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This is a discussion on youN hua faisla nawaly ka within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; as-salam-o-alaikum dosto, do sheir le kr hazir hua huN, bohat maazrat k sath k aap sab dostoN ki itni achi ...
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#1
11-13-2007, 10:26 AM
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as-salam-o-alaikum dosto, do sheir le kr hazir hua huN, bohat maazrat k sath k aap sab dostoN ki itni achi takhleeqaat pr apni masroofiat ki waja se ber-waqt tabsara nahi kr pata, umeed hy aap der guzer kreN gy... shair kuch youN haiN k:  aisy qatry zameeN pe girty thy, jesy khud khooN hua ho bhaaly ka sab hi maary ga'ay laRaaei meiN, youN hua faisla nawaly ka.... aap ki aara ka intzar rahy ga...
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#2
11-13-2007, 10:38 AM
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wa-alikum-salam aisy qatry zameeN pe girty thy, jesy khud khooN hua ho bhaaly ka sab hi maary ga'ay laRaaei meiN, youN hua faisla nawaly ka.... aap jesay shandaar likhnay walon ko parh kar bohat acha lagta hai....aap HG k un shora main se hain jin k likhay ko parhna bohat acha lgat hai aur mazeed ka intazaar shuro ho jata hai umed hai aap ki traf se jald he 2 ashaar ki bajaye aik shandaar si ghazal parhnay ko milay gi......isi trah likhtay rahin khush rahin...meri traf se dher sari dad aap ki nazr qabol kijie... 
__________________  Ab os k baad laga DiL to DiL lagi hogi Hum os pe apni mohabt tamaam kr aaye...!  |
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#3
11-13-2007, 02:27 PM
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wahhhh.. eik baar phir se ye khoobsoorat ashaar sunan'y ko millay.. khushi huee.. beshak.. aap bakamal shayer hein.. daad qabool kijiye.. Nawazish  4 posts ka faasla bakhoobi tey kernay per bhi mubarakbaad qabool kijiye..wafa aur dua ke saath withlove
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11-13-2007, 02:44 PM
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Sab hi maare gaye laRai maiN YuN hua faisla newaalay ka Faizan Bhai, ek baar phir se bohot khoob kalam share kia hai aap ne, khaas kar ke ye shaire to kamaal hai, bohot saari daad hazir hai
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11-13-2007, 03:01 PM
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Wa Alikum Assalam aisy qatry zameeN pe girty thy, jesy khud khooN hua ho bhaaly ka Bohaut He Zabardast Kiya Kehna Hae Kitni Khobsorti Say Alfaz Ko Shahr Ka Rang Diya Hae ... Likhtay Rahain khush Rahain .. Ik PaGla!
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11-13-2007, 07:23 PM
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Bayhadd umdaah Faizaan Khush raho bhaee
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11-13-2007, 08:20 PM
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kia kehnay Faizan bhaiii....bohat bharpoor kaha hai khubsurat baaat!! khush rahyye Soft voice
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11-14-2007, 01:02 AM
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WALAIKUM ASSALAM, pehley ki tarha is bar bhi bey hud khubsoorat khayal aur alfaz hain Bhai... 1.gif ")1") ALLAH karey ilm-e-sukhan aur zyada... Khush raheN humesha
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