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This is a discussion on Zarra C Baysakooni Hai ........... Mairi aik Tazza Nazm within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; /aoa Friendz! Bohat dinooN se kuch naya nahin likha tha, pichlay dinooN aik nazm serzadd huee, socha aap dostooN se ...
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#1
04-12-2004, 06:44 AM
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/aoa Friendz! Bohat dinooN se kuch naya nahin likha tha, pichlay dinooN aik nazm serzadd huee, socha aap dostooN se share kerta chalooN. /AH Aatif Zara c bai-sakooni hai @};- Mujhay iss zindagani se koi shikwa nahin laikin Zara c bai-sakooni hai Najanay kyun mairay dil main ajab sa khauf rehta hai bohat c khaas baatain hain jo mujh ko aam lagti hain Mairay dil main unahin sun ker koi toofan nahin uthta Tairi aankhain taira chehra tairi awaz kee rimjhim mujhay ab khawab lagti hai mujhay mehsoos hota hai sunehri titliyun jaisay woh sab khush rang se sapnay mairay lafzooN ke phooloN per bohat din se nahin baithay mujhay mehsoos hota hai sammay ke taiz lehrooN ne hamaray rait ke kachay gharonday torr daalay hain mujhay un taiz lehrooN se sunehri titliiyun jaisay sabhi khush rang sapnooN se koi shikwa nahin laikin zara c baisakooni hai mujhay mehsoos hota hai tumharay dil k derwazay pe mairi yaad ke dastak mairi jaaN ab nahin hoti mairi jaaN ab nahin hota k mairi yaad aai tu tumhari aankh bher aai duain mangtay lamhay mujhay tum bhool jati ho mager phir bhee mujhay tum se koi shikwa nahin laikin zara c baisakooni hai ajab sa khauf hai dil main TUMHAIN MAIN BHOOL JAON GA
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#2
04-12-2004, 07:33 AM
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zara c baisakooni hai ajab sa khauf hai dil main TUMHAIN MAIN BHOOL JAON GA Bohat Khoob Bohat Fluent Khoobsoorat nazam hai Atif bhai As usual 1.gif ")1") an other masterpiece @};- dar ko jitna seenchain utna hi panapta hai so yaqeen hona chaheay Atif Bhai @};- Khush rahain /flowers
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04-12-2004, 08:02 AM
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buhat achay @};- khush raho hamesha
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04-12-2004, 09:34 AM
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salam bohot achi nazm hay Atif ..mashallah ..keep sharing (f) tahir
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04-12-2004, 09:57 AM
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zabar10 hmarey rait k kachey gharondey toor daley hein .... <------- dil ko choloa is baat ney /weldone weldone aatif bhai |
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04-12-2004, 12:55 PM
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Now thats a nazam with flow, very beautiful aatif. Amir |
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04-12-2004, 02:32 PM
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Tairi aankhain taira chehra tairi awaz kee rimjhim mujhay ab khawab lagti hai wahhh wahhh Aatif bhai kamal nazam hey bohat hi rythem hey iss main /weldone theme dil ko choo gai hey @};-
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04-12-2004, 02:43 PM
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/aoa buhut achay aatif bhai!! buhut ache lagi ye nazm bhi... KHush rahyea @};- Nabeel
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#9
04-12-2004, 06:26 PM
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salam! In creativie process quality is always prefferable than quantity .that dictum fits on you. a wonder ful harmonious poem that has bestowed upon you from divinity .as natural as our instincts.just great.keep inspiring begginers like us. Bina Ahmed.
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04-12-2004, 07:04 PM
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hum bhot acha likha he app ni MUJHE IS ZINDAGE SE KOYE SHIKWA NAHI HE (*) |
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