~kanwal hussain~ Afsana likhna aik bohat mushkil kaam hai. kanwal is afsanay k likhnay main ye mushkil marhala boht aasani say tay krti nazar aae hain, baaz jaga jumly boht hi khobsorat our mukhtalif likhnay ki koshsish bhi krti nazar aae hain. bahat khub 
marks
khiyal ki infaradiyat =4\3
kahani\mazmon\mozo say insaaf =3\3
nasar or bayaniya =3\3
Total =10\9
~haya ji~ aik khobsorat afsanwi khat, is khat main haya ji apnay makhsoos andaz main nazar aaee hain, ibtada main to ye khat lagta hai laikin darmiyan main ye ahsaas kaheen gum hojata hai k ham khat parh rahay hain, anjaam per phir achanak pata chalta hai k ye khat hai. main samjhti hon k ye is tahreer ka kamzor pahlo hai. tahreer mukammal toar per khat k pairaaiy main nahi hai, albaatta eid k mozo say acha insaaf kiya hai, nasar bhi achi hai marks
khiyal ki infaradiyat =4\2
kahani\mazmon\mozo say insaaf =3\2.5
nasar or bayaniya =3\2.5
Total =10\7