Thread: Kirchiyo'n Say Kasheed Kartay Hai'n Khushiya'n
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Old 01-24-2007, 02:15 PM
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Saahir Ji Mujhay Tanqeed Zara Bhi Buri Nahi Lagti..Tanqeed Bara-e-Islah Nahi Ki Jaey Gi To Seekhnay Ka Amal Hi Ruk Jaey Ga...

(Laikin Mai'n Bhala Kaisay Jaati Kay Mairay Sar Par To Abba Ka Thanda Larazta Huwa Haath Dhara Tha Owr Un Ka Woh Toot'ta Laihja Mairay Kano'n Mai'n Goonjta Rehta Tha '' Bitya! Maira Sar Na Jhukana '' )

Saahir Ji Yeh Alfaaz Rija Nay Apnay Aap Say Ada Kiye Hai'n...Ibtidai Page Par Hi Is Ki Wazahat Hay Kay Zindagi Bhar Rija Kay Sar Par Us Kay Abba Ka Haath Dhara Raha Owr Woh Laihja Goonjta Raha Woh Alfaaz Goonjtay Rahay...Woh Wapas Amma'n Kay Paas Jaanay Ki Himmat Na Kar Saki...

Saahir Ji Insha Allah Baaqi Bhi Likhoo'n Gi Aaj Kal Bas Time Ki Kami Ka Shikaar Hoo'n..Aesa Hargiz Bhi Na Sochiye Ga Kay Mai'n Tanqeed Pasand Nahi Karti Ya Na'Gawaar Guzri Hay..Aesa Zara Bhi Nahi Hay...Bal'Kay Mai'n To Bouhat Khush Hoo'n Kay Aap Read Kar Rahay Hai'n......
haya ab main tumhain kesay samjhaon:( jab rija ka baap mer chuka hay to wo ye alfaaz nahi kah sakti,,yehan kahani main jhoal hay,,boht bara jhool hay..kahani ajeeb lagrahi in lins ko plz dobara likho,,neechay waali line phir say perho


Mai'n Bhala Waha'n Ja Kar Apnay Bad'Naseeb Marhoom Baap Ko Yeh Taana Kis Tarha Dil'Wati Kay BaitiTalaaq Lay Kar Waapas Aa Gai Hay...Amma'n Ko Kaisay Batati Kay Un Ki Nazo'n Ki Pali Baiti Par Aik Aik Pal Kis Tarha Beeta..Mairi Baiwa Amma'n Aik Owr Sadma Kis Tarha Saihtee'n...
jab baap mar chuka hay to rija tana kis ko dilwa rahi hay?isi terha or bhi jaga jhool hain ,,,,tum pehlay is jaga say kahani ko theek kero
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