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Old 10-19-2004, 06:38 AM
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acha likha hai apne.....

aub kiya karein ke aisa aksar hota hai..... ap jo nahi chahte woh apke sath ho jata hai... @};-

khush raheye.......
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Old 10-19-2004, 09:05 AM
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/welcome1 to HG and writers /rose

acha likha hai aap nai /rose

lekin ye jo dil hai na ye nahi samajhta ye sirf apni hi baat manta hai apni hi rawish par chalta hai

khush rahiyai
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mera qasoor keeya haiii,

ya awaz kitna hee dinhoo sa muja tang kar rahii theee, roz raat ya awaz sun kaa mein dar jata, qabara jata ya awaz kiss kee haiii.

ekk raat nayat hasta halat mein khun kaa ekk qatra muja dekhaii deeya, uss kee waja bata rahii , khabi ya bohat peeyara hoo ga, bohat hansta khailata hoo gaa, ya haii koun?

mein dil hooon, tumhara dil

abb ya dard muj sa bardast nahi hotaa, mein apni purani zindgi yaad kar kar kaaa rota hooon, abbb meri halat dekhoo

mera qasoor keeya haii, ya hee kaa kissi ka dekhana sa mein taiz darka thaa, kissi kee batyia sunana saa muja bara chain naseeb hota thaa

meri iss galtii kee muja itna saza mat doo, agar uss ko bholana hee tha too iss dil mein itna peeyar koin rakaha usss ka leeya, mera zara zara koo uss kee adat koin daleee, muja uss ka naam paa dharanaka ke adat koin daliii


abb keeya karoon mein iss dil

kaha sa laoon usaaa
dil hai k manta nahi /udaas

yeh dil hi aisee cheez hai s

bahout acha likha hai @};-

likhtay rahiay aur share kertay rahiay :flower
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acha likha hai apne.....

aub kiya karein ke aisa aksar hota hai..... ap jo nahi chahte woh apke sath ho jata hai... @};-

khush raheye.......
sayad issi ka naame zindghii hai

thzzz
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dil hai k manta nahi /udaas

yeh dil hi aisee cheez hai s

bahout acha likha hai @};-

likhtay rahiay aur share kertay rahiay :flower
than you


ya i will
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/welcome1 to HG and writers /rose

acha likha hai aap nai /rose

lekin ye jo dil hai na ye nahi samajhta ye sirf apni hi baat manta hai apni hi rawish par chalta hai

khush rahiyai
thz for welcoming


han yaa bee haii
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Old 10-20-2004, 10:15 AM
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thz for welcoming


han yaa bee haii

khush rahiyai and keep sharing
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khush rahiyai and keep sharing
ara mein bohat khush hoon


Allah ure khush kara ameen app ko bee
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Old 10-20-2004, 05:43 PM
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