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This is a discussion on anssoo (plz comment)..... within the Urdu Writer's Club forums, part of the Urdu Adab category; ajab hi cheez hai mere ankhon main kai dhundla rahi hai duniya.. ajab hai kamal kai ik katra patharon ko ...
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| ajab hi cheez hai mere ankhon main kai dhundla rahi hai duniya.. ajab hai kamal kai ik katra patharon ko maum kar daita hai.... mosam - e - wisal main jab yaar sai galay lag kar roye to ansoo ... shab-e-hijr jab tanhayion kai khauf sai siskay to ansoo... zakham kha kar sambhalnay par ansoo us sai qabl larkhara kar ghir janay par ansoo... kabhi apnay wajood sai khafa ho kar tanhaion main siskay.. to tarikion kai shehar main wafaon kai ansoo ... kabhi kisi ki bewafai par behisab tarpay to dasht - e - veeran main ik yahi hamraz ansoo... tere tasveer ko tasawar bana kar jo ankhon sai lagaya to tere rukhsar ko madham sai chumnay walay yeh ansoo... kabhi tere qurbaton ka shumar kartay kabhi apni ibadaton ka hisab kartay huey... kabhi tere yaddon main khud ko sambhalnay walay... kabhi ratjagon ki ankh kai taray ansoo... kia ajab cheez hai.... mere rahoon ko sairab karnay walay ansoo... tere doobtay safanai ko par laganay walay ansoo.... jo kahin duur kho gaya hai benaam sa shakhs us berabt sai shakhs ko pukarnay walay ansoo... kahin samandaro sai gehray .... kahin motio.n ki tarah... kabhi khushi kai ansoo to kabhi aisi hi gham kai ansooo.. kisi bichray huey kai gham main yeh ansoo... to kabhi laut anay ki khushi main ansoo.... kabhi kisi ankh kai taray ansoo... kabhi roshion kai safar main yeh tareek ansoo.... kia ajab cheez hain... jab khushi ho to mere ankh sai tapkay aansoo.... meray gham main mere ankh sai chalkay ansoo... mere yaddon mere baaton, wafaon ka sila... jo waday nibhaye hain yeh un ka ha sila ansoo.. mere ankh sai tapaknay walay ansoo... koi kaha karta tha kai roya na karo ... ab us shakhs ki khamoshi par mere wafa ki benaam saza hai ansoo... usi ki yaad main... usi ki aas main ... kisi kai kho janai aur kisi kai laut aanay ki umeed par yeh anssoo.... mujh ko maloom hai kai mere ankhon kai yeh khamosh ansoo tujhe bhi tariki w tanhai main rulaya kartay hoon gai .. kuin kai shama to phir shama hi hai ... parwano ko jala kar bhi woh roya to karti hi hai.... bas is tanhai main, main aur mere ansoo.
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#2
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| salam .. aansoo.. jee kahien motiyoun jaisey qeemti.. aur kahin mitti pey rultey aanso.. kabhi palkoun sey chun liyey jaatey hein aur kabhi khaak ho jaatey hein ..waqt waqt ki baat hai ke unn ko kis terha mehsoos kiya jaa raha hai .. acha likha .. jeetay rahiyey ..
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| kia ajab cheez hain... jab khushi ho to mere ankh sai tapkay aansoo.... meray gham main mere ankh sai chalkay ansoo... mere yaddon mere baaton, wafaon ka sila... jo waday nibhaye hain yeh un ka ha sila ansoo.. mere ankh sai tapaknay walay ansoo.... bohat acha likha hai aap nay ![]()
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| ansoo......kabhi khushi ki jhalak hai in mein to kabhi gham ki thakan hai in mein...kabhi khawaboon ki kirchiyaan hain to kabhi milan ki khushyaan hain haan ye ansoo bauhat ajeeb hotai hain har pal sath dainai ko tayyar.... bauhat acha likha hai aap nai /rose khush rahiyai ![]()
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| bohot khosborat tehreer hai...... ansoun ki qeemat to unke liye hoti hai jo usay behne se pehlay rouk le,,, palkoun pe chun lain... werna to kisi ke daman main jazb ho jatey hain... be'naam se ansoo... bohot acha likha ..@};-
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| bohat acha likha hay.......kahnay ko to pani ka qatra hay laikin samadaroon si gahraai hay in main ....kahnay ko mahaz hateeli ki ragar say mit jaatay hain magar itni quwwat rakhtay hain kay dunya ko mita dain jahan bay bas hain wahan taqatwar bhi hain ansuuuu,,Khuda ki bandagi main giraian to aajizi ka zarya hain ansuuu well bohat acha likha hay aap nay ,keep sharing
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#7
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| bohat khoob waise apki is tehreer ko perhke meri palkain bhi bheeg gai hain bohat achi tehreer hai |
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