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This is a discussion on Zarra C Baysakooni Hai ........... Mairi aik Tazza Nazm within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Originally Posted by Inam Is Nazm ki Behr?? , merey kheyal mein ye nazm behr sey aazad, yani aazad nazm ...
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#21
04-14-2004, 04:20 AM
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azad nazm kee bhee behr hoti hai, aur voh kisi aik khaas meter/behr meiN reh kar kahi jaati hai. haaN agar nazm kisee meter/behr meiN na ho tau phir voh nasree nazm ho gee, aazaad nazm na ho gee. ab agar aap ye kaheN ke in donoN meiN farq kyaa hai tau ye maiN pehle hi arz kar chuki hooN. shukriya Naheed         |
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#22
04-14-2004, 06:28 AM
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AoA, Kesay ho aap?? Is nazm ki tarif kay liye alfaz dond rahi hon, :-b Awesome wonderfull jesay lafz chotay parh rahay hain is ki tareef main  Aisay lag raha hai jesay har lafz ko zuban mil gae ho aur wo bolnay lagay hon @};- @};- |
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#23
04-14-2004, 06:31 AM
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Sab se pehlay tu nazm kee pasandeedgi ka bayhadd shukriya. Aur jahan takk baat meter kee hai tu iss baaray main mairi maloomaat thori mehdood hain. Ager aap iss baaray main thori maded ker sakain tu nihayaat mashkoor hooN ga. Mairi mehdood elam k mutabiq yeh aik aazad nazm hai. Aur iss meter k baaray main aik post Cafe main chal rahi hai aap ager wahan hamm jaisay nalaiq loggoN ko apnay ilam se mustafeed fermaiN gee tu acha lagay ga, Regards, Aatif
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04-14-2004, 11:32 AM
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Main alhamdilillah theik hooN, aap apni sunain. Nazm kee itni khobsoorat tareef k liya bayhadd mashkoor hooN. Ainda bhee aap kay reply ka muntzir rahooN ga, Aatif
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04-14-2004, 11:59 AM
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Aatif Jee Aadaab, Aap kee nazam saadha lekin waqai mein bauth khoobsoorat hai. Daad qubool keejiye. Nazm peRte howe uss ke pehle tukre ko zara yoon daikNe se mujhe aur behtar laga hai aap bhi daikh leejiye shayeed ke yeh tarteeb aap ke liye qabil-e-qubool ho. VerNa darguzar ker deejiye. Majmoohi taur per aap ka takhaul aur bayaan qabil-e-tehseen hai. Khair Andesh Zahida Raees :Raji: ------------------------ Mujhay iss zindagani se koi bhi shikwa nahin laikin, Najanay kyun mairay dil main Zara c bai-sakooni hai,Zara c be-kali see hai bohat c khaas baatain hain,jo mujh ko aam lagti hain Mairay dil main unahin sun ker koi toofan nahin uthta Tairi aankhain taira chehra,tairi awaz kee rimjhim mujhay sub khawab lagti haiN .... |
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04-14-2004, 02:54 PM
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04-15-2004, 04:53 AM
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Wasalam Subhash! Nazm kee pazeraii k liya bayhadd mashkoor hooN. Constructive criticism kee tu her stage per zarorat rehti hai. Khush Rehaiya aur Apna Khayaal RAkhiya, Aatif
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04-15-2004, 05:11 AM
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I feel really honord to read ur reply. Thanx for the reply, sugesstion and appreciation of my words. Aap kee sugesstion mujhay achi lagi hai. Mager Pehlay misray main "bhi" izafai hai. Baqi tarteeb ne nazm ko mazeed khobsoorat ker diya hai. Thanx for the sugesstion. Aatif
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04-15-2004, 05:35 AM
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/aoa Aapi! Nazm kee pazeraii ka bayhadd shukriya. Aap ka reply hamesh ahee maira dhairoon khoon berha daita hai. Der ko sainchna aur baat hai aur muhabbat main jo der aap hee aap panapta hai ussay kaisay roka ja sakta hai? Khush Rehiya, Aatif
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04-15-2004, 06:03 AM
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