost kai barai mein kehnai ja rahi hoon jis ki zaat mein sirf mohabbat nazar ai hai mujhe..../rose jis nai sirf mohabbat banti hai...to kya huwa jo us kai sath kantai sirf us ki rooh ko ghayal kar gai hain...us nai raigzaroon mein ho kar bhi baharoon ko sada di hai /rose

mera ye dost....jo aaj khud ko tanha aur akaila samajh raha hai....kya kahoon us sai kai woh khud nahi janta woh kya hai.....nahi janta kai khud ki zaat sai kitni khushyaan di hain us nai....nahi janta us ki batoon sai us kai hauslai sai kitnai dil sambhlai hain....koi mujhse poochai mera woh dost kaisa hai /rose woh jis nai apnai bikhrai wajood ko aksar dostoon ki khatir samaita hai...woh jis nai sirf kisi kai laboon ki muskaan kai liyai lahoo kai diyai jalai hain...woh jis ki zara si narmi sarf ratoon mein akailai pan ka ehsaas nahi honai daiti woh jis nia kabhi pyar sai kabhi dant sai apna pan jagaya hai...../rose woh jis nai kabhi shokhi sai shararat sai mujhe muskurana seekhaya woh jis nai aik meherbaan ban kar utaar charhao ki pehchaan karwai hai /rose

mujhe mera ye dost.....us suraj jaisa lagta hai jo apni raushni sab ko dai kar khud kai liyai kuch nahi mangta...us chand jaisa lagta hai to apni thandak ka ehsaas dai kar khud jalta rehta hai...jo khud to tanha hoga lekin sitaroon ko raushan karta rehta hai haan ye bhi aisa hi hai....jis ki bhi zindagi mein aya usi ki zindagi ko aik khushi aik umeed aik apna pan dai gaya....us ki rahoon ko raushan kargaya chahai is ki apni rahain kyon na andheri ho gai hoon.....

mujhse woh poochai to mein bataoon usai woh mere liyai kya hai....meri zindagi mein anai wali khushi hai woh....jis nai mujhse kabhi ye kaha tha diya tumhein udas honai ka haq nai hai kyon kai tum meri dost ho...us aik lamhai mein us ki belaus chahat par bauhat pyar aya tha....us aik lamhai mein ye ehsaas huwa tha kai shayad kismat meherbaan hui hai....Khuda ka shukar ada kiya tha kai koi aisa hai jisai mere gham aur meri khushyoon ka khayal hai...woh jo sada mujhe khush rehnai ki duain daita hai.....woh mere ird gird aik khushi ka hisar bana gaya hai.....kya kahoon us sai mein kai us ki dosti ye pyar mera maan barha gaya hai /rose

woh kehta hai mein us mandir jaisa hoon jis mein ab sehnai ka hausla nai hai...jo ab haar gaya hai mein kehti hoon tum un lehroon jaisai ho...jin kai daman mein janai kitnai pal chupai hain jo chattanoon sai takkar lainai ki himmat rakhti hain lekin kabhi tootti nahi /rose

woh kehta hai...mein us sookhai patai jaisa hoon jisai loog masal kar roond kar agai nikal jatai hain mein kehti hoon...tum us masoom phool jaisai ho jis kai dil mein sirf mohabbat rehti hai jo apni mehak bhi dosroon kai naam kardaita hai /rose

woh kehta hai mein us tooti kabar jaisa hoon jisai saza di jai jis par koi diya na jalai mein kehti hoon tum to khud aik diya ho jis nai janai kitni rahoon ko diloon ko raushan kiya hai /rose

mera ye dost mujhe barish jaisa lagta hai...kabhi halki si rhimjhim jo barasti hai to apnai sang kehkashaan lati hai kabhi tez barkha jo itni mohabbat lutati hai itni khushyaan daiti hai kai mujhe mera daman kam lagta hai....kabhi jo ye chup ho jai to lagta hai har soo khiza ai ho....waqt tham gaya ho kabhi jo ye shararat banai to zindagi muskura uthti hai /rose

