Salam...

Hum nay donoN tehreereiN baghour parhi heiN... ... donoN likhariyoN ko buhat buhat mubarakbaad k jin k qalam nay hamesha ki tarhaaN iss muqablay meiN bhi apnay joher dikhaye...

ab marking

1. Kanwal Hussein
Buhat achi tehreer hay.. alfaz ka ista'mal buhat acha hay... laikin kahin kahin ghair zuroori tafseel ya tawalat mehsoos hoti hay... ba haisiyat-i-majmoyee aik buhat achi tehreer hay..

aap k marks hein

khayaal ki infiradiyat: 2.5
mazmoon se insaf: 3
Nasr aur bayan: 3

Total: 8.5

2. Haya n

buhat mazaydaar khat hay... .. parh ker buhat maza aya... halka phulka mazah liye huway ye khat waqai aik buhat achi kawish hay... mubarakbaad qabool kijiye...

meiN pehli barish wali hi baat karooNga kay darmiyan mein andaz-i-bayaaN kuch aisa ho jata hay k lagta nahin k khat parha ja raha hay....

marks
khayaal ki infiradiyat: 2
mazmoon se insaf: 2.5
Nasr aur bayan: 3
total: 7.5

Best of luck janab..

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