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Old 11-24-2007, 02:16 PM
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Default Re: Raye Shumari Baraye Muqabila Maah-e-Nov:2007

main ney jab yeh mozo muqabiley k liye dia tha to andaza nahi tha k itni munfarid aur khoobsurat tehreerain samney aayengi...mujhey bohat khushi hoi yeh dekh k hamarey writers bohat hi hasas andaz main apney gird o paish ko qalam zad kar saktey hain....mujhey teenon hi tehreerain bohat achi lageen...
rules k mutabiq marking meri taraf sey youn hey

Tehreer # 1... (Aansu) Seen-Noon-Neha
Neha ji aap ki aamad writers main bohat achi lagi umeed hey aap aayenda bhi hamarey sath apney khoobsurat khayalat O ahsasat ko share karti rahaingi...aapki tehreer main aansoun ko mukhtalif zaviyon sey paish kia gaya...bohat achi lagi aapki tehreer

Khayal Ki Infiradiyat...4 / 3

Nasr aur Bayaniya...3 /3

Kahani / Mazmoon...3 / 2


Tehreer # 2... (Bint-e-Ayen) Sameera
Sameera ji umeed o na umeedi k beech likhi gayi aapki yeh tehreer istea'ron ki zaban liye hameysha ki tarah khoob rahi...
Khayal Ki Infiradiyat... 4 / 3

Nasr aur Bayaniya... 3 / 3

Kahani/Mazmoon... 3 / 3

Tehreer # 3... (Faqat Mairi Talab Aansu Hi Tehray Hai'n) Kanwal Hussain

Kanwal aapki tehreer bohat mature andaz main aik wazeh paigham liye hoye bohat pasand aayi...

Khayal Ki Infiradiyat...4 / 3.5

Nasr aur Bayaniya... 3 / 3

Kahani / Mazmoon... 3 / 3
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Last edited by Kanwal; 11-24-2007 at 02:21 PM.