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This is a discussion on Ab koi aay to kehna..k ..musafir to gia..!!! within the Urdu Writer's Club forums, part of the Urdu Adab category; Aap Ki Likhi Yeh Tehreer Parhtay Huway Mairay Ird Gird Zara Kay Dukh Nay Hisaar Khainchay Rakha...Hamaray Moaashray Mai'n Aik ...
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| Aap Ki Likhi Yeh Tehreer Parhtay Huway Mairay Ird Gird Zara Kay Dukh Nay Hisaar Khainchay Rakha...Hamaray Moaashray Mai'n Aik Nahi Bouhat Si Zaraei'n Mowjood Hai'n Jo Rishtay Owr Majbooria'n Nibhatay Nibhatay Duniya Say Rukhsat Ho Jati Hai'n... Kanwal Ji Aap Ki Aik Owr Qabil-e-Tareef Tehreer...Allah Aap Ko Bouhat Khush Rakhay... ![]()
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#22
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| welldone....bohat acha novel hay...isi tarah likhti rahain |
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#23
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aik kaam yaab afsana tha kanwal,,kuch tanqeed ki gunjaaish bhi hay,,magr itnay din baad tumhari koi tahreer parhi hay or aatay hi tanqeed? mazay ki baat nahi,,,, boht saari daad,,sada khush raho |
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#25
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![]() aap ne meray likhay ko ehsas ki ankh se parha ye meray liye bohat khushi ki baat hai....Allah aap ko bhi har khushi se nawazay...[Aamin] |
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#26
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| well come.. ![]() aur bohat shukria...mera likha hoa parhnay ka... ![]() |
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#27
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aur tameeri tanqeed to zarori thi magr aap ne nahin ki jabkeh aap jasay shandaar likhnay walon....ki tanqeed hm jaisay..alfaz jornay walon k liye zarori hai...umed hai aap mujhay guide zaror karain gay...aur hosla afzai to kher aap hamesha he khulay dil se kartay hain...bohat khush rahin aabad rahin....{Aamin] |
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