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Originally Posted by WanderingThoughts  As-salam-o-alaikum Sameera Sahiba!
aj pehli bar WC meiN post kr raha huN, aap ka afsana kuch din pehly paRha tha... aur is terheer me chupy ehsaas aur paighaam se bohat mutasir hua...
is afsany k aakhri hisy k hawaly se aik bat zehn meiN thi, pehly to khud kaafi ghor kiya, lekin ab bat samajh se bahar hy to yahaN dostoN se ye bat discuss krna chahuN ga k shayad koi meri bat samajh saky, ya mujhy samjha saky...
afsany ki aakhri 2 satreN harf ba harf roman meiN type kr raha huN: "mai ne doctors ki taraf dekha aur phir wo lamha meri zindgi meiN aaya jab mujhy pehli martaba doctor hony pr fakhr mehsoos hua. aansu maseeha sabit hu'ay thy."
mujhy is sary afsany k tanazur meiN in aakhri satroN k likhny ki samajh nahi aa'ei... k writer ne ye kis bunyad pr likha k "aansu maseeha sabit hu'ay thy." aur wo is fiqry se kya paigham dena chahta hy... ya k ye fiqra kis janib ishara krta hy...
ager koi dost is confusion ko dur kry to maiN mamnun huN ga... | wsalam faizan ye meray liye bayhad khushi ki baat hai k aap nay pehli martaba wc main shirkat ki or wo bhi meri tahreer per tabsara kiya , jo nukta aap nay uthaya hai us se bhi mujhya boht khushi hoi kay tum nay isay itni tawajja se parha , albatta jo aitraaz tum nay uthaya hay wo samajh main nahi aaya  kahani aik doctor ki hai, jis kay andar kuch krnay ka jazba mojood hai, main ney ye batanay ki koshish ki hai k us kay andar jo maseehai krnay ka jazba tha wo adhoora honay ki waja se usay khud beemar kiye day raha tha or jab wo orat mar gae to uska adhora jazba mazeed tishna hogaya, aik aisay wqt main jab us orat ki laash lawaris pari hoi thi to uski mayyet per ronay k bajaaiy khush honay walay mojood thay, to doctor aisha ki aankh se bahnay walay aanso dono k liye maseeha saabit hoaiy..doctor k tishna jazbay k liye bhi or us orat ki mayyet kay liye bhi jo lawaris laash ki sorat main pari thi, bahar haal ye aik nazarya hai jis per aap ikhtilaaf kr saktay hain, darasal tumhara sawal maseehai say mutalliq hay,,or main samjhti hon kay kam az kam aik shair ko ye baat zaroor maloom honi chahiye kay maseehai sirf dawa se shifa ka naam nahi hai, maseehai to aik meetha boal bhi hosakti hai, kisi ki muskaraht bhi maseehai hosakti hay, kisi bichray ka mil jana bhi maseehae hosakti hay, maseehai ki tareef kam az kam shair ko zaroor maloom honi chahiye, itni achi tarha mera afsana parhnay ka boht boht shukria, mujhay bay panah khushi mahsoos hoi (flowers) |