ye khud ko tanha samajhnai wala kya janai ye kitna diloon mein rehta hai...kitnai hath hain jo is ki khatir dua mein uthtai hain kitnai loog hain jo isai chahtai hain /rose mujhse poochai ye to bataoon mein...mere liyai ye aik meherbaan dost hai jis nai hath thama to yun laga zindagi ki dhoop mein naram chaoon mili ho....aik guardian hai jis nai kabhi dant kar kabhi pyar sai samjhaya ho...aik bhai hai jis kai anai sai mujhe aik tahaffuz ka apnai pan ka ehsaas huwa hai aik aisa insaan jis nai is kainaat ka sab sai khubsurat rishta mujhe diiya hai...bhai honai ka....aik aisa dost hai ye jis nai har pal har lamha dosti ka rishta khud ki zaat ko bhool kar nibhaya hai /rose

"aik choti si khawaish
aik masoom si dua hai
teri zindagi rahai khushyoon mein dhali
ter rahoon mein khilai mohabbat ki kali
teri ankhoon mein ho zindagi si khili
teri palkoon par ho khawaboon ki lari
tere daman mein ho kehkashaan ujli
tere ratain hoon umeedoon sai saji
yehi dil ki sada hai
yehi meri dua hai "/dua ameen sum ameen

khush raho hamesha /rose

/yhug always there for u /yhug
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Old 08-09-2004, 12:25 PM
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lo abhi to mein likh rahi thi ;;)

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zabardast :clap


don't have words to say just superb /rose


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"woh kehta hai mein ghata hoon baras jaoonga...mein mausam hoon badal jaoonga....kabhi koi sath nahi rehta tum bhi bhool jao gi....mein dhal gaya to kisai yaad aoonga "

mein nai suna tha kai is duniya mein aisai bhi loog hotai hain jin ki zaat sirf aik ehsaas mein rachi hoti hai....mohabbat mein..jo apni har saans mein is aik jazbai ka naam laitai hain...jo apni zindagi bhi isi kai naam jeetai hain...haan mein nai suna tha lekin aaj dekha bhi hai....aaj aik aisai dost kai barai mein kehnai ja rahi hoon jis ki zaat mein sirf mohabbat nazar ai hai mujhe..../rose jis nai sirf mohabbat banti hai...to kya huwa jo us kai sath kantai sirf us ki rooh ko ghayal kar gai hain...us nai raigzaroon mein ho kar bhi baharoon ko sada di hai /rose

mera ye dost....jo aaj khud ko tanha aur akaila samajh raha hai....kya kahoon us sai kai woh khud nahi janta woh kya hai.....nahi janta kai khud ki zaat sai kitni khushyaan di hain us nai....nahi janta us ki batoon sai us kai hauslai sai kitnai dil sambhlai hain....koi mujhse poochai mera woh dost kaisa hai /rose woh jis nai apnai bikhrai wajood ko aksar dostoon ki khatir samaita hai...woh jis nai sirf kisi kai laboon ki muskaan kai liyai lahoo kai diyai jalai hain...woh jis ki zara si narmi sarf ratoon mein akailai pan ka ehsaas nahi honai daiti woh jis nia kabhi pyar sai kabhi dant sai apna pan jagaya hai...../rose woh jis nai kabhi shokhi sai shararat sai mujhe muskurana seekhaya woh jis nai aik meherbaan ban kar utaar charhao ki pehchaan karwai hai /rose

mujhe mera ye dost.....us suraj jaisa lagta hai jo apni raushni sab ko dai kar khud kai liyai kuch nahi mangta...us chand jaisa lagta hai to apni thandak ka ehsaas dai kar khud jalta rehta hai...jo khud to tanha hoga lekin sitaroon ko raushan karta rehta hai haan ye bhi aisa hi hai....jis ki bhi zindagi mein aya usi ki zindagi ko aik khushi aik umeed aik apna pan dai gaya....us ki rahoon ko raushan kargaya chahai is ki apni rahain kyon na andheri ho gai hoon.....

