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Ab koi aay to kehna..k ..musafir to gia..!!!

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Old 02-08-2008, 07:26 PM
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Aap Ki Likhi Yeh Tehreer Parhtay Huway Mairay Ird Gird Zara Kay Dukh Nay Hisaar Khainchay Rakha...Hamaray Moaashray Mai'n Aik Nahi Bouhat Si Zaraei'n Mowjood Hai'n Jo Rishtay Owr Majbooria'n Nibhatay Nibhatay Duniya Say Rukhsat Ho Jati Hai'n...
Kanwal Ji Aap Ki Aik Owr Qabil-e-Tareef Tehreer...Allah Aap Ko Bouhat Khush Rakhay...
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welldone....bohat acha novel hay...isi tarah likhti rahain
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meri aik adna si koshish aap ki nazarBohat khush rahin




aaj boht arsay kay baad hg pr aana huwa,,wc say apni khas dil lagi hay,,nazmiya nasar nigar kanwal ji ko daikha to lapak kr parha,,, kanwal boht hi acha likha hay,,tumharay fiqray boht jandaar hotay hain,,kahani bhi achi buni hay,,kahani say ziyada tumharay istaaray mujhay boht mutaasir krtay hain,,aik cheez nay or conkaya, wo hay ``ki bajaaiy`` ka istamal,,wrna hamaray haan ``kay bajaaiy `` likha jata hay jo kay zyada drust nahi hay... main soch raha hon kay wc kay liye imla kay hawalay say aik tutorial likhon,,q kay urdu imla say yehan boht kam waqfiyet hay..kuch meri bhi islah hojaiy gi,,
aik kaam yaab afsana tha kanwal,,kuch tanqeed ki gunjaaish bhi hay,,magr itnay din baad tumhari koi tahreer parhi hay or aatay hi tanqeed? mazay ki baat nahi,,,, boht saari daad,,sada khush raho
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youn hi deewangi ki had tak mera shouq e intzaar nehin
woh hazaron mein mujassim hai, dil youn hi os ka griftaar nehin

Ab koi aye to kehna key musafir to geya
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Bohat shukria Imama dear
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Aap Ki Likhi Yeh Tehreer Parhtay Huway Mairay Ird Gird Zara Kay Dukh Nay Hisaar Khainchay Rakha...Hamaray Moaashray Mai'n Aik Nahi Bouhat Si Zaraei'n Mowjood Hai'n Jo Rishtay Owr Majbooria'n Nibhatay Nibhatay Duniya Say Rukhsat Ho Jati Hai'n...

Kanwal Ji Aap Ki Aik Owr Qabil-e-Tareef Tehreer...Allah Aap Ko Bouhat Khush Rakhay...
Haya sweto....
aap ne meray likhay ko ehsas ki ankh se parha
ye meray liye bohat khushi ki baat hai....Allah aap
ko bhi har khushi se nawazay...[Aamin]
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welldone....bohat acha novel hay...isi tarah likhti rahain
well come..
aur bohat shukria...mera likha hoa parhnay ka...
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aaj boht arsay kay baad hg pr aana huwa,,wc say apni khas dil lagi hay,,nazmiya nasar nigar kanwal ji ko daikha to lapak kr parha,,, kanwal boht hi acha likha hay,,tumharay fiqray boht jandaar hotay hain,,kahani bhi achi buni hay,,kahani say ziyada tumharay istaaray mujhay boht mutaasir krtay hain,,aik cheez nay or conkaya, wo hay ``ki bajaaiy`` ka istamal,,wrna hamaray haan ``kay bajaaiy `` likha jata hay jo kay zyada drust nahi hay... main soch raha hon kay wc kay liye imla kay hawalay say aik tutorial likhon,,q kay urdu imla say yehan boht kam waqfiyet hay..kuch meri bhi islah hojaiy gi,,
aik kaam yaab afsana tha kanwal,,kuch tanqeed ki gunjaaish bhi hay,,magr itnay din baad tumhari koi tahreer parhi hay or aatay hi tanqeed? mazay ki baat nahi,,,, boht saari daad,,sada khush raho
Saahir sahib....aap ne meray likhay ko parha
aur tameeri tanqeed to zarori thi magr aap ne nahin ki
jabkeh aap jasay shandaar likhnay walon....ki tanqeed
hm jaisay..alfaz jornay walon k liye zarori hai...umed hai aap
mujhay guide zaror karain gay...aur hosla afzai to kher aap hamesha he
khulay dil se kartay hain...bohat khush rahin aabad rahin....{Aamin]
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Old 02-11-2008, 12:54 PM
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