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Originally Posted by junkifunki  Salam:
It's a nice story mate...really interesting Aaski....seems that the squirrel's idea is taken from 'Alice in wonderland'  ...but man it's really awesome ......especially the last para, the sad effect you tried to creat....just awesome......you have really a good sense of writing and sketching an story's plot...why not you start writing stories professionally...... truly speaking I could not get any idea from that one 'Phir bahar aai hay', because I could not get it, but the last one ('net beeti') and this one are really superb and interesting....I congratulate you that you have made a successful attempt to maintain a reader's interest till the end of story and that's all what a successful story needs.... Keep on writing like this...
Chao.. | So in "Alice in Wonderland"....was Alice the squirrel.... .. . Hahha....mizaah yaar...kiddin'... Nahin yaar...pata nahin bus mujhe squirell hi zayadah suit ker rehi thi wahan...so daal diya jungle main... Thank you very much....passand kerne ka bohot shukriya...main filhaal amatuar hi bun jaon buri baat hai....professional ka tag khair abhi bohot dooooor hai....dekhain ge... Thanks again... Adios.
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