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This is a discussion on *Jaal Lafzo'n Ka* within the Urdu Writer's Club forums, part of the Urdu Adab category; Aisay kuch bay rubt sa kuch likh dala ...........app sub ki nazar Samunder ki moajo'n si meray lafzon ki kahani ...
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#1
10-25-2005, 07:19 AM
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 Aisay kuch bay rubt sa kuch likh dala ...........app sub ki nazar 1.gif ")1") Samunder ki moajo'n si meray lafzon ki kahani hai.Moajayen jo ravani say sahil ki simat baherti hain. Miltay hi sahil say chhata hai sakoo'n in par. Meray alfaaz hain moajo'n say. Dil say zuban tak machaltay howey yeh barhatey hain, honto'n ko chhunay ki chah main bay khudi main sub bhul jatey hain. Aur miltay hi honton say dum toor deytay hain. Honto'n kay laraznay ka ahsaas kahan in ko?.......... Daytay hi nahi saath yeh.......Kaho kaisay tumhaye day doon koii iqraar ka lumha, koii izhaar ka lumha? Lafzo'n ki doar main na uljhaye to acha hai. Yeh doar suljhi hai na suljhaye gee kabhi. Kabhi aisa b hota hai kay suljhanay isay baitha jo, haatho'n ki lakiro'n main izafay hi ker baitha....... Isi liyea main kehti hoon yeh alfaaz ka khail na khailo tum. Yeh chain-o-sakoon lay ker ta'aumer bhataknay ko tumhaye tunha ker dayen gaye. Laafzo'n ki baazi main khasara hi khasara hai. Kabhi khush fehmi main ker kay mubtelah tumko, tamaashayii bun baithayen. Kahin yakin-o-bayyakini kay sehra kay beecho beech app pani bun baithayen. In bay reham lafzon say zara bach kay hi rehna tum. Bus dehaan rakhna tum kay yeh jaal lafzo'z ka kaatey nahi kat-ta ........... The End
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#2
10-25-2005, 08:01 AM
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 ya really aap ny likha hy ...... Mashaalh . beleve me ! bhot hi umnda likh dala hy ... 2 times i read . ky likha kya hy ..... itna khubsuart .. itny pyary pyary words ... Really Dil ! bhot umda ... .. kitna khubsuart andaz sey byan ki .. bhot umda Mashaalh .. per itna acah na likha karya plz ...... wo is liya ky mey jalous ho ta hu  itz secret abhi phir sey parhti hu FeaamnAllah
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#3
10-25-2005, 08:04 AM
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Samunder ki moajo'n si meray lafzon ki kahani hai.Moajayen jo ravani say sahil ki simat baherti hain. Miltay hi sahil say chhata hai sakoo'n in par. Meray alfaaz hain moajo'n say Dil ! wht a start ..... Wala ! itna khubsuart strart liya hy ky really .... maza aagya .. u know my itna to nhi jnti .... but i m sure 100 % ky jo senior parhy ga wo aaj wah wah kary gy .. beleve me FeaamnAllah |
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10-25-2005, 08:05 AM
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Dil say zuban tak machaltay howey yeh barhatey hain, honto'n ko chhunay ki chah main bay khudi main sub bhul jatey hain. Aur miltay hi honton say dum toor deytay hain. Wah ! kitni khubsurt aur chaat nazar aarhi hy is para mein ...... bhot umda .. FeaamNAllah |
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#5
10-25-2005, 08:06 AM
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W'salaam Wa Rehmah! Ji yeh really main nay hi likha hai .........main likhti hoon akser per share kernay ki noabat nahi ayii thi. Abhi kabhi kabhi share ker leyti hoon Aisay hi bay rabt si sochayen hain bus tareef kernay ka bay hud shukriya .........aur jealous hoti ho app to chalo nahi likhon gee Khush Rahyea @};- |
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#6
10-25-2005, 08:07 AM
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Daytay hi nahi saath yeh.......Kaho kaisay tumhaye day doon koii iqraar ka lumha, koii izhaar ka lumha? Lafzo'n ki doar main na uljhaye to acha hai. Yeh doar suljhi hai na suljhaye gee kabhi. Kabhi aisa b hota hai kay suljhanay isay baitha jo, haatho'n ki lakiro'n main izafay hi ker baitha....... yah to..... really kamal hi kr diya ...... kitni khubsurti si byaan kr di baat .... ***Hatho ki lakeero main izafay hi hotay hy **** Wah ! bhot umda FeaamNAllah |
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10-25-2005, 08:10 AM
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aik baar phir bohut shun ka riya |
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10-25-2005, 08:11 AM
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aray aray .......... nahi ji nahi ....... likhna na choriya ..... Jalous ho ti hu to ya thori hy ky likhna chor do ... hum bhi jalous kar dey gy .. kbhi na kbhi .... aur aap likhty ho ........ Toba ! itna zalim likha hy aap ny ky mein belve kary single singel word parh rhi hu aur usya mahsoos kr rha hu .... khas kar words ki choice ......... kamal hy bhot hi umda ... aura ap likhty ho to Plzzz aap zaroor likho .... kuo ky yha bhot kum log dhng ka likhty hy ... aik aap ki Bhan hy wo to 1 month sey suna hi rahi hy lolzzzzzzz( dont mind diya plz ) aur aik aur sis hy (Shokh) wo to aaj kal gum sum hy .. ab 2 bhanay wasy hi kamal rakhti hy ....a b 3rd bhi Mashalah bnhot umda FeamanAllah |
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#9
10-25-2005, 08:11 AM
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