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 Re: Raye shumari baraye muqabila maah-e-August 2007 | |
YE munsifi bayhad mushkil kaam hay,,tamam tahreerain bila mubalgh boht hi achi theen...meray mutabiq kuch yoon tarteeb hay TAHREER #1
irfan nay boht acha likha,,nasar or bayaniya bhi bayhad pukhta tha,,mazmon nigari kay tamam pahlo kaamil thay..albatta khiyal ki infradiyet main kuch kami rahi
Khayal Ki Infiradiyat: 4/2
Nasr Owr Bayania : 3/3
Kahani / Mazmoon :3/3
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10/8
TAHREER #2
khuram sahb nay bhi boht hi bahtreen likha,,,nasar or bayanaya lajawab tha,,,mazmon to itna pukhta hay kay 3 marks bhi kam hain,,agar yehan mazmon kay marks 3 say ziyada hotay to wo tamam miltay,,khiyal ki infradiyet in ki irfan say mumaslat rakhti hay,,to munfarid na rahi
Khayal Ki Infiradiyat: 4/2.5
Nasr Owr Bayania : 3/3
Kahani / Mazmoon :3/3
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10/8.5
TAHREER #3
handsome nay boht khobsorti say kahani or mazmon ko yekja krkay likha hay..nasar or bayanya..kahani ki bunat pykhta thi..laikin in kay haan bhi khiyal ki infradiyet kuch kami ka shikar rahi,,,khiyal e no nahi tha,,marks ka jo formula hay marks usi kay mutabiq hi diye jasaktay hain
Khayal Ki Infiradiyat: 4/2
Nasr Owr Bayania : 3/3
Kahani / Mazmoon :3/3
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10/8
TAHREER #4
jimmi sahb nay bhi umda likha,,lafzon ka chunao kaheen kaheen boht acha raha,,,in kay haan bhi khiyal ki infradiyet tawajja talab rahi,,apnay sabiqa muqabila kunindgaan ki tarha ye bhi pakistan ki azadi say shikwa kuna rahay,,jis ki bina pr in ka khiyal bhi munfarid nahi kahlaya jaskta
Khayal Ki Infiradiyat: 4/1
Nasr Owr Bayania : 3/2
Kahani / Mazmoon :3/3
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10/6
TAHREER #5
dua e sahr nay bhi boht mahnat say likha,,,boht achay jazbaat hain,,,inhon nay bhi khiyal ki infradiyet pr tawajj nahi di,,,sabqa tahreeron ki tarha in kay haan bhi azadi say shikwa darj hay
Khayal Ki Infiradiyat: 4/1
Nasr Owr Bayania : 3/2
Kahani / Mazmoon :3/3
__________
10/6
TAHREER#6
sameera nay boht acha likha,,inhon nay khiyal ki infradiyet main boht mahnat ki ..or mera khiyal hay kay apnay sabiqa tamam muqabila kunindgan say mukhtalif khiyal paish kiya,,or apna sar rakhnay main kamyab bhi nazar aaee hain..kahani or nasar wa bayaniya bhi umda tha
Khayal Ki Infiradiyat: 4/3.5
Nasr Owr Bayania : 3/3
Kahani / Mazmoon :3/3
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10/9.5
Last edited by saahir; 08-23-2007 at 10:22 AM.
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