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Asslam-o-Alikum WR WB

........ log tarstay hy ky koi chnd words boly aur me to single sigle lafzo ki tareef ki aur ap khty ho bus karo ........ Janab Mashalah .. Mashalah likha hi lushh y ...... abhi sab kho gy ky acha likha hy dekhna aap

next Episode ka wait hy

FeaamNAllah

Next episode janay kab likhon ........per share keron gee inshAllah aik baar phir bay hud shukriya
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wahhhh kia kahneyn dill tou karta hey iss key aagey likhtaa hii challa jaoon bohut bakamal likha behnaa jee,,,,,,,,,,,,khush rahoo sadda
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wahhhh kia kahneyn dill tou karta hey iss key aagey likhtaa hii challa jaoon bohut bakamal likha behnaa jee,,,,,,,,,,,,khush rahoo sadda
Adaaz arz hai Bay hud shukriya bhai .........is say ziada likhti to is ki deepth or feelings khatam ho jati is liyea bus itna hi rehnay diya......
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Aisay kuch bay rubt sa kuch likh dala ...........app sub ki nazar





Samunder ki moajo'n si meray lafzon ki kahani hai.Moajayen jo ravani say sahil ki simat baherti hain. Miltay hi sahil say chhata hai sakoo'n in par. Meray alfaaz hain moajo'n say. Dil say zuban tak machaltay howey yeh barhatey hain, honto'n ko chhunay ki chah main bay khudi main sub bhul jatey hain. Aur miltay hi honton say dum toor deytay hain. Honto'n kay laraznay ka ahsaas kahan in ko?.......... Daytay hi nahi saath yeh.......Kaho kaisay tumhaye day doon koii iqraar ka lumha, koii izhaar ka lumha? Lafzo'n ki doar main na uljhaye to acha hai. Yeh doar suljhi hai na suljhaye gee kabhi. Kabhi aisa b hota hai kay suljhanay isay baitha jo, haatho'n ki lakiro'n main izafay hi ker baitha....... Isi liyea main kehti hoon yeh alfaaz ka khail na khailo tum. Yeh chain-o-sakoon lay ker ta'aumer bhataknay ko tumhaye tunha ker dayen gaye. Laafzo'n ki baazi main khasara hi khasara hai. Kabhi khush fehmi main ker kay mubtelah tumko, tamaashayii bun baithayen. Kahin yakin-o-bayyakini kay sehra kay beecho beech app pani bun baithayen. In bay reham lafzon say zara bach kay hi rehna tum. Bus dehaan rakhna tum kay yeh jaal lafzo'z ka kaatey nahi kat-ta ...........


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Bohot khoobsuret dil.......sumunder ki gehraaiyan samete huwe thi yeh tehreer....jise maojon ki rawani nain aur bhi nikhaar bukhsha...

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