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 Re: Raye Shumari Baraye Muqabila Maah-e-Nov:2007 | |
 Mujhay Dili Khushi Hay Kay HG Mai'n Masha Allah Umda Writers Ki Kami Nahi Hay...Is Martaba Jo 3 Tehreerai'n Competition Mai'n Paish Ki Gai Hai'n Woh Apni Apni Jagha Pehlay Number Ki Hi Mustahiq Hai'n...Aap Teeno'n Hi Mubarakbaad Qubool Kijiye...
Tehreer # 1... (Aansu) Seen-Noon-Néha Sahiba
Aap Ka Likha Mai'n Nay Ghaliban Pehli Martaba Parha Hay Owr Pehli Martaba Hi Bouhat Mutasir Hui Hoo'n...Aap Ka Andaaz-e-Tehreer Bila Shak.O.Shubha Bouhat Manjha Huwa Andaz Rakhti Hay...Umeed Hay Kay Yeh Silsila Aap Isi Showq.o.Lagan Say Jari Rakhai'n Gi...Allah Aap Ko Mazeed Kamiyabi Naseeb Karay... ...
Khayal Ki Infiradiyat...4 / 3
Nasr Owr Bayaniya...3 /3
Kahani / Mazmoon...3 / 2.5
Total... 10 / 8.5
Tehreer # 2... (Bint-e-Aen) Sameera Sahiba
Aap Nay Is Gulabi Gulabi Khoobsurat Tehreer Ka Jis Tarha Rukh Mora Hay Woh Qabil-e-Tareef Hay...Aap Nay Na Umeedi Kay Beech Azm.o.Himmat Ki Jo Tasweer Dikhanay Ki Koshish Ki Hay Woh Mutasir Kun Hay...Aap Ki Yeh Tehreer Bila Shubha Bouhat Khoobsurat Tehreer Hay...Likhti Rahiye Owr Bouhat Khush Rahiye...
Khayal Ki Infiradiyat... 4 / 3.5
Nasr Owr Bayaniya... 3 / 3
Kahani Owr Mazmoon... 3 / 3
Total... 10 / 9.5
Tehreer # 3... (Faqat Mairi Talab Aansu Hi Tehray Hai'n) Kanwal Hussain Sahiba
Kanwal Ji Aap Ki Yeh Tehreer Bhi Dil Ko Choo Lainay Mai'n Kamiyaab Rahi Hay...Tehreer Ki Munasibat Say Anjaam Pazeer Hoti Yeh Tehreer Qaari Ko Kaai Paighaam Dainay Mai'n Kamiyaab Rahi Hay... Isi Tarha Umda Tehreero'n Say Ham Ko Nawazti Rahiye Owr Bouhat Khush Rahiye...
Khayal Ki Infiradiyat...4 / 3.5
Nasr Owr Bayaniya... 3 / 3
Kahani / Mazmoon... 3 / 3
Total... 10 / 9.5
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