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Old 11-10-2007, 07:05 AM
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Default Re: پرواز- ماں پرندے کیوں اُڑتے ہیں

salam!
tafseer bhae kiya kahnay hain aap kay..acha afasana likha hay...lagta hay saqoot e dhaka kay pasmanzar main likha hay aap nay ....main nay mahsoos kiya hay kay aap nay is moozo ko boht mahtaat ho kay likha hay..laikin phir bhi aik do satrain aisi likhi gaeen hain jin ka matabadil kuch or hona chahiye tha,,kyon kay is forum pr khawateeb bhi hoti hain jin main say aksar adbi taqazon say aashna nahi hoteen

boht acha likhtay hain aap..likhtay rahain ji,,,acha afsana nigar hay aap kay pas...boht si daad
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