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This is a discussion on Zarra C Baysakooni Hai ........... Mairi aik Tazza Nazm within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; wah aatif kamal ki hay janab khush rahain aur aisay hi achi achi nazmain aur gazlain suna kay hamaay bhee ...
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| wah aatif kamal ki hay janab khush rahain aur aisay hi achi achi nazmain aur gazlain suna kay hamaay bhee khush kartay rahain thiek hay
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#12
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| /aoa Aatif bhai! hhmmmm Nice 1 janaab! bohat khubsurat Poem hai per Roman mainkyoon hai bhaai ji wo kia hai naa, perhnay main uljhan hojaati hai kabhi kabhi /blushsad khair bohat maza aaya perh k,yoonhi likhtay rehyye share kertay rehyye n keeeeeepp ![]() Soft voice |
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#13
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| salam aatif bhai ;;) bauhat hi khubsurat nazam hai ye to.....yun lag raha hai jaisai har lafz bol raha hoo...magar sunain bhai is darr ko nikaal dain dil sai darr kai sang jeena nahi acha /yhug khush rahiyai ![]()
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#14
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#15
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| wahhhhhhhh aatif bhaii joo bhee likhtey heyn bakamal likhtey heyn,,,,,,,, /clap5 @};- /clap5 @};-
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#16
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| salaam Atif bhai !! kya khoob likha hai! aur aap constuctive criticism ki umeed kar rahe hai? kya boloo_N maiN aapko? mairi jaaN ab nahin hota k mairi yaad aai tu tumhari aankh bher aai duain mangtay lamhay mujhay tum bhool jati ho kya baat hai? bohat khub bhai. aise hee likhte rahiye. subhash
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#17
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| salaam bhiya jeee kia kehnay janab bari khoobsoorat nazm sarzad hoi hey wah wah v nice theme bhi bahut nice hey aur andaz-e-bayan bhi ...lajawab ...bahut acha laga perh ker pata nahin naa aisa kyoun hota hey j jazbaat mein pehlay se shidet nahin rehti shayad yahi insaan k lia behter hota hey ?? pata nahin but bahut haqeeqat se qareeb likha hey app nay naaa khush rahiyee hamesha duwon mein yaad rakhiye ga ur sis madiha
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#18
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| Bohat Shukriya Friendz for ur kind replies n appreciation. I 'll come with individual replies sooN. Regards, Aatif
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#19
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| janaab Atif saahab, aap kee nazm paRhne kaa itefaaq huvaa, aur paRhne ke ba'd pasaNd bhee aa'ee. meree taraf se daad haazir hai. agar munaasib ho tau kayaa aap iss nazm kee behr bataa sakte heiN? shukriya Naheed |
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#20
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, merey kheyal mein ye nazm behr sey aazad, yani aazad nazm hey. Keon Aatif Bhae keya kehtey hein aap.
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