pretty fantastic...afsaana. .lekin...agar end ki 5 lines naa hooteen tu kya baat thee...bilkul hee out of touch yaar...agar dil main kissi ko paanay kee tammana hoo...aur sachi lagan hoo..aur ossko Allah say maanga jaye tu mil jata hai...magar..khair chooro jee...main bhee kiss ko bole rahi hoon....
waisay great job... /
) keep writing...