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Originally Posted by Inam mein mahzarat chahata hon agar aap ne aesa mehsoos kia, chunke mazmoon mein yaahi aik kamzoorii thii, aor mere kheyal mein is ki taraf ishara kerna bhi bohat zaruri tha is leye baat zara taveel ho gaye. |
aray aray Sir GGG maazrat kyooN
maiN nay ye baat is liye hi likhhi thi kay aap ki baat waqee zara tawwel ho gai thi isi bais ham ye samjhay kay aap nay zara zyada hi feel kya hay isay
or aap nay ye baat keh kar kay mazmoon maiN yehi aik kami thi hamara dil buhuuuuuuuuuuuuut baRa kar dya yani is ka matlab ye hua kay baqi mazmoon thooRa achha hi tha
aainda bhi yooNhi hamari ghaltiyooN ki nishan dahi kartay rahiye ga kyooNkay ghalti ki nishandahi karnay say hi seekhhnay ka muqa milta hay
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samajajh jata hooN lekin dair say maiN daa'o-pej uskay
woh baazi jeet jata hay meray chaalak honay tak