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Old 06-27-2007, 02:54 PM
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Default Re: ''Ab Lowt Aao ''

haya kahani boht ghoar se parhni pari thi

boht achi kahani buni hay,,or sana kay kirdaar nay jo nafsiyati taskeen ka zarya banaya saat din ki chat ka wo bilkul english story style tha,,or boht hi khoob raha,,,,

kahani boht umda thi,,balkay boht hi umda,,koshish kiya karain kay inpage pr paish karain,,q kay haya alfaz apni shakl o soorat ka bhi taassur rakhtay hain,,,
bilaal ka kirdaar jis tarha kahani main aaya hay us se thora sa or insaaf hojata to maza hi aajata,,,haya sachi baat hay main nay aapki nasar main boht tabdeeli or pukhta pan mahsoos kiya hay,,,,jo pahlay se boht ziyada hay,,,,mujhay ye kahani boht hi ziyada pasand aai hay,,iski jitni tareef karon wo kam hay,,boht sari daad haya ji kay liye,yoonhi piyara piyara likhti rahain ji,,
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