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Moo dekhai mai saqib ne mujhe diamond ka set diya jo ke bohat hi khobsurat tha aur kuch who un ki mohabaton se nikhar gaya.

Us raat saqib ke kahe alfaz mujhe aaj b yaad hain. Unhon ne kaha k maheen aaj se yeh saqib tumhara hai,saqib ki har sans tumhari hai, iski mohabatein chahatein tumhari hain, tum saqib ki zindagi ho. Mere mehndi se bhare hathon ko apne hathon mai lete hoye unhon ne apni bepanah mohabaton, chahton ka iqrar kiya. Inke har har andaz mai mere liye mohbat hi mohbat thi. Aur inki khoubsurat ankhein jin ki mai dewani thi aur abhi b hon har har dam mujhe pe mohabatein lutati thein…aik bar unhon ne masnoi khafgi se mujhe kaha “maheen tum kabhi meri taref nahi karti kiya mujhe mai kuch b acha nahi” mai ne muskra kar inki taraf dekha aur kaha aap tu pore itne ache hain mai kis kis chez ki tariff karon…kehne lage yeh kiya bat hoi kuch tu aisa jo tumhe sub se acha lagta hon mai ne kaha aaj janab ka apni tarif sun’ne ka mood hai kehne lage ji mabadolat kuch aisey hi mood mai hain


Kehne lagey k yeh b kis kitab mai likha hai k mard hi orat ki tariff kare akhir orat kiun nahi karti.. mujhe unke masomana se lehjey par bohat hansi aye.. kehne lage tum hans rhe ho yaar mai serious hon...maine kaha ji nazar araha hai aap kitne serious hain … kehne lage acha chalo baat mat ghumao meri tariff karo.. maine b soch liya k aaj keh hi deti hon sub kuch...jo ab tak nahi kaha…aur phir maine inhe aik aik baat jo mai inke bare mai sochti thi aur kabhi kahi nahi thi .. sub iqrar karliya… woh mujhe cherne k liye kehne lage k haan aksar larkiyan kehti hain k meri ankhein bohat khobsurat hain..Maine bhi inki haan main haan milaye..such he tu kehti hian..kehne lage tumhe jalan nahi horahe..Maine kha..main bhala ku jalon.jo mera hia ..wo inka tori hosakta hai..kehne lage bhot aitebar karti ho mujh per...maine kha bhot zaida..kehne lage mian tumhara aitebar kabhi nahi toronga...phir kehne lage..acha tum bhi shadi se phele mujhe itna chahti thi main samjhta raha ke main he deewana hon...Madam tu hamain ghass bhi nahi dalti...Maine inki is baat per zor dar qehqa lagaya..phir kehne lage ke ..janab hum ne ap ko apni koshisho se hasil kiya hai..Maine shararat se kha ..jee nahi sub meri dua`o ka ijaz hia...is din ke bad se maine mehsos kiya ke Saqib ki chahaton main or zaida ezafa howa hia...Mere iqrar ke bad tu wo jaise dewane he hogaye the...mera bepanah khaayal rakht..mujhe sara Pakistan ghumaya tha..ittna kuch khared kar deya ke dhair lag gaye the...akhir kar maine inke samne hath jorey ke bus kardain ab..wo kehne lage ke bewiyan tu shohro ki jeeb khali karwane per tuli hoti hian...tum kaise sada biwi ho...mera dil chahta hia duniya ki her chez tumhare qadmo main dhair kardon.

Main kehti mere pass app hian. tu mujhe kisi or chez ki bilkul zarorat nahi.

Saqib or mere darmiyan Miyan biwi ke sath sath dosti ka rishta bhi parwan charha tha.Main Saqib ki sub se achi dost or saqib mere sub se ache dost the..din jaise pur laga kar urh rahe the..main saqib ke waldain ko apne waldain ki tarah samjhti thi...meri saas tu bhot he achi thi..Saqb tu aksur mazak karte aur kehte ...yeh yeh hamare ghar mian bartan ku nahi bajte...main in se kehti touba karian..jin gharon main bajte hian.waha sakon naam ko bhi nahi hota...Saqib hasne lag jate...Main kehti...agar aisa hota na hamare ghar main bhi tu app ki yeh hansi ghaib hoti...wo is baat per aik zor dar qisam ka qehqa lagate.

gurz zindagi apni tamam tur ranaiou ke sath bhot pursakon andaz main guzar rahe thi.

Main apne waldain ke ghar 15 din ya mahene bad jate..wo bhi Saqib ki ami kehti ke tum maike se ho ayo...kafi din guzar gaye hian...shadi ke bad se main aik bar bhi rehne ke liye nahi gaye thi...yeh nahi ke koi majbori thi...balke mera ab khud he dil nahi chahta tha rehne ko...aik bar jab mahene bad main ami abu se milne gaye tu inho ne kha k...beta tum tu hamain bhool gaye ho...Leken Saqib beta hamara bhot khayal rakhta hai...her 2 din bad ajata hia...hamari khairyat malom karne...yeh baat Mujhe saqib ne nahi bataye thi...maine jab in se pocha tu kehne lage ke...tum mere liye apne Maa baap ko chor kar aye ho...tu agar main inka khayal rakh leta hon...tu yeh koi bari baat nahi hia...wo bhi Mere Maa baap jaise he hian...Saqib ki yehe baatain tu thi...jo mujhe inka dewana bana dete thi..Main Allah ka lakh lakh sukur ada karti...werna asia jeevan sathi tu kisi naseb wale ko he milta hai...aur wo naseb wale main he tu thi ke Saqib mujhe mile.