mujhse woh poochai to mein bataoon usai woh mere liyai kya hai....meri zindagi mein anai wali khushi hai woh....jis nai mujhse kabhi ye kaha tha diya tumhein udas honai ka haq nai hai kyon kai tum meri dost ho...us aik lamhai mein us ki belaus chahat par bauhat pyar aya tha....us aik lamhai mein ye ehsaas huwa tha kai shayad kismat meherbaan hui hai....Khuda ka shukar ada kiya tha kai koi aisa hai jisai mere gham aur meri khushyoon ka khayal hai...woh jo sada mujhe khush rehnai ki duain daita hai.....woh mere ird gird aik khushi ka hisar bana gaya hai.....kya kahoon us sai mein kai us ki dosti ye pyar mera maan barha gaya hai /rose

woh kehta hai mein us mandir jaisa hoon jis mein ab sehnai ka hausla nai hai...jo ab haar gaya hai mein kehti hoon tum un lehroon jaisai ho...jin kai daman mein janai kitnai pal chupai hain jo chattanoon sai takkar lainai ki himmat rakhti hain lekin kabhi tootti nahi /rose

woh kehta hai...mein us sookhai patai jaisa hoon jisai loog masal kar roond kar agai nikal jatai hain mein kehti hoon...tum us masoom phool jaisai ho jis kai dil mein sirf mohabbat rehti hai jo apni mehak bhi dosroon kai naam kardaita hai /rose

woh kehta hai mein us tooti kabar jaisa hoon jisai saza di jai jis par koi diya na jalai mein kehti hoon tum to khud aik diya ho jis nai janai kitni rahoon ko diloon ko raushan kiya hai /rose

mera ye dost mujhe barish jaisa lagta hai...kabhi halki si rhimjhim jo barasti hai to apnai sang kehkashaan lati hai kabhi tez barkha jo itni mohabbat lutati hai itni khushyaan daiti hai kai mujhe mera daman kam lagta hai....kabhi jo ye chup ho jai to lagta hai har soo khiza ai ho....waqt tham gaya ho kabhi jo ye shararat banai to zindagi muskura uthti hai /rose

ye khud ko tanha samajhnai wala kya janai ye kitna diloon mein rehta hai...kitnai hath hain jo is ki khatir dua mein uthtai hain kitnai loog hain jo isai chahtai hain /rose mujhse poochai ye to bataoon mein...mere liyai ye aik meherbaan dost hai jis nai hath thama to yun laga zindagi ki dhoop mein naram chaoon mili ho....aik guardian hai jis nai kabhi dant kar kabhi pyar sai samjhaya ho...aik bhai hai jis kai anai sai mujhe aik tahaffuz ka apnai pan ka ehsaas huwa hai aik aisa insaan jis nai is kainaat ka sab sai khubsurat rishta mujhe diiya hai...bhai honai ka....aik aisa dost hai ye jis nai har pal har lamha dosti ka rishta khud ki zaat ko bhool kar nibhaya hai /rose

"aik choti si khawaish
aik masoom si dua hai
teri zindagi rahai khushyoon mein dhali
ter rahoon mein khilai mohabbat ki kali
teri ankhoon mein ho zindagi si khili
teri palkoon par ho khawaboon ki lari
tere daman mein ho kehkashaan ujli
tere ratain hoon umeedoon sai saji
yehi dil ki sada hai
yehi meri dua hai "/dua ameen sum ameen

khush raho hamesha /rose

/yhug always there for u /yhug
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Old 08-09-2004, 01:44 PM
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Bohat Bohat Behtareen likha Diya @};-
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buhat acha likha hia diya wo aisay hi hian jassay tum nay kaha khabi khabi hamaray lafzo'n ko zuban mill jati hai ise tarah aaj tumhara likha howa mujhay laga maray undar ki awaz hai


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aisay dost bhi shayeed kismat say miltay hian

khush raho
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