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Old 06-09-2007, 12:34 PM
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Default Re: ~MasiHaai~

As-salam-o-alaikum Sameera Sahiba!

aj pehli bar WC meiN post kr raha huN, aap ka afsana kuch din pehly paRha tha... aur is terheer me chupy ehsaas aur paighaam se bohat mutasir hua...

is afsany k aakhri hisy k hawaly se aik bat zehn meiN thi, pehly to khud kaafi ghor kiya, lekin ab bat samajh se bahar hy to yahaN dostoN se ye bat discuss krna chahuN ga k shayad koi meri bat samajh saky, ya mujhy samjha saky...

afsany ki aakhri 2 satreN harf ba harf roman meiN type kr raha huN:

"mai ne doctors ki taraf dekha aur phir wo lamha meri zindgi meiN aaya jab mujhy pehli martaba doctor hony pr fakhr mehsoos hua. aansu maseeha sabit hu'ay thy."

mujhy is sary afsany k tanazur meiN in aakhri satroN k likhny ki samajh nahi aa'ei... k writer ne ye kis bunyad pr likha k "aansu maseeha sabit hu'ay thy." aur wo is fiqry se kya paigham dena chahta hy... ya k ye fiqra kis janib ishara krta hy...

ager koi dost is confusion ko dur kry to maiN mamnun huN ga...
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