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RulesThis is a discussion on ~** ...Aadhoori Baatain... **~ within the Urdu Writer's Club forums, part of the Urdu Adab category; Battain kab say dil mein sisak rahi hain.. sulag rahi hain.. rakh tallay dabi hoi hain.. bay'chani kar rahi hain.. ...
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#1
08-15-2004, 11:16 PM
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Battain kab say dil mein sisak rahi hain.. sulag rahi hain.. rakh tallay dabi hoi hain.. bay'chani kar rahi hain.. uss qatra e aab ke battain.. jo beh kay nahi diya.. jo hawa bhi howa nahi hai.. ruka howa hai.. laraz raha hai.. yeah koun hai jo nazar mein hai aur bikhar raha hai.. chahoon samait loon... bikhaira para hoon mein apnay wajood mein.. chun raha hoon motiyoon ko.. woh tairi yaadain sari.. woh uss kursi pay baithi tum aaj bhi keh rahi hoo.. bhool jaoo gai kaya mujh ko.. kaya baat na karoo gai mujh say.. iltaja hai kitni lehjay mein tumharay.. samait loon kaya bahoon mein apni.. kahaan khoo gai hoo.. kiyon mujh say youn badal gai hoo.. gunah maira bata tu daiteen.. mein jaal tu jata .. rakh tu hoota.. na zindagi youn sisakti rehti.. yeah nami see jo sar e shaam he utar hai aati... yeah beh tu jaati.. dil ko mairay qaraar tu aata.. mein khud ko koi saza tu daita.. iss aas ka daman choot he jata.. tairayy aanay ka gumaan har ahat say nikal tu aata.. mar hee jata.. mein bain karta.. tumhain roo hee layta.. sabar tu aata.. mein soo tu jaata..!!
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08-15-2004, 11:48 PM
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wahhhhhhhhhh nicely written,,,,,,,,,,,,, @};- /clap5 @};-
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08-16-2004, 12:47 AM
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beautiful @};-
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08-16-2004, 01:09 AM
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..hmmm..superbbbbbbb b buhat ummda @};-
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08-16-2004, 05:38 AM
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hmmmm,,,,,,,,,buhat khubsurat tehreer........dil ki gehrayun sey nikli hoii batein itni hi khubsurat huwa kerti hein.............. khush rahein @};-
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#7
08-16-2004, 07:30 AM
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Salamz Banjara jee..... kafi arsay baad apki tehreer aai.... bohot hi umdaah likha hai... bohot hi khosboorat batein.. @};- khush rahein hameesha.....ameen @};-
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#8
08-16-2004, 08:53 PM
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salamzz, aap sab parhnay waloon ka bohat shukriya sarhanay ka aur parhnay ka, aaina na anay ke wajaah likhi hai issi tehreer mein parha nahi shaid aap nay 1.gif ")1") |
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08-16-2004, 08:56 PM
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~** ...Aadhoori Baatain... **~ 
