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Old 06-12-2007, 07:29 AM
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Originally Posted by SAGARKHAN View Post
aakhir kii 2 lines sey ooper kii 2 line bhee doobara parh leyn too mujhey qawi ummedd hey key aap saara kuch samjh jaeyn gey aur koi confusion naheyn rahey gii@};-
sagar bhai aap in do lines ki bat kr rahy haiN???

"mai dhaaReN mar mar kr ro rahi thi aur doctors mujhy aisy dekh rahy thy jesy mein be-waqoof aur ahmaq huN, un ki tarahum aamaiz nazreN mery ander pu-sukoon hony waly maseeha'ei k darya ko nahi dekh sakti thiN..."

yahaN tak to maiN thek se samajh jata huN, k us doctor ka maseeha'ei ka darya pur-sukoon ho gya... is bat pr, k bhaly wo us laRki ki jab nahi bacha saki, lekin usy la-waris marny nahi diya, abhi tak sara afsana is patient k gird ghom raha hy, aur aakhir meiN us doctor ka may'yat pr rona us k maseeha'ei k darya k pur-skoon hony ka baa'is bana.

lekin agli do satroN meiN jo kaha ja raha hy k:

"mai ne doctors ki taraf dekha aur phir wo lamha meri zindgi meiN aaya jab mujhy pehli martaba doctor hony pr fakhr mehsoos hua. aansu maseeha sabit hu'ay thy."

ye line : "aansu maseeha sabit hu'ay thy." us surat meiN likhi jati ager us doctor k rony se patient dobara zinda ho jata...

bas mujhy yahiN se aa kr samajh nahi aati k writer ne aakhir meiN ye do lines kyuN likhiN...
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