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Originally Posted by Aas Well usually, we don't really rely on some specific words or even sentences from the material itself, when it comes to justify the content of some composition...i was just trying to narrate my views on the bottom line of this composition...like.. .your last para completely and the last line....which makes the heart of the substance...
Frankly...shayed aap ka khiyal theek ho...maine bhi aik mukhsoos zaviye se hi is tehreer ko approach kiya ho ga...don't blame you for this...if i have convinced you to the extent.....i myself perhaps tend to have almost the same point of view....atleast when it comes to Relationships...
Lekin shayed...yaheen main aik ummeed dekhna chahta tha....ke shayed...rishton ki dhund main juzbaat ki suchi roshni bhi hoti.....lekin...apn e apne experience ki baat hai....am not trying to criticise...or trying to make a point...just being myself... 1.gif ")1") |
Well, infact you yourself answered the question you raised. I am going to quote what you just said.
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Lekin shayed...yaheen main aik ummeed dekhna chahta tha....ke shayed...rishton ki dhund main juzbaat ki suchi roshni bhi hoti.....
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Dhund doesn't mean DARKNESS, In darkness you even can't identify the dhund properly. You can only claim its FOG when there is light. And when I said Dhund I meant exactly the same, I could have use darkness, which I mentioned earlier when I use symbole of darkness of Jungle, but instead I decided you use this word. So I can explain this specific sentence as below:
"Yeh Duniya Gar Ik Manzar Hai, Yeah Rishtay Dhund Ke Sourat Hein"
Means: We were born in this beautiful world full of light by Alllah Tallah, but these relationships are so dear to us sometimes we can't see the real beauty of it, cos we're so attached to our relationships (almost all relationships). Now this FOG/Dhund basically a representation of our own attachment towards our relatives/relationships with other people/things/issues/events. It's never written in context of darkness or in context that this FOG/DHUND eath the light of this life/world.
I hope I made my point clear.
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lekin...apne apne experience ki baat hai....am not trying to criticise...or trying to make a point...just being myself...
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Just to add one line about the above, as you yourself is a writer you should understand that when a writer write something its not what he experienced most of time its what he/she felt or observed. So its not fair to relate everything to writer's personal experience. Hope you understand. I personally take it as an insult when someone claim what i write is what i expereince. It means I have no wisdom, I have no observation and I see nothing. All i do is write what happen. I am not a historian or I am not writing a biography here, I wrote what I feel, what I believe, what I think and what I know, and above all what i belive is right. My writeups are my "I" world, which holds the world of everyone else when they pass by.
Be Blessed.
Wa.Salam