Thread: Kirchiyo'n Say Kasheed Kartay Hai'n Khushiya'n
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Old 01-24-2007, 01:05 PM
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Saahir Ji Aap Ki Baat Say Mujhay Ittifaaq Is Liye nahi Kiyu'n Kay Aap Nay Kahani Sahi Say Nahi Parhi...Abba Owr Baba Do Mukhtalif Shakhsiyat Hai'n...Rija Ki Shaadi Jin Halaat Mai'n Hui Thi Us Waqt Rija Kay Abba Beemar Thay Un Ko Diqq Jaisa Maraz Ho Gaya Tha Laikin Us Waqt Woh Hayaat Thay...
Rija Firasat Kay Saath Pakistan Chali Aai Thi...Baba Firasat Kay Waalid Hai'n Owr Woh Bhi Zinda Hai'n...
Rija Ko Pakistan Mai'n Apnay Abba Ki Wafaat Ka Pata Chala Hay...

Mai'n Nahi Bal'Kay Aap Ghowr Say Kahani Nahi Parh Rahay (hehe)
Jin Ghaltiyo'n Ko Aap Nay Bayaan Kiya Hay Woh Mujh Say Sar'Zad Nahi Hui Hai'n...Albatta Yeh Zaroor Hay Kay Mai'n Kahani Ya Afsaana Likhnay Ki Bareekiyo'n Say Poori Tarha Waaqif Nahi...
well haya,,,,haya main baghor afsana perha hy or jabhi ye likha hy,,,,laikin shayed aap nay mera reply ghor say nahi perha hay,,,,,aap nay rija k baap ko jab maar diya tha to phir ye kyon likha hay

Laikin Mai'n Bhala Kaisay Jaati Kay Mairay Sar Par To Abba Ka Thanda Larazta Huwa Haath Dhara Tha Owr Un Ka Woh Toot'ta Laihja Mairay Kano'n Mai'n Goonjta Rehta Tha '' Bitya! Maira Sar Na Jhukana ''

Mai'n Bhala Waha'n Ja Kar Apnay Bad'Naseeb Marhoom Baap Ko Yeh Taana Kis Tarha Dil'Wati Kay BaitiTalaaq Lay Kar Waapas Aa Gai Hay...Amma'n Ko Kaisay Batati Kay Un Ki Nazo'n Ki Pali Baiti Par Aik Aik Pal Kis Tarha Beeta..Mairi Baiwa Amma'n Aik Owr Sadma Kis Tarha Saihtee'n...
haya agar aap ko ye tanqeed buri lagi to very sorry,,,,laikin aap plz ye baat na kahain k main ny ye afsana nahi perha hy,,,,,boht juzyaat k saath perha hay hy or kahani ko pasand bhi kiya hy,,,haya ye likhna boht aasaan baat hy k aap ka afsana perha or boht acha laga or boht saari daad
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