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...Da'r E Kaaba...

This is a discussion on ...Da'r E Kaaba... within the Urdu Writer's Club forums, part of the Urdu Adab category; Originally Posted by junkifunki Salam: Kanwal aik nihayat umda or mutassir kun tehreer...aap nay apnay tajarbaat or jazbaat ko alfaaz ...


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Old 09-17-2007, 04:09 PM
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Kanwal aik nihayat umda or mutassir kun tehreer...aap nay apnay tajarbaat or jazbaat ko alfaaz k qalib mein nihayat umdagi say dhala hay ...bayshak woh bara Raheem o Kareem hay ...Wahab hay yani sab daynay walun say behter or barh kar daynay wala hay or hum uskay kaamon or uski maslayhatun ko bilashuba nahi jaan saktay....Kanwal sada khush rahiyay or itnay khubsurat moti raqam karnay per mubarakbaad qubool kijiyay..
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wasalam , bohat shukriya junki....khush rahyeh @};-
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Old 09-20-2007, 09:37 AM
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boht hi khobsort,dheemi dheemi,thandhi thandi,methi meethi tahreer,aap baat kahna janti hain,lafzon main baratnay ka hunar ba tamam o kamal mojood hay,, boht achi nasar likhti hain,,lafzon kay bartao ka jo saleeqa aap kay haan hay wo pata dayta hay kay likhari is dasht e qalam ka nowarid nahi hay,,,
dar e kaba ko lay kr aap nay boht khobsorti say apni baat hamary dilo tak pohnchae hay,,mujhay ye tahreer boht hi pasand aae,,, jazak Allah
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Old 09-20-2007, 09:45 AM
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boht hi khobsort,dheemi dheemi,thandhi thandi,methi meethi tahreer,aap baat kahna janti hain,lafzon main baratnay ka hunar ba tamam o kamal mojood hay,, boht achi nasar likhti hain,,lafzon kay bartao ka jo saleeqa aap kay haan hay wo pata dayta hay kay likhari is dasht e qalam ka nowarid nahi hay,,,
dar e kaba ko lay kr aap nay boht khobsorti say apni baat hamary dilo tak pohnchae hay,,mujhay ye tahreer boht hi pasand aae,,, jazak Allah
bohat shukriya sahir....agar yeh tehreer qari k dil main utar jaye to bas main samjhon gi k likhney ka haq ada ho gaya....khush rahyeh hameysha @};-
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Old 09-24-2007, 06:05 PM
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hasrat se hath maltay hoaye bass..chupkay chupkay...Rehmat ko matwajah karnay ki sa'ee kar raha ho..wo jo dilon main khyal ko parh leta hai,...
JazakAllah...bohat bohat he pur asar tehreer hai...hai jo os dar ki jo zamin-o-aasman par moheet hai...to tareef kia aur...kehna kia...bass...aankh band kar k hm bhi osi Da'r...ka nazarah kiye ja rahay hain..jis tak janay k liye aik qadam bhi chalna nahin parta...jo aik sachi pukaar par poray ka pora khul jata hai aik adna aur meelay se mehman k liye bhi...bohat bohat khush raho kanwal itna acha likhnay par..Allah tumhain jazay-e-kher de..[Aamin]
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Old 09-26-2007, 04:19 PM
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hasrat se hath maltay hoaye bass..chupkay chupkay...Rehmat ko matwajah karnay ki sa'ee kar raha ho..wo jo dilon main khyal ko parh leta hai,...
JazakAllah...bohat bohat he pur asar tehreer hai...hai jo os dar ki jo zamin-o-aasman par moheet hai...to tareef kia aur...kehna kia...bass...aankh band kar k hm bhi osi Da'r...ka nazarah kiye ja rahay hain..jis tak janay k liye aik qadam bhi chalna nahin parta...jo aik sachi pukaar par poray ka pora khul jata hai aik adna aur meelay se mehman k liye bhi...bohat bohat khush raho kanwal itna acha likhnay par..Allah tumhain jazay-e-kher de..[Aamin]
bohat shukriya kanwal itni hosla afzayi ka..bohat khush raho hameysha @};-
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Assalam o alikum Sis!
Tumhari yeh tehreer kitni baar perhi aur jab reply kernay lagga tu samjh nahin aaya kia likhooN aur main wapis laut gaya. Aaj barri himmat jamma ker k baitha hooN k kam az kam jawab tu dooN iss tehreer per. Jaisay jaisay main iss tehreer ko perhta hooN khud ko wahan hi kharra paata hooN. Aik ajeeb kaifiyat taari ho jaati hai.
SubhanAllah, kia khob likha hai. Tehreer aur tashreeh dono hi aisi k un k baaray main kuch likhna sooraj ko chiraag dikhaana hai.
Tumhari zaat se tasawuf kay rang bhee munakis ho rahay hain mashAllah.
Bht dua tumharay liya
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Dar-e-kaaba.. JazakAllah.. RABB-e-kainat ke dar se wabastagi yaqeenan hamari nijaat ka wahid zariya hai.. aap ke qalam ne eik lamhay ke liye bhi humen dar se uthnay na dia.. ye aap ki kamyaabi hai.. aap ki aqeedat ka umdah andaaz pasand aaya.. fun ki eik aur serhi charhnay per bohat si mubarakbaad aap ki khidmat mein.. Allah aap ki fiker ko mazeed bulandi aur soch ko aur bhi gehrai aata farmaye.. Aameen..

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Old 10-13-2007, 06:42 PM
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Assalam o alikum Sis!
Tumhari yeh tehreer kitni baar perhi aur jab reply kernay lagga tu samjh nahin aaya kia likhooN aur main wapis laut gaya. Aaj barri himmat jamma ker k baitha hooN k kam az kam jawab tu dooN iss tehreer per. Jaisay jaisay main iss tehreer ko perhta hooN khud ko wahan hi kharra paata hooN. Aik ajeeb kaifiyat taari ho jaati hai.
SubhanAllah, kia khob likha hai. Tehreer aur tashreeh dono hi aisi k un k baaray main kuch likhna sooraj ko chiraag dikhaana hai.
Tumhari zaat se tasawuf kay rang bhee munakis ho rahay hain mashAllah.
Bht dua tumharay liya
Urs Bhahiya

bohat shukriya bhayya k aap ney meri tehreer ko parha aur mehsoos kia....bas yehi iskey likhney ka hasil hey...
Allah aapko bohat khush rakhey.@};-
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