Shadi ke aik saal bad he Allah ne meri jholi mian 2 Jurwan bacho aik Larka aik Larki ka tuhfa bhi dal deya...Saqib tu khushi se dewane he hogaye...Larke ka Naam KaiF aur Larki ka Naam KashMaLa rakha gaya...Saqib ke ami abu bhi behud khush the ke...inki nasal ko aggey burhane ke liye Allah ne KaiF or KashMaLa se nawaza hai...hum sub Allah ka jitna sukur ada karte kum tha.


Aur mai tu apni kismat pe Nazah thi k koi naiki hi ki hai jo saqib jaisa shohar, itne piyare bache aur mohbat karne wale saas susar mujhe mile…shadi k baad ki zindagi itni pursakon hoti hai maine kabhi socha na tha… jab se saqib ka sath meri zindagi mai aya tha .mere char soo khushiyan hi khushiyan thein... meri saheliyan mujhe dekhti tu kehti Maheen tum pehle se b ziada khobsurat hogai ho mai unhein kiya batati k sub saqib ki mohbat hai jis mai mera rop roz nikharta hai.

Bachon ki pedaish k sath saqib ka business roz baroz barta chala gaya lakin saqib business ko kabhi ghar mai na laye… ghar ate hi woh farmabardar bete ,shafiq baap aur mohbat karne wale shohar hote… saqib ki aik aur bhot achi adat thi k who panch waqt ki namazein parte,Quran Pak ki talawat karte aur yehi adat meri aur mere sas susar ki b thi… khane mai agar kabhi namak b ziada hojata tu saqib kabhi kuch na kehte…inho ne kabhi mujh se onchi awaz main baat nahi ki...koi aik buraye bhi tu nahi thi Mere Saqib Main... din younhi guzarte rahe aur saqib ki chahatein mere liye awal roz jaise hi rahein.

Aik bar humari rishtedaron mai dawat thi saqib ki farmaish par maine black color ki sari bandi... halka sa makeup karne k baad balon par clip lagane lagi tu saqib ne tok diya.

Dhere se mere balon ko chote hoye unhon ne kaha inhe khula hi rehne do.

maine kaha aab omar nahi rahe baalkholne wali... aur mujhe acha b nahi lagta.

Kon mai acha nahi lagta unhon ne shokh se lehje se kaha.

mujhe b shararat soji aur kaha ji. aap hi ache nahi lagte

Moo phola kar boley tu woh ankhein kis ko pasand hain phir.

mai ne be ikhtiyar qehqa lagaya tu. woh b is qehqe mai sath sharik hogaye.

aur kehne lage tumne yeh kiya kaha k omar nahi rahe arey hum tu abhi b jawan hain maine kaha bache bare ho rahe hain aap ke… kehne lage tu kiya bache bare hone k sath maa baap ko mohbat karna chor dena chahiye mai ne apni hansi ko rokte hoye kaha saqib aap kabhi kabhi bilkul had karte hain.

Kehne lage maheen mai sochta hon k agar us din tumhare paon mai moch na atti aur tum mujhe na milti tu mera kiya banta maine ka kaha .saqib humey milna tha phir hum jaise b milte … acha chalein na dair horahe hai.. maine kaha tu woh mere qareb aye aur kaha... tum itni achi lag rahe ho mai soch raha hon aaj ghar mai hi raha jaye.

Maine ne kaha sub intizar kar rahe hon gay

kehne lage karne do

saqib kiya hogaya hai aap ko

inka janoon ankhon mai utar k bolne laga tha

kehne lage pyar

maine kaha aisa lag raha hai pehli bar huwa hai

kehne lage haan tu pehli bar hi tu huwa hai tumse


Saqib ki burhti hue deewangi ab mujhe waham main mubtela karne lage thi.

Saqib plz...Main galoger Lehjey bhi bole tu wo chonk se gaye.

kehne lage..kiya howa Maheen ?

Maine kha mujhe durr lagta hai.

kis se ?

App ki deewangi se.Na jane ku ap ki Mohabbat cheen jane ka khouf Mere sar per mundLane Lag gaya hai.

Tumhe yeh waham kukar howa Maheen ? Mujhe tum se koi nahi cheen sakta ...SewaYe MouT ke.

ALlah na kare Saqib...maine inke laboo per hath rakh deya..kaise dil dukhane wale baatain karte hian.

Acha tu phir ayo DiL Lubhane wale baatain karlete hian...inho ne mera dhiyan batane ke liye Forun baat palut de.

Leken is din ke bad se aik khouf sa rehne lag gaya...Saqib ko kehti ke office jane ke bad aik do bar fone karke khairyat de deya karain apni...wo bhi meri pareshani ko dekhte hue Fone kardete.

KaiF aur kashMaLa jab apni Totli zuban main bolna soro hue tu sub se phele inho ne "BaBa" bola....aur Saqib tu nihal ho ho jate...kehte dekh lo Mere bacho ne sub se phele Mujhe he pukara hai...Maine kha Baba inke ache jo bhot hian...kehne lage Such...Maine kha Much...aur phir hum dono he hans pare.
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zabardast. bohat achay tareeqay say aagay barh rahi hai kahani.....bohat maza aa raha hai parh kar.....bohat hi khoob likhti hain aapi @};-

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bohatt khoob !!
lakin itnay parts na karein na a
intizar nahee ho raha umeed hay next part jaldi share karein gi@};-
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hmmm mazeeed ka wait @};-